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"combi" poems
—for Mariel She sells 2 sole paltas beside street vendors who whistle at crop-top-clad girls, spewing profanities complete with broken English. She has four girls hungry at home. They dream of science, stars, constellations that spiral and sparr with particles that make us what we are — interrupted by howling dogs, the 5 AM tamale man, and stray **** crows. Amid dust-clouds of Zona D, the sun arrives over the peak Luis claims once exposed his innocent eyes to an angel: one tale of faith raised on culture come undone presently. Poet Andrea Gibson writes, “I said to the sun, ‘Tell me about the Big Bang.’ And the sun said, ‘it hurts to become.’” At dusk, Mariel takes a Combi out sixteen stops from Quince, up 302 steps to a turquoise shack and a red rose garden, and plants avocado seeds at her toes. Poco a poco, se anda lejos.
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Apr 4, 2015
Apr 4, 2015 at 10:59 PM UTC
"Little by Little, One Walks Far"
when the world, was much younger and i was a stupid-crazy girl-ly-chick, enamoured with her youth. i drove, a sunshine, lemon, yellow bottomed, white pith on top combi van. coyly, cloyingly named Mello Martha. it was...surfboards and swimsuits, egg and bacon sangers, early morning breezes, after a blitz at the breadbox. before... changing into the structured, tortured baby, bank teller blues, in the back,doors left open. it was... rockin, knockin, *** on credit, to a promised future, alluded to, but postponed, for the moment. it was... bruised back and grazed knees, harder, deeper oh god! oh god! please... faster, fucken frenzies, on a saturday night. it was....running away to nowhere, to find myself, then finding me, running away from, the self i didn't want to know. noway, nowhere, nohow. it was... a barrel of monkeys, a barrel of laughs, a keg of beer, a box of wine, under the crowded stars. it was.... a roadtrip, up the coast, midnight bonfire, midnight munchies, playing hunches, exploring reefs and reefers and such. it was...far from family and church rules, a friendly rebellion, of loud, proud youth. totally and brazenly, uncouth it was... wham! and m.j. cindy and boy george's culture club ,paperlace, billy idol and the beach boys. sung with abandon, at spinal tap level eleven. it was... peaceful, quiet, sleeping grace. insanely in love with... i forgot his name. it was.... the birth of bodaciously me. all brass hair and bosoms, wild and carefree. it was ....so long ago, it was... yesterday night, when i saw... Mello Martha's identical twin, stopped at a traffic light. it was... sunshine and lemon, bitter and sweet, as she sailed off, down the street. i sat and watched, wist, full of recollect, far and away, from my presently minded place... sitting in, the driver's seat, of my mom-blue subaru.
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Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 6:16 PM UTC
mellow martha(slightly explicit)
when the world, was much younger and i was a stupid-crazy girl-ly-chick, enamoured with her youth. i drove, a sunshine, lemon, yellow bottomed, white pith on top combi van. coyly, cloyingly named Mello Martha. it was...surfboards and swimsuits, egg and bacon sangers, early morning breezes, after a blitz at the breadbox. before... changing into the structured, tortured baby, bank teller blues, in the back,doors left open. it was... rockin, knockin, *** on credit, to a promised future, alluded to, but postponed, for the moment. it was... bruised back and grazed knees, harder, deeper oh god! oh god! please... faster, fucken frenzies, on a saturday night. it was....running away to nowhere, to find myself, then finding me, running away from, the self i didn't want to know. noway, nowhere, nohow. it was... a barrel of monkeys, a barrel of laughs, a keg of beer, a box of wine, under the crowded stars. it was.... a roadtrip, up the coast, midnight bonfire, midnight munchies, playing hunches, exploring reefs and reefers and such. it was...far from family and church rules, a friendly rebellion, of loud, proud youth. totally and brazenly, uncouth it was... wham! and m.j. cindy and boy george's culture club ,paperlace, billy idol and the beach boys. sung with abandon, at spinal tap level eleven. it was... peaceful, quiet, sleeping grace. insanely in love with... i forgot his name. it was.... the birth of bodaciously me. all brass hair and bosoms, wild and carefree. it was ....so long ago, it was... yesterday night, when i saw... Mello Martha's identical twin, stopped at a traffic light. it was... sunshine and lemon, bitter and sweet, as she sailed off, down the street. i sat and watched, wist, full of recollect, far and away, from my presently minded place... sitting in, the driver's seat, of my mom-blue subaru.
