6:30 a.m. you wake to see,
a lovely girl.
the type a girl,
who comes with the proper set of manners,
but looks like somewhere,
this girl lost her standards.
7:00 a.m. she wakes and sees you.
when you've never had the decency to point out her beauty,
you're so swell thinking about,
how you can get her for a second round,
never calling her beautiful,
or flawless during the round
you act lousy to her,
even though
you were really hoping to do more than to embrace her,
but you soon forget all this,
as you lie in bed,
at 10 a.m.
sleepy,
like the loath you were,
10:30 a.m. your fast asleep,
while she feels the ever growing solitude,
11:00 a.m. she stands in front of the window,
beams of sun on her like the angel in heaven planned it,
as she sips the coffee she made for the both of you,
11:30 a.m. the coffee is cold, and she contemplates her purpose here,
by 1:00 p.m she is wondering if this relationship,
will ever evolve into something more,
1:30 p.m. she realized he doesn't care about her presents,
and wonders if any man would.
2:00 p.m. she fears no one could ever love her,
she's found herself filling notebooks of flaws that are too great to love,
it is now 2:30 p.m. on the dot, and if someone was to walk in on her,
it would be as if she was omit from the world for years..
a minute passes and he walks in,
pours some coffee,
he drinks, and swallows the cold coffee,
puts the mug down,
he looks at her with disgrace almost,
and walks away,
to who cares where, because at 2:36 p.m.,
she wrote one more flaw,
my coffee was cold and he left me again,
and that was enough to tell her she was worthless.
and he sat in his chair,
not once getting up to say,
or tell her,
how he thought she was beautiful,
flawless,
or the fact he loved her,
communication. complements, and using some words that aren't used too often. I saw a page of words no one used anymore, and flawless and buitiful were the first two, and there were some other interesting words, so I figured why not make it about using theses words, by also making it about two people who didn't communicate, Idk if its a poem or a short story, if someone knows plz tell me.