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"eddied" poems
You told me you dreamt of stars From before cave painters And ice ages Celestial You said you came from the time Before “Let there be light” When light and dark pooled And eddied together You said we could exist In an isolated state When even oil and water were in love And we are but atoms And you said We could run away from The ills and the joys and The businessmen clocking in on time But I am a cynic And a threw down your sonnets And your romance Because I’m not a dreamer
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 8:31 PM UTC
Barefooted Personified Sonnets
881 I’ve none to tell me to but Thee So when Thou failest, nobody. It was a little tie— It just held Two, nor those it held Since Somewhere thy sweet Face has spilled Beyond my Boundary— If things were opposite—and Me And Me it were—that ebbed from Thee On some unanswering Shore— Would’st Thou seek so—just say That I the Answer may pursue Unto the lips it eddied through— So—overtaking Thee—
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I’ve none to tell me to but Thee
Alien and unwanted, my smile always singed my lips. Platitudes polite and civilization vile… Many times, I longed to prelude my burdens to him, my husband. But, love is no longer the case… What a woman gives up for an end to live happily ever after… An access to be one with another’s world… I felt a freedom in slitting my brother’s throat as seasons ebbed and eddied with each part of him was discarded for my love’s need for an empire. I felt the moment, the freedom of Fatherland. Lived within this foreign land of endless lies, Amen. A wife-time of anguish for a man… I’m resplendent Eve: noting wishes beyond Adam’s and God’s assignments. Jason: husband, an end, has been… I’m slitting our children’s throats on this dark continent as me, an alien for one thing you to see: making my own exile’s scene…
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Jun 3, 2016
Jun 3, 2016 at 4:40 AM UTC
Medea
Before you collapsed back to the blank face of Ys, back onto damp sands, just for an instant,              I stopped. (in my desk chair) and saw your spires, heard your swollen bells                            and smiled in the sun. You rose in earnest, sang to the horizon(!) the casual and the causal. the waves eddied around you and suddenly, as easily as you drew from the seabed, you let me know, everything that matters (one day) collapses.
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Feb 5, 2018
Feb 5, 2018 at 2:25 AM UTC
La cathédrale engloutie: a poem in appreciation
I was fire set upon A bed of wood to flicker on. The steady feed of brush and bark Kept me ablaze to stay the dark And yet at once, a time before An oil fueled my cobalt core. So mindlessly, I did consume All things before their buds could bloom. Further back, beyond that burn I reveled in to quell the yearn- There was chill that eddied forth That ushered in the wind from North. My fires faltered needfully And lapsed into a harmony, That warmed us both without the threat Of razing us with hot regret.
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Aug 8, 2018
Aug 8, 2018 at 8:46 AM UTC
Where I Burned
Remember June’s long days, and wild strawberries, drops of wine, the dew. The nettles that methodically overgrow the abandoned homesteads of exiles. You must praise the mutilated world. You watched the stylish yachts and ships; one of them had a long trip ahead of it, while salty oblivion awaited others. You’ve seen the refugees heading nowhere, you’ve heard the executioners sing joyfully. You should praise the mutilated world. Remember the moments when we were together in a white room and the curtain fluttered. Return in thought to the concert where music flared. You gathered acorns in the park in autumn and leaves eddied over the earth’s scars. Praise the mutilated world and the gray feather a thrush lost, and the gentle light that strays and vanishes and returns. —Adam Zagajewski. 9/11/2016.
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Sep 11, 2016
Sep 11, 2016 at 1:23 PM UTC
Try To Praise The Mutilated World.