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You go strains of mad when... ...Ambition becomes Eating Your Own Hunger Pains With savaged pride you feel that all you need to achieve in life Can be done faster with gold and good courtship You croon apologies to your ideas and hope they stay. They don't stay. You go strains of mad when... ...Demonic intercession is hailed as miracle You pay your division of a vast tithe into coffers you never see and watch with shame and awe at a penetrative truth working noisily behind curtains. This polls well. You go strains of mad when... ...Dust and diamonds are sold as combi-packs, **** comes in boxes of strict six; for illustrative purposes, if you want four you've got to sell or discard two for your reputation. There's no loyalty card or price-break on bulk. I'm flat broke. You go strains of mad when... ...A nobody sketches you with disarming accuracy Their medium is a third hand snipe relayed with bitter remove No more the taut nymphette lounged aground, on the rocks The naked crystal uniform of your debtless regime, gone. You're a shirt and name-tag girl now. You go strains of mad when... ...Pockets burst outside the Church yard sale The Ministry guilts you into buying all the furniture and music moving it one piece at a time into your life until suddenly you have a Church to burn Just in time for winter.
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Sep 7, 2016
Sep 7, 2016 at 8:30 AM UTC
Leading Lady Pirate
for some reason, unnown yet i am sitting here hot coffee in hand transfixed by the memory of a day lifetimes ago..... when i took a wrong turn seeking a small town... and a cobbler of  soft leather shoes... instead i found myself on a bush track, far too narrow to turn my combi van around forced to travel on... getting further and further along until, abruptly the track widened and the most gorgeous vista appeared green grass, sedges and spinfex in waves, led down to a billabong, eucalypt gums, ghost and red, large in size and old in years dotted the irregular, ameboic shape and the water, so clear, so clear, so clear reflecting the cloud dusted sky, to one side the face of a gorge, ochre red rusted crazed weith black cracks and green whiskery growths, on which rock wallabies fed. unafraid of the big lemoned wedged combi, who sat monolithically in their environs. as  i disembarked, up from the grass thicket, one thousand and one (i counted) budgerigars alight and took to the wing, in a swirling mass of god's whimsical glory. the sound, a deafening chirk-chatter and whoosh as they, in sychron, wheeled and turned flew over my head and back into  the bush. needless to say, i never bothered to buy those soft leather shoes.....
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May 18, 2014
May 18, 2014 at 7:03 PM UTC
wrong turn
He could have walked away, For there were many a reason to do so; But he never did; He was there through the highs and lows. I gave him many a reason To walk away for good; And yet he stayed beside me While I was in his neighbourhood. There were panic attacks, crying, Semi madness, paranoia; All the usual consequences of Being assaulted a year earlier. There were so many times I expected him to be gone; I warned him in fact that - I’m not worthy – my people are gone! There is no need to put up with me, Its not good for your health; I’m used to people disappearing, I’ll deal with things myself. For I am being punished, It’s how its meant to be; At least for those of us assaulted ....in the middle of the sea. But of course he didnt understand, He’s from a different culture; He wasn’t afraid to hold my hand And protect me from the torture. He has probably never met anyone As mad and unstable as me; Coming to stay in Soweto And feeling so totally free. He saw my love of Soweto, For the children, the people, and more; He spent so much time exploring his home with me – He’d learnt which combi to get door to door! When I had to get to clinics, Not just one, two, three, or four (!) He spent two days right there with me As we waited hours to reach the door. He didnt have to do that, He has work to do back home; Yet even when I shouted at him – He never left me alone. Of course I apologised later, Tried to help him understand; That my brain does its own thing, Yet he was still there to hold my hand. He never once walked away, And thats when it occurred to me; What a complete cultural contrast ....to our “people of the sea”... My “family” are now Sowetans, Although i’ve known that for a while; When the clinics registered me as an “African” All I did was smile. Of all the times I thought i’d given A reason for him to abandon me, There was one in particular – Where he’d be fully justified to flee. To protect yourself i’d understand, You may need to walk away; And yet he didnt – he put himself at risk ...to protect me, I have to say.... It’s not an easy place to live, He could have walked away; I’m forever grateful for his bravery And that he didnt walk away. For a place where for so long, Segregation was the norm, It has come such a very long way – Since the day I was born. My culture, mixed as it is Has not suffered in this way; Instead it shuns and alienates people ....if they “dont obey”.... Well done South Africa, Though the problems you face are not gone; You could teach a lot to “my people”.. ..a culture that needs to be re- born.
