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Two wide open arms
phrygian, pumping with generous excitement
preparing food or pouring water
I am a stray licking at puddles
blowing past the frigid opening hours of
anabolic windows
drafting out the nutty smoke of tobacco
bleeding out into the air
I say that I like, enjoy being cold
I prefer it
and San Fransisco is far,
but I’d love to go
me and my wet, refrigerated soul.
The protagonist is Hope,
Mesmerizing,
Could it ever give up?
Takes the scarf and then the keys,
The two different socks are still an issue,
But Hope promises to stop.

Hope goes out the door,
Shuts it loudly,
Wakes me up,
I rise without it.

It goes to work with all the folk,
It checks in proper,
In and out,
Like the wheels of intercities,
Reading seams of rails aloud.

They're conveniently placed,
Right below my bedroom window front.
The train that Hope has boarded trails on
With scraping screeches
Through said bedroom like a joke.

Like the Triplets of Belleville,
I am the dog,
I bark right at it,
Hit the beat at which the wheels
Shift through the rails
As they charge into a whistle,
And also hope’s inside there,
Nestled,
Sitting proudly by the window
Headed into the city.
You can’t hear the sounds from inside of the rail jet
they are muffled,
almost pleasant.

Hope goes unhidden,
Always present,
Steady, stuck,
Like scorpions in resin.
So Hope travels on,
Into the city,
Travels lightly,
No possessions,
As it works
And drinks its coffee,
Jittered slightly,
Stamps letters into word processors,
Gets a sandwich at the Prêt.

The work is good,
All good
And well
And good
And well
And good again!
It’s all so good,
Why should it not be?
The answer's predetermined, set.

Hope comes home with something edible
Wrapped in cellophane
And surely meant to **** me
As I douse it in some Heinz
Hope usually comes home at different,
untraceable, untrackable times.

When it finally comes back,
When the day draws to a close,
When Hope is folding its attire,
Its business casual clothes,
I burst alight with laughter,
Panicked,
I ask again if all’s ok.
Hope turns and says, "Don’t worry 'bout it."
I scream,
Jump up,
Lunge at it,
Punch the space right where it stood,
And hear another train horn fizzle as it whistles through my room.
i have the prettiest handwriting
but my mother hates it
as a professor, she says,
it is important for me to be able to read it
when she says that were both quietly seated
i object, a thing that i chose to do best
i almost went to law school, but failed the entry test
at the time my grandma was sad
that's what she chose to do best
she'd sigh and put her hand on her heavy chest
but i say mom
mommmmm
listen
it's not about reading
it's more about feeling
feeling the shape of the word
it's neurolinguistics, she smears a bread full of curd
why are you surprised that i know this term
it's like all i do is try and to learn
my page is like the sea and the words are like boats with the sails
it's about the swirls and the whirls of the meandering tails
of the g's and the y's
and all the letters have bonds to each other, unbreakable ties
my greek looking e's
and fictional t's
my a is a bow
my b has a toe
even the capitals sometimes appear to be low
like my head on the way to the train that likely takes me home
right after rush hour
when the overtime workers are hungry and dead
longing all day for their ikea bed
listening to educational talk
i never liked people who enjoy it, to mock
and me, i listen to indie with deep breaths in the mic
and finally learn to sing how i like
cause apparently my notes are too long
my voice is too loud
and the melody’s lost in the scattered train sound
i don't like it
but its there
like a dog to be walked
we sat at the table at 8 and we talked
the wiener dog with coffee like fur
the thing it did best is listen to her
i can change anything but i won’t change my Rs
i hear them approaching, the lit subway cars
The chemtrails in the back of the sky
Are short, like slits, or more like cuts,
Like the little daft scars on my student's skin
Her mother must not know about.
I feel like I have to address it,
The panic for a child sitting fatherly and loud
I will not, because I cannot, it is not my scope.
Sighing, this is what I think about.
Commuting not computing,
Filing through the turnstiles, sticky,
I'm a slithering commuter,
Not a competent tutor,
Growing tired and not cuter,
I am commuting to you.
As long as Rotterdam is standing,
I’ll be the body on the train,
Sprinting on by grazing cows.
A little longer and I'll feel my heart break again,
When I tell you about her.
As long as Rotterdam still stands
And my student jokes about self-harm,
My commuting heartbeat pounds on,
In tune with trains stampeding through the farms,
Pounding permanently, panging on the parchment of time,
As the airports below sea level send their planes to start their climb.
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Trigger Warning: Self-Harm.
Max Neumann Nov 2019
have a look:

