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JaxSpade Nov 2019
Katauta is an unrhymed Japanese form consisting 0f 17 or 19 syllables in a 3 lined poem 5/7/7 or 5/7/5
These were usually lovers poems
Katautas were considered half poems

A pair of Katautas with syllable count 5/7/7
Is called a sedoka

Standing in your glow
In the aura of your smile
Makes me feel love in your light

Or

Embracing your heart
With each pound against my soul
Fills me with your love

Sedoka:
Your rose petal lips
Were so soft and full of love
Kissing me under the stars

Under the half moon
We stood together and stared
In the twilight of our eyes
Examples written by yours truly
Mark Toney Oct 2022
my precious, my love
when will we know that our love
will continue forever?

keep the seedbed moist
sprout, take root, ready to grow …
caring relationships thrive





Mark Toney © 2022

Poetry form: Sedoka - My Sedoka poem is one lover's sincere question, followed by the other lover's discerning answer. The Sedoka is a two-stanza poem, each stanza having three lines, with five syllables on the first line and seven syllables on the second and third lines.
Poetry form: Sedoka - Mark Toney © 2022. All rights reserved.
My dear, hear me out
They may shake you to the ground
But you own arms of a sword.

Strength to just dive in
Enough to rise above all
For every dent you soar high.
The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

A katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7.
LD Goodwin Feb 2017
a longing for you
over took my pen tonight
for your voice was the night wind

and then with closed eyes
and full heart you came to me
your soft touch from miles away
Thank you R for keeping me alive.......

*A Sedoka, pair of Katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives. A Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7.*
Marian Feb 2014
Tonight I'm dreaming
Of your lovely, lonely strings
Crying loud in orchestras

Your sound makes me dance
E'en though I have two left feet
Pedal Harps are so divine

*~Marian~
My first Sedoka!!! :) ~~~~<3
I love music...and I want to be a Musician!!! (: ~~~~<3
But Pedal Harps are so divine, and even though
My parents cannot afford to buy me one
I try my best even though it's hard
To not loose faith that someday I will be
A harpist!!! :) ~~~~~~<3
Please enjoy my first Sedoka
Dedicated to Pedal Harps everywhere!!! (: ~~~~~<3
Diána Bósa Sep 2016
“The scent of your light
envelopes all over and
spirits me away from here.”

“And thus, I go with
you; the sound of your shadow
snatches me in this half light.”
Joel M Frye Mar 2015
open swinging door
oscillates gently in spring's
warm and moist respirations

hyacinth's odor
wafting in through the screen door
on reminiscence of you
Poemasabi Jun 2013
Does a creek rock know
that it has been transported
from there to a distant here
then covered with paint
stationed to guard garden mulch
lest it escape to the lawn?
Dan Hess Aug 2019
My maddening mind
Betwixt mental sorrow
Disintegrating alone

Losing sense of self
Within pangs of delusions
Insufferably searching
LL Aug 22
isn't it lovely
the moon is afire — can I
hold your hand, and stay

though the night is deep
and the moon is alight — please
hold my hand, and stay
LL Aug 24
sun-kissed valley wind
train to Madrid's not here yet
— want a cerveza

sit in the shadow
look at those pale, lovely hills
— let's have anisette
With references to "Hills Like White Elephants" by Ernest Hemingway

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