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Aug 8, 2018
Aug 8, 2018 at 6:58 PM UTC
He Never Walked Away
He could have walked away, For there were many a reason to do so; But he never did; He was there through the highs and lows. I gave him many a reason To walk away for good; And yet he stayed beside me While I was in his neighbourhood. There were panic attacks, crying, Semi madness, paranoia; All the usual consequences of Being assaulted a year earlier. There were so many times I expected him to be gone; I warned him in fact that - I’m not worthy – my people are gone! There is no need to put up with me, Its not good for your health; I’m used to people disappearing, I’ll deal with things myself. For I am being punished, It’s how its meant to be; At least for those of us assaulted ....in the middle of the sea. But of course he didnt understand, He’s from a different culture; He wasn’t afraid to hold my hand And protect me from the torture. He has probably never met anyone As mad and unstable as me; Coming to stay in Soweto And feeling so totally free. He saw my love of Soweto, For the children, the people, and more; He spent so much time exploring his home with me – He’d learnt which combi to get door to door! When I had to get to clinics, Not just one, two, three, or four (!) He spent two days right there with me As we waited hours to reach the door. He didnt have to do that, He has work to do back home; Yet even when I shouted at him – He never left me alone. Of course I apologised later, Tried to help him understand; That my brain does its own thing, Yet he was still there to hold my hand. He never once walked away, And thats when it occurred to me; What a complete cultural contrast ....to our “people of the sea”... My “family” are now Sowetans, Although i’ve known that for a while; When the clinics registered me as an “African” All I did was smile. Of all the times I thought i’d given A reason for him to abandon me, There was one in particular – Where he’d be fully justified to flee. To protect yourself i’d understand, You may need to walk away; And yet he didnt – he put himself at risk ...to protect me, I have to say.... It’s not an easy place to live, He could have walked away; I’m forever grateful for his bravery And that he didnt walk away. For a place where for so long, Segregation was the norm, It has come such a very long way – Since the day I was born. My culture, mixed as it is Has not suffered in this way; Instead it shuns and alienates people ....if they “dont obey”.... Well done South Africa, Though the problems you face are not gone; You could teach a lot to “my people”.. ..a culture that needs to be re- born.
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Ketchup and mustard Cancelling each other's finest So what, it ain't bad But it weren't us the slightest
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Apr 26, 2014
Apr 26, 2014 at 8:33 AM UTC
Not that combi
my mother is losing her words or at least, misplacing them (*there may well be,a great pile of them, lying around lauguishing, somewhere*) her mind is slipping, on it's weary and hard-work-worn cogs. she sometimes has difficulty, grasping new concepts, or attatching two thoughts, coherently together. and sometimes the blankness behind her eyes reaches the horizon and beyond. (and scares the very dickens out of me) we have lots more, doovers and thingies and whatsits, in the house... and usage of these and other, all purpose words, that lead to subtle guessing games, has increased manifold, creating  conversations, that drift, into the territories of "remember the kid with the doover thingies, red....on his head.... on his head" !!! (*the boy with the beautiful red curls and corksrew ringlets*) perhaps having been, away and now returned.... i see this more  clearly.... whereas, whilst, living with it daily. ....you just compensate ... and move on. my brothers  do not want to know this.... and nor does she want them to.... they, have busy lives..... (note the irony lost and languishing here) i am concerned, and speak to both her doctor and the bluecare nurse, who comes to help with her abulutions and dresses the abrasions from her latest fall. they say things like, she is, within the healthy range for her age, 85. however, there is marked depreceation in certain areas..... we need to keep an eye on her... ( and i am reminded of my old combi, sad but true) in the meantime... mother, no longer does the cryptic crossword, citing it as mere balderdash(these days) and we often find the daily incomplete...
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May 18, 2014
May 18, 2014 at 11:36 PM UTC
mothers word puzzle
my mother is losing her words or at least, misplacing them (*there may well be,a great pile of them, lying around lauguishing, somewhere*) her mind is slipping, on it's weary and hard-work-worn cogs. she sometimes has difficulty, grasping new concepts, or attatching two thoughts, coherently together. and sometimes the blankness behind her eyes reaches the horizon and beyond. (and scares the very dickens out of me) we have lots more, doovers and thingies and whatsits, in the house... and usage of these and other, all purpose words, that lead to subtle guessing games, has increased manifold, creating  conversations, that drift, into the territories of "remember the kid with the doover thingies, red....on his head.... on his head" !!! (*the boy with the beautiful red curls and corksrew ringlets*) perhaps having been, away and now returned.... i see this more  clearly.... whereas, whilst, living with it daily. ....you just compensate ... and move on. my brothers  do not want to know this.... and nor does she want them to.... they, have busy lives..... (note the irony lost and languishing here) i am concerned, and speak to both her doctor and the bluecare nurse, who comes to help with her abulutions and dresses the abrasions from her latest fall. they say things like, she is, within the healthy range for her age, 85. however, there is marked depreceation in certain areas..... we need to keep an eye on her... ( and i am reminded of my old combi, sad but true) in the meantime... mother, no longer does the cryptic crossword, citing it as mere balderdash(these days) and we often find the daily incomplete...