the [a-ha-ha-ha] platform is packed with
commuters
dressed in
occupational colors  

the commuters are not used
to smile regularly by the end
of a long day

[a-ha-ha-ha-aaa]

therefore
have a closer look:

between the commuters you
see
loosely
some guys carrying
transparent [hr-ha-a] chunks filled with
*****

somebody asks
about the fluid

now people have a
reason to laugh

hr-ahem-hrr-ahem-hrrr-i-don't-ha-want-ha-ha-ha-that
been
He's
Coughing
Choking
think that man should
give up smoking.

Someone tagged the door
Isn't that against the law?

There are those wearing
'High Visibility'
there are those
full of misery
such fun on the jubilee.

It's painkiller quick,
but
it makes me feel sick
when i look at the price
I must pay.

Commuting
and they put
the boot in
the whole lot
need shooting
my way on
Friday.
wrote this on the way to work at about 5:45am but forgot to post it on this site.
Antonia Caldow May 2018
Avoiding the eyes, the arms and legs
the charity seller eagerly awaiting
I look about but all I see is a sea of bodies
polluting the streets, the skies, their minds
move on
making noise, make less noise
fill the silence
take a breath of air, all the way down
take a pause
there's time
no need to rush around
pounding the chewing gum streets
The grime of life is on your skin now
embedded in the layers of filth
the coffee stains and late night bars
the early starts and frown lines of life
are on your face now
that's life now
make change and waves in the noise that was your life
where silence pounds the chewing gum streets of your mind.
Mary-Eliz Mar 2018
sitting by a window
staring out the smudged pane
past the polychromatic crowds
bent, huddled, faceless in the rain

a smeared image swirling by
modern art painting not yet dry

wishing to nod off
tired to the bone
the rattle and rumble beneath
the stop and the start
keep my weary eyelids apart

the odors of crowded humanity
fill my nostrils,
make them burn
alcohol, sweat, stale cigarette smoke
on clothes that are old and worn

garlic, deep fryer grease
pastrami and cheese in a sack
blood dried on the apron
slung over a butcher's back

a cacophony of noises
surge inside the car
papers rattle, fingers tap
on electronics or on steel bar

~~~

nobody's talking
eyes are downcast
to newspaper, cell phone
or hangnail
fear and distrust
thick in the air
scattered about like
yesterday's mail

on this common commuter carrier
they're traveling the same route

home

just working folks
trying to make it all work out

they have much in common
in a way, aren't they all kin?
worn and weary at end of day,
fellows in the midst of this din?

14th Street station ahead
warns of various dangers
posted there on a column decreed

Please do not smile at strangers
I believe this is a real sign. It looks to be in the picture online.
F White Sep 2016
I mourn for skunks.

The squashed, flattened masses
***** mashed, their stripes scattered
Matted  masks disguising unseeing eyes
Through how many fields have they run?
Once sweet babies, small noses, downlike fur
fleeing to their final place from green leafed bowers in a terrible act of asphalt bait n' switch

Let us all grieve the sacrifice which,
Unto the motor gods
Has been served.
Copyright fhw 2016
JR Rhine Feb 2016
St. Mary's, I obligatorily board the biding vessel,
I drift from your shores in the midnight hour,
I sail home where I must lay my weary head;

but little do they know,
you are my bedfellow,
St. Mary's.
To the commuters who disperse their being between two different worlds.

— The End —