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"finespun" poems
1 I’ve seen many goddesses born but none as finespun as you, my Venus: for if existing were an art form, you would be the moon enlightening me in all her silver beadwork and mystique. 2 At night, I see my beloved again and find her body captured by the seafoam: it’s only a reflection, a silver phantasm dancing on the ghastly waves, but I adore the sheen of her face in the sea. 3 I’ve seen many goddesses consumed by the very passion that I feel for your soul: for the moon is only the shadow of her full being, and yet I still drown myself in her light.
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Aug 4, 2022
Aug 4, 2022 at 9:47 AM UTC
Venus (In Three)
well something deeper than the ocean here burns, splits apart and quakes -- we've seen farther than the working men can go--felt the emptiness of a disillusioned life, wondered how the masses buy away their souls, he touches you and you feel not a thing, just the skin beneath his hairline that doesn't glow-- You hear about his sanguine childhood a finespun gossamer thing, stretched across the state of colorado, webbed and spun around tent stakes, campers, drawn into the Four Corners spooled in a Chattanooga coffee mug, dipped in   day old orange juice I have settled into the bottom of his cup, a thick pulp, rind and stem -- terrified that I won't pull through, that this isn't enough that I am too much or too little, haven't been or seen there are no scars on my knees or callouses on my hands when the bears came I had no pots and pans -- I study the sofrito, stir the rice, break open green olives and slide the pimientos onto my tongue -- deftly speaking about shredding chicken, chopping onions, rolling corn tortillas wondering what it is about people about parents, about chile con carne this pan holds 21 like the age, like the game, I think. I am truly terrified.
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Nov 14, 2016
Nov 14, 2016 at 12:35 PM UTC
Obscure, plain, and little.
As the murk in the daedal sky endured and the finespun brume upon the headland peaks wound all around in a helicoid shape, the fluttering winds carried aloft a bouquet of ions that were immured, but still danced about in an undulating figure of eight; and when the distent distant cloud could no longer wait, it's rain fell upon my wilted form so desolate.
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Dec 4, 2014
Dec 4, 2014 at 4:43 PM UTC
Flood of Ruin
Magic breadcrumbs Twinkle like stars Giggling while hiding Tender memoirs Voodoo whispers Finespun intention Vibrating and swaying until Magic has snuck in Enticing while Splicing Singing me along Via my senses To where I belong Daring to be found Anticipating you Suspended exhalation Timeless rendezvous
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Oct 16, 2017
Oct 16, 2017 at 2:18 PM UTC
Enraptured
The fortitude my lungs haul ecstasy Smoke withdrawing In out Nearing my cavity Of cargo So purely finespun Presumable Exodus of genetic vibrancy investing in my annihilation, currency earned inexcusable Nether each eye rest the mass of lost sleep Inside Out Permissibly spun I was sober yesterday But today I am strung
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Oct 17, 2017
Oct 17, 2017 at 2:41 PM UTC
life life lifelife life life
hey, lovesick child with the benevolent heart hey, lovesick child from the pinnacled start oh, how you’ve become such finespun art au revoir, au revoir, to that which lays scars but know each scar that you bear, sets you apart oh, how you’ve become such finespun art be well, bcb
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Apr 29, 2020
Apr 29, 2020 at 12:19 PM UTC
Finespun Art