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Floating around the shores of a beach, whilst being all out to sea I’ve been drifting about, the days are becoming so long Nobody told me, it could so easily, happen to me It’s not that it’s bad, I’ve done nothing wrong It’s just time, as I knew it, seems to have skipped a beat A month became a year, like time decided not to catch up and meet Nowhere to sleep, little to eat, only new wayward floaters to greet Can you see me or do you choose not to? Acknowledge me, don’t look straight through me I’m a human with a heart, if it were you, I’d ask about you Like, how did you get here, how are you going, what’s your view On political matters, religious stuff, world concerns, that you see Put down ya phone, look into their eyes, talk to someone anew Can’t find a job, most boss’s don’t like me, that’s how it seems Can’t sing a tune or get the right pitch, just listen, that’s what it means Living by the seashore, breeze in my face, no windows, in diss free place Be careful who you trust, they’ll steal every dime, it’s a **** rat race Friendly folk, pass on by, throw you a penny, ‘cause ya down on your luck Some girls get down on their knees, handle da merchandise, then **** for a buck Now quite peckish, haven’t eaten for days, down on one knee, oh **** Can you see me or do you choose not to? Acknowledge me, don’t look straight through me I’m a human with a heart, if it were you, I’d ask about you How did you get here, how are you going, what’s your view On political matters, religious stuff, world concerns, that you see Put down ya phone, look into the eyes, talk to someone anew She’ll be right mate, but every next day, I’m still looking for a place to lay Under a bush, upon a park bench, those **** insects, are having a field day I’ve had enough, I got the courage, dialed the number, to get me out of here Up pulled a Combi Van, with a smile on her face, as she wiped away a tear Silence all the way home, just a nod or two, I'd gaze at her, the way ya do At night, laying in bed, thoughts rushing in my head, most are true In the morning, staring at a mirror, I finally saw the boy that my dear mom, once knew.
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Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019 at 9:27 PM UTC
Drifting About
Floating around the shores of a beach, whilst being all out to sea I’ve been drifting about, the days are becoming so long Nobody told me, it could so easily, happen to me It’s not that it’s bad, I’ve done nothing wrong It’s just time, as I knew it, seems to have skipped a beat A month became a year, like time decided not to catch up and meet Nowhere to sleep, little to eat, only new wayward floaters to greet Can you see me or do you choose not to? Acknowledge me, don’t look straight through me I’m a human with a heart, if it were you, I’d ask about you Like, how did you get here, how are you going, what’s your view On political matters, religious stuff, world concerns, that you see Put down ya phone, look into their eyes, talk to someone anew Can’t find a job, most boss’s don’t like me, that’s how it seems Can’t sing a tune or get the right pitch, just listen, that’s what it means Living by the seashore, breeze in my face, no windows, in diss free place Be careful who you trust, they’ll steal every dime, it’s a **** rat race Friendly folk, pass on by, throw you a penny, ‘cause ya down on your luck Some girls get down on their knees, handle da merchandise, then **** for a buck Now quite peckish, haven’t eaten for days, down on one knee, oh **** Can you see me or do you choose not to? Acknowledge me, don’t look straight through me I’m a human with a heart, if it were you, I’d ask about you How did you get here, how are you going, what’s your view On political matters, religious stuff, world concerns, that you see Put down ya phone, look into the eyes, talk to someone anew She’ll be right mate, but every next day, I’m still looking for a place to lay Under a bush, upon a park bench, those **** insects, are having a field day I’ve had enough, I got the courage, dialed the number, to get me out of here Up pulled a Combi Van, with a smile on her face, as she wiped away a tear Silence all the way home, just a nod or two, I'd gaze at her, the way ya do At night, laying in bed, thoughts rushing in my head, most are true In the morning, staring at a mirror, I finally saw the boy that my dear mom, once knew.
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