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Ryan Holden Jun 2017
https://soundcloud.com/ryancatullusholden/succubus-ryan-holden-rap-vocals-acoustic-rap-beat-by-freebeats
Okay so basically I've been writing lyrics for a few years. But recently, however, I decided I'd try rap and sing I've only been rapping 3 weeks and attempting singing this once for this song! This is one of my first attempts, I recorded it through my earphones and laptop so it's a live version so its rough. I wrote all the lyrics including the chorus. It's really deep, I wanted to keep it poetic though so I hope you all enjoy. Constructive criticism is all I'm looking for at the moment especially being so new. I promised I'd post it!
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
We taste sweet perfume
From freshly mown lawn as we
Roll through pollen trails.

Staining clothes like we
Mark minds with familiar
Scents and surroundings.
Smelt the fresh cut grass and it brought me back!
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
I just don't know what
To do, I'm haunted by the
Whispers of my past.
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
I'm a rocket ship,
Your heart is my only true
Destination point.
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
Tasting your skin
Whilst you scratch my thirst,
A flavour into the uncharted,
Flashing lights on our taste buds
As we fall into one another's worlds,
Our legs intertwine like vines,
Our breaths match simultaneously,
You raise your back like you're
Stretching your senses into my soul,
I separate you into two dimensions
And you still come back
For another whole universe
To explore.
:)
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
Love is a balloon, One tiny
little pin ***** and all of the
Filled love that has been blown,
Will Burst into absolute nothing.
Ryan Holden Jun 2017
If you feel broken
You need to break the force that
Is pinning you down
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