In the passing of the night With only friendship left to lose Encouraged by some drunken friends And eddied by the ***** We talked a while, just you and me In fading smokey light Until I could convince myself The timing had come right I though that you had shown a sign The words you said were true But what I thought the words did mean Was not what they were to you The laughter I thought was nervous hope Was plainly misconcieved And looking back I see I saw What I wanted to believe I took a step and passed all points That had been passed before A calamity of awkward words Shared by the front door You look surprised and not quite sure Of what you're supposed to say But all I wanted was the truth Not just a part to play It wasn't the answer I wanted to hear But I know you're not to blame I'm only happy I know where we stand Alhough we don't feel the same And though I don't regret the action The method wasn't right So I hope you don't hold against me What passed the other night
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Jun 2, 2013
Jun 2, 2013 at 9:34 AM UTC
My Mistake
The colours swirled and eddied From the back of my gown As here I patiently wait For my silver crown My feet are gently placed In heeled slippers of red but unlike Dorothy these will not take me to my bed I stand tall and proud All strapped up with lace To get home from the ball There will be no race There will be no party, Biscuits, tea or cake No Bandersnatch or Jabberwark Are lying in my wake No one will resque me No armoured knight To follow my chosen path There will be no dragons to fight I am not even a witch locked up in a tower Just a young lady growing older every hour No longer a little child Chasing a fairy tale Just a normal teenager Trying to follow her dreams without fail
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Feb 22, 2015
Feb 22, 2015 at 1:41 PM UTC
Fairy tale
8/13/2014 *"The cicada's dry monotony breaks over me. The days are bright and free. Then why did I cry today for an hour? I stood under oak, while autumnal fog eddied around my feet, waiting for the bus with a dread that took my breath away. I stood at the side of the road. This summer- it was the only life I had."* Jane Kenyon A Sourland night with some tylenol at my side and a black shirt that smells like Pierre Cardin doesn't sound half bad, and if it does, let me know. Do you remember telling birds at 5 in the morning to shut the hell up? That was june and time goes on. And now you flinch as if hit when you see the first gold leaf, huh? The end of an era we could not say goodbye to came and it went. We sat sullied in our sunken brows like children who'd misbehaved and silently regretted. Our mouths tasted of sunflower fields and henna birchs. You realize summer is over when you feel it was minutes, not hours that you killed off slowly. Don't worry. Nothing Gold Can Stay, this time you can't stop the gold from staying, but the feeling of a hell hot afternoon layed out overwhelming like a blanket is gone.
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Feb 21, 2015
Feb 21, 2015 at 5:33 PM UTC
Reflections on Augustan Daybreak
And I'll be there when they lay you in the ground Six feet under - arms crossed - legs closed Finally laying your back In that straight position That I always expected of you Those tickles and chuckles the soundtrack of the cemetery When the stars sang on your fetal-curled nights When your lashes ran away like pollen on a breeze When the life and the breath of a lover eddied around you When time stopped And our freckles and mind and lips all met In a soul touching kiss I transcended my flesh And so did you But you're in an ivory white bed You're six feet under You stopped breathing one day You just stopped And I hope your face is marred with wrinkles And I hope your body is caressed with scars And I hope your bad days really left a hickey, a punch, a bruise Because although I won't be there for it all Please embark on a beautiful life when you open the door I'll face the landslide And I'll face it alone And so will you But just try and live a beautiful life Okay?
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Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 10:36 PM UTC
after quite some time
concrete burns on sundry days twisting and turns in fixated ways hard rock rivers etch the landscape in human endeavors and tenuous escape from eddied towns along lorn asphalt flows dreams born to drown in hope too shallow for front porch desires while mothers speak of yearning and fathers of youthful fires life is of concrete burning dreams and desires
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Aug 17, 2014
Aug 17, 2014 at 9:51 AM UTC
Concrete Burns
When the river was young, he'd often sit on its banks of sugar sand smoking a cigarette lazily watching the slow, languid, eddied swirls that Time made as it made its way, rather clumsily. Sometimes from the far bend a tree branch would come afloating like a bad memory, twisting and turning in the current with some silly bird trying to balance and figure it out from all angles Random voices from the far shore cicadas chirping in the lazy afternoon from the thick undergrowths overhanging the flowing waters an occasional splash by some bored fish a silent bubble bursting cackling waterfowls And yet he would hear his own breath, joining in... The waters were slightly warm then and gentle and caressing when he went for a dip and a few strokes took him to the little islet in the middle and aimlessly back again to break out in little goosebumps from the cool breeze on his wet skin. The river's old now muddied, wrinkled and scarred no more voices from the far banks no waterfowls cackling not even lazy cicadas only his own breathing heavy with the sighs of longing. of loss.
