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"undergrads" poems
Years ago: 93-94 NYC: Columbia trying to finish that thesis script in Butler library sitting at a wooden table in a room full of wooden tables covered in a vast ceiling creativity squeezed from my brain my boyfriend waiting for me only a notebook, a row of payphones on the first floor a line forms as undergrads wait for the inter-college phone Today, 2012 Berkeley: Doe library Looks like Butler but nicely painted not ravaged by the weather and city rows of wooden desks with lamps and outlets I write on my laptop, a cell phone in my bag The row of payphones on the first floor are just empty booths I feel like, I could look up, and you would be standing there You, my boyfriend, who became my husband My best friend, a difficult one who I stood by against the odds You would be standing there, or maybe sitting down reading a large novel in French, and we would get up and leave together for a dinner on Broadway I look up. The room is quiet and clear. The air is fresh, no sounds of the inner city You are not there You live only in my mind I wonder, how it was for you, years ago, in your year here at Berkeley before you ran home, uncomfortable on this strange coast, this new world I wish I could say to you doe library looks like butler library isn't that interesting when I'm here, I feel like I'm there But you, my past persecutor and abuser, would not listen you new wife would be horrified. It's such a simple thought I don't want anything more I'm afraid of you Just wish I could connect, with that good part at an innocent time when things were working
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Jul 21, 2012
Jul 21, 2012 at 3:27 PM UTC
Time Splice
Years ago: 93-94 NYC: Columbia trying to finish that thesis script in Butler library sitting at a wooden table in a room full of wooden tables covered in a vast ceiling creativity squeezed from my brain my boyfriend waiting for me only a notebook, a row of payphones on the first floor a line forms as undergrads wait for the inter-college phone Today, 2012 Berkeley: Doe library Looks like Butler but nicely painted not ravaged by the weather and city rows of wooden desks with lamps and outlets I write on my laptop, a cell phone in my bag The row of payphones on the first floor are just empty booths I feel like, I could look up, and you would be standing there You, my boyfriend, who became my husband My best friend, a difficult one who I stood by against the odds You would be standing there, or maybe sitting down reading a large novel in French, and we would get up and leave together for a dinner on Broadway I look up. The room is quiet and clear. The air is fresh, no sounds of the inner city You are not there You live only in my mind I wonder, how it was for you, years ago, in your year here at Berkeley before you ran home, uncomfortable on this strange coast, this new world I wish I could say to you doe library looks like butler library isn't that interesting when I'm here, I feel like I'm there But you, my past persecutor and abuser, would not listen you new wife would be horrified. It's such a simple thought I don't want anything more I'm afraid of you Just wish I could connect, with that good part at an innocent time when things were working
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red pen in hand.... i critique people's thoughts and dreams six years at university, to become a god.... who moulds minds and delivers future prophecies, ready for unwrapping. who creates bell curves, of fail to high distinctions. that the undergrads, follow like dancing, pavlovian dogs... the posts...have slipped the leash and ... leave thoughtful piles of...extruded work, in the academic yard. six years at uni...as a dog nine years at uni ...as a god. it is amazing, how the garnering of parchments and strange hats, can transpose a person's world.
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 10:00 AM UTC
thoughts while marking essays
Classes started up again today. Soon, we’ll be gloriously stressed, and clocked-up on whatever. Our hearts will swell to the pre-med symphony - a frantic opus, composed in the key of no sleep. In seminars for rising pre-med seniors, (What's needed to get that med-school slot!), it’s obvious that 60% of the students who started out with us, on this track, are gone - left for other majors. “I wasn’t happy, it was too much,” they said. I feel a pang when I hear that undergrads we’ve shared a trench with have switched their major to basket weaving (political science), TikTok (computer science) or Phys-Ed. I envy those deserters, I pity those deserters, I envy.. Wait, aren’t deserters supposed to be, well, you know. Meanwhile, the rest of us, the stubborn few, cling to the dream. It’s a waking dream, for caffeinated zombies, obsessive-compulsive workaholics and maladjusted wonks who neglect personal needs, relationships and in some cases personal hygiene (not me, of course) in favor of a goal. Maybe there’s something wrong with us?
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Mar 25, 2024
Mar 25, 2024 at 10:31 AM UTC
all too soon
Everything "adult" was new And I knew what I wanted to do All undergrads are really the same We want to get naked with someone, go insane For those of us on lockdown in our families This was our first chance, to get some, finally I remember the discovery of the feel of a fully naked man His muscles were so hard, he was so hairy I didn't understand How I hadn't noticed all these things before What can you know through clothes? You need more. And I went through all the dramas And I can remember all their names I promise I saw, I experienced the beginnings, middles and ends And I had my ups and downs, it just depends And now it's not that I'm bored with it all It's just I think I know how much it hurts when you fall Everything seems to matter so much more I'm not just a kid, living mostly on my parent's money in a dorm.
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Jul 15, 2012
Jul 15, 2012 at 2:04 AM UTC
When I Was Young, Like in College
Born right, if this incongruous line is to be believed **** from everything I've seen, why won't you let me be? From the way they make it sound, I think i'll just pass up that pension With this luck I'm not sure why I don't pass tests just guessing If its multiple choice at least (and it always is) You can tell I'm more than fed up with the lack of agency Developing around our common enemies Festering, on the bloated *** of this so called society Becoming a myiasis And I'll never hear the end of it From the kids to ugly to earn the extra credit And from the back half of my grey matter Turning numb from mindless chatter But Society will silently suffer Burdened down with crowns churning from an endless gutter Plastic trash meshing poorly, piling into a funeral pyre Ever burning and choking out the ****** cooperate liars No wonder gas mask production is up As I'm getting ready to upchuck my lunch Sorry for getting stuck, or regressive But batter up, **** get ready for restoration Claiming good as bad With every passing fad Distracting all my would be comrades Zombify the undergrads I don't have time for mindless upheaval And replacement
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Jul 14, 2017
Jul 14, 2017 at 3:03 AM UTC
Investment 101