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"reponse" poems
What does it mean to me; She asks as she looks into me. My reponse, a tied tongue As she kisses me and relaxes me. My proverbial tongue does as it's asked "It's all about perception you see, And what context it's been used in. It can mean the endless cycle that is Saṃsāra, In where karma is responsible. But rebirth in my eyes Means something closer to home, Rebirth isn't about physicaly dieing It's about letting the old you die So that a greater, better you is born, Like in religion when you are born again You didn't physicaly die but rather You opened a new set of eyes And that is what rebirth means to me, When you let go all of that which holds you back And the person who held onto all that dies; You are set free as you are given new life and new eyes that aren't blinded by past actions and experiences."
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Jul 16, 2013
Jul 16, 2013 at 11:36 AM UTC
Rebirth
my eyes are little television screens projecting into my brain still life images that capture my home in all its unwavering solitude the music curls around me i feel the devil's blood in my veins as a satanic elvis serenades me with old refrains i can relate to i lament my present foray into social media poetry but i'm much too intoxicated for an emotional reponse i choke down this rip of mad man OG a sip of coffee mixed with E&J; and wonder if hank bukowski would have been a hit on facebook had he emerged today.
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Aug 10, 2014
Aug 10, 2014 at 1:44 AM UTC
portrait of a facebook poet.
Lungs filled deep the sweetest smoke and gave a dizziness to the scene I felt on an island cold and remote as if just awakened from a dream calloused feet touched lightly down on rocks and stone worn smooth I heard the church create such sounds my body trembled with the truth t’was my shoes they sold at the gate leaving me slightly unnerved knowing blisters were to be my fate I complained it was more than a tourist deserved I had paid all fees without an issue even purchased a souvenir with all my crying, they only offered tissue and continued to look at me queer I hobbled off, cursing under my breathe knowing it would not go well and now as I sit, so close to death I look back at that place as hell
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Nov 5, 2015
Nov 5, 2015 at 2:36 PM UTC
a temple revisited. a reponse to "A Day Out at the Temple" by - Pradip Chattopadhyay
Staring at the family photo album This one; this one is almost empty But contains most of the memories That were best forgotten Because Tears don't make good pictures Tears Don't make good pictures And I'm still crying so Don't take any pictures The family that prays together tears itself apart The young boy in the corner cries himself to sleep Each one turns round in question Receiving no reponse Another come my love sweet love and much disorder Shall I be a pram-pusher myself? And even though I know I should be dead already The dancing night itself is not through. Here stands the family.
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 3:45 PM UTC
The Family
Chances are, you have to do a 'search', then order one on line. If you're under 60 years of age, you probably never heard of it, anyway. Walking in to a pharmacy, or drug store, asking a young clerk, who is in their late teens, or early twenties, or even 40's to 50's, knowing very well what their reponse will be before you ask the question, becomes'comical', seeing the puzzled expression on their faces, especially when the companies web site indicates the store has it "in stock. A"simple little tool", inexpensive, but to some, of which I am one, 'priceless.'  It can relieve a huge amount of frustration in seconds, put a smile on your face, make your day "bright" again, saves time, can help prevent being late for appointments, and it has been around for centuries, long before the 'zipper' was invented. Approximately eight inches long, solid handle, with a curved wire tip, two and a quarter inches in length. I introduce you, to,"The Button Hook!", Tah-Dah! This "simple little tool" is used by many who are afflicted with such maladies, as arthritis, or have neuropathy issues in their hands, making it difficult to button a shirt, pants, etc. Just insert the wire end through the buttonhole, loop it around the button, pull it through. Some tools have a 'hook' on the opposite end of the handle, to help pull shoelaces through the eyelets. I realize this is not a poem, but there are many on the site in my age range that may have similar issues, or perhaps physical issues due to injury or illness. Just wanted to pass this on to you.(I posted a photo on my Facebook timeline.) richard riddle 06-06-2016
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Jun 6, 2016
Jun 6, 2016 at 8:18 AM UTC
If Walmart doesn't have it-Where the Heck can I find it!
Chances are, you have to do a 'search', then order one on line. If you're under 60 years of age, you probably never heard of it, anyway. Walking in to a pharmacy, or drug store, asking a young clerk, who is in their late teens, or early twenties, or even 40's to 50's, knowing very well what their reponse will be before you ask the question, becomes'comical', seeing the puzzled expression on their faces, especially when the companies web site indicates the store has it "in stock. A"simple little tool", inexpensive, but to some, of which I am one, 'priceless.'  It can relieve a huge amount of frustration in seconds, put a smile on your face, make your day "bright" again, saves time, can help prevent being late for appointments, and it has been around for centuries, long before the 'zipper' was invented. Approximately eight inches long, solid handle, with a curved wire tip, two and a quarter inches in length. I introduce you, to,"The Button Hook!", Tah-Dah! This "simple little tool" is used by many who are afflicted with such maladies, as arthritis, or have neuropathy issues in their hands, making it difficult to button a shirt, pants, etc. Just insert the wire end through the buttonhole, loop it around the button, pull it through. Some tools have a 'hook' on the opposite end of the handle, to help pull shoelaces through the eyelets. I realize this is not a poem, but there are many on the site in my age range that may have similar issues, or perhaps physical issues due to injury or illness. Just wanted to pass this on to you.(I posted a photo on my Facebook timeline.) richard riddle 06-06-2016
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I'm there for you when you have downs or even ups I guess I ought to remember how you hate tales I tried to reach out to you, I felt alone you offered no response, until now and it revealed that in the depths of your misery some ecstatic news, a tone which I'm so glad for I just wish I could be met halfway, too smiles will continue for you, all the way I wouldn't want you to feel this anguish a century old letter has fallen to me from an attic in a forgotten chest and I uncover the strangest secret things under this sky, was once a love so great yet devastating and wild just like ours I wonder what happened to them I dare to think it all worked out that they rode over the expected and caught the real deal there are two sets of letters, those from her and his reponse we will make it through the tumbles I don't believe in make your bed and lie down make your bed, then jump on it with me!
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Dec 10, 2013
Dec 10, 2013 at 5:20 PM UTC
response
Attend , sa reponse peut être Non ... Patience , ta chance sera là Non ? J'hésite , Je , je pourrais pas le faire , Arrete , tu peux le faire ! Une seconde , ca va marcher ? Stop , ca va aller ! Si , si ça ce passait differament ? Ben , c'est plus marrant ! Aucune , aucune chance que ça marche , Faux , tu a le destin dans ta manche ! Je ... Je .. Je . Réfléchis après , fait d'abord ! Je ... Vais .. .
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Nov 6, 2018
Nov 6, 2018 at 10:58 AM UTC
..... Juste avant