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Jan 30, 2021
Jan 30, 2021 at 6:26 PM UTC
The River
coasting at the coast cape runaway beckons just past the breaks summer morning vista seen from our bed through sleepy summer holiday eyes still I can see the foam crashing on the rocks that feed the churn between the capes landfall and rocky outcrop I remember the thrill first time I steered us around those rocks the strong current pulling and rocking the boat you too ****** to navigate us safely first time I'd driven the boat I remember the powerful engines(2 twins) straining against the undertow trying to pull us into a rocky jagged death you were oblivious kept sliding your hand up my thigh I could feel the bow dipping toward the crag then the boat being tossed toward equally rocky foreshore it was a push me pull you dance you blissfully ignorant hammered reaching for another cold one one hand trying to find a way inside my shorts I remember having to put it in reverse full throttle then cut it quick to roll out of the pit with the flow of the undertow then gun it to clear water I remember being mesmerised enticed by the eddied turbulent water I remember thinking I could just let it go and dive overboard alone a strong sea swimmer trained surf life saver I remember looking seeing the path through the rips counting the beats between the crashing waves knowing I could easily make it alone I'd swum through pain before my shoulder still burned you almost ripped it out of the socket my fingers traced the lump and fissure under my hair line where you'd smashed my head into the wooden door frame over and over your fist a handful of my hair seeing stars and tweety birds tasting blood from biting my lip and my tongue staying on my feet refusing to crumple before you Christmas night before we left for the coast boxing day morning at 6am I remember thinking I don't love you anymore I remember thinking youve made a slaughterhouse of our love I remember thinking I'm better than you than this urge to hurt you back so you'd understand how deep you hurt me I remember thinking I don't want to be like you and steering us both safely home. J.C. 13/09/2019. 12.22 am (Friday 13th)
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Sep 12, 2019
Sep 12, 2019 at 8:33 AM UTC
ghost of christmas past - aka perfect summer holiday
coasting at the coast cape runaway beckons just past the breaks summer morning vista seen from our bed through sleepy summer holiday eyes still I can see the foam crashing on the rocks that feed the churn between the capes landfall and rocky outcrop I remember the thrill first time I steered us around those rocks the strong current pulling and rocking the boat you too ****** to navigate us safely first time I'd driven the boat I remember the powerful engines(2 twins) straining against the undertow trying to pull us into a rocky jagged death you were oblivious kept sliding your hand up my thigh I could feel the bow dipping toward the crag then the boat being tossed toward equally rocky foreshore it was a push me pull you dance you blissfully ignorant hammered reaching for another cold one one hand trying to find a way inside my shorts I remember having to put it in reverse full throttle then cut it quick to roll out of the pit with the flow of the undertow then gun it to clear water I remember being mesmerised enticed by the eddied turbulent water I remember thinking I could just let it go and dive overboard alone a strong sea swimmer trained surf life saver I remember looking seeing the path through the rips counting the beats between the crashing waves knowing I could easily make it alone I'd swum through pain before my shoulder still burned you almost ripped it out of the socket my fingers traced the lump and fissure under my hair line where you'd smashed my head into the wooden door frame over and over your fist a handful of my hair seeing stars and tweety birds tasting blood from biting my lip and my tongue staying on my feet refusing to crumple before you Christmas night before we left for the coast boxing day morning at 6am I remember thinking I don't love you anymore I remember thinking youve made a slaughterhouse of our love I remember thinking I'm better than you than this urge to hurt you back so you'd understand how deep you hurt me I remember thinking I don't want to be like you and steering us both safely home. J.C. 13/09/2019. 12.22 am (Friday 13th)
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my heart a wallet bursting at the seams with all these worn, illegible receipts of simple but forgotten dreams. an IOU to me flits free and drifts away in blood like leaves upon the eddied surface of a stream.
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Apr 25, 2017
Apr 25, 2017 at 6:06 PM UTC
bursting
floating on a sea of blood born of our heart's sins drifting slowly while faced apart in boats of our own skins like memories dropped on still waters, we become cognizant of each other by the echos of our waves filled with but an anamnesis of us this liquid plane; landless space between, our forms become intoxicated as if they were soaked in gin the taste transmuting from pungency to bliss churning tides of rumination, hurricanes of emotional rot eddied at our shores from hair's end to finger's tip soaked, we are in the torrents of our yearning waiting for the maelstrom of appetency to catch us in remission
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Nov 30, 2019
Nov 30, 2019 at 8:14 PM UTC
Soaked
“This world was once a fluid haze of light, Till toward the centre set the starry tides, And eddied into suns, that wheeling cast The planets: ”then the monster, then the man” —Alfred, Lord Tennyson, “The Princess”
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Sep 20, 2024
Sep 20, 2024 at 2:52 PM UTC
“The Princess” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson