Lovers friends confidonts lost in the game shattered by the selfish sin when fire meets fire it leaves no room for water starving for attention from each other Result, smothering the bond nature creates why must humans try so hard? the question answering itself love exists only when allowed freely
Please re-read as I will be making changes to this poem over and over
I want to tell you something I am a man who loves changes
Changes of everything
You will see me suggest A change in every retrospect
This morning I was re-reading my own HP site and I was impressed
by my choices and how I ended up With 3 different reposts of "My Fears"
from 3 different poets that I reposted without me knowing
It's amazing how I am amazed of my choices and have read them like as if I am choosing them again
Now hear out my new suggestion To HP and if you do like Please make your voice be heard
It goes as follows:
If you like to relive the poetry and you like to re-read your choices
and you like to reread the poems you chose before once more
and get surprised while reading them as if you did not choose them before
Then, we either need a second love button! Or
we need to automate the love button and every time we reread it knows
and the love gets even stronger and somehow it grows
Another suggestion that hit me in the head while I was re-writing my poem
"The new suggestion is to give a comeback wink to the previous folks who just read my poem and ping them of my new important fix To invite them to re-taste the cake that I just re-cooked
Or the cooking does not get posted Until I feel its real good
and I press the release button Before I let it go like I should
And may be we need to check our poem button with people that we trust
Before we embarrass ourselves badly with a poem that may bust"
The problem with this is honesty That we don't do it for just the fame
So for this I need your opinion to fix my suggestion in playing the game
and make HP an even a better place and enjoy it again and again!
Additional suggestions to HP:
please fix the current suggestions which is still lit even when I fixed my suggested misspellings. .. Call it repair * a suggestion button to HP in the menu * a share with others button that can grow .. You can click and see who I shared it with ... it can also be private * a playback button ... Reads out loud * a favorite button .. Quickly adds it to your favorites * a read later button * by double clicking a word you can ping the poet for a misspelling or a suggestion of a new word or love that word * a unite with another poet button * Go Interactive button .. Others can re-write your poetry! * a challenge button .. Encourage challenge with another poet * a marry me button .. which starts with an enragement ring .. *friends .. siblings and brothers and family button ... they have to accept you as a family member!
Please don't forget to look below for other suggestions from other poets!