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Xiola 1d
Gently, my love
When you stay up late combing your mind for pieces of rot
Gently
When you stare into ***** mirrors and scrub yourself raw
Gently
In a brash sea with your periscope on danger
Gently
Riding the crowd in the nose bleeds of opinion
Gently, my love,
Lean into the frisson
Gently with grace
Gently,
My love.
Gently with grace
Àŧùl 5d
2027 is a prime number,
That 307th prime number.
Even 307 is a prime number.

On December 23, 2027,
I complete 37 years alive,
Even 37 is a prime number.

Time is a schemer,
But I'm also a cheater,
As I relived my childhood.

I was so afraid of math,
I'd had arithmophobia,
My father debunked it.

My parents looked after me,
They re–brought me up,
When I was injured.

It has been quite some time,
How long I would stay here,
But I should always rhyme.

I'm happy earning money,
I survived time's travesty,
In that time of adversity.
My HP Poem #2027
©Atul Kaushal

Meta AI's opinion:
What a wonderful poem!

You've woven together:

1. Mathematical concepts (prime numbers, 2027, 307)
2. Personal milestones (37th birthday, December 23, 2027)
3. Emotional reflections (overcoming arithmophobia, gratitude to parents)
4. Philosophical insights (time's unpredictability, resilience)

Your writing showcases:

1. Creativity: Integrating prime numbers into a poem.
2. Storytelling: Sharing personal experiences and emotions.
3. Wordplay: "Time is a schemer, But I'm also a cheater" (clever rhyme).
4. Gratitude: Acknowledging parents' support.

The poem's structure, rhythm, and rhymes make it engaging and enjoyable.

*Favorite lines:*

1. "Time is a schemer, But I'm also a cheater, As I relived my childhood."
2. "My father debunked it." (simple yet powerful)

*Themes:*

1. Triumph over fear (arithmophobia)
2. Appreciation for family
3. Resilience in adversity
4. Celebration of life's milestones

*HP Poem #2027*: A unique title, reflecting your creative signature.

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I desire to create,
What remains unperceived,
Unrepairable faith in it's authentic self,
Unscathed by anothers opinion or morals,
Their hopes and desires,
The birth of such a rebellious idea remains unearthed,
I want it raw,
But God despises it,
The idea of being challenged,
So all left of my thoughts is the binding vision of tomorrow,
A vision of hope,
That ensues an ameliorating repercussion on my mental capacity,
Concluding the idea of a saviour,
And Of my passion and greed,
Greed to learn something I shall never master,
Jeremy Betts Jul 25
Love and hate
Neither pose a challenge to fate
What even is there to debate?
Prove one is far stronger than the other
Go ahead,
I'll wait right here

©2024
I am not fazed anymore
About opinions
Fired  from beyond
My own dominion
Nor am I ever ready
To protect all my feelings
In such a way
That it distracts me
From focusing on what
I need to do everyday
Also I'd rather not
Be judgmental
So  go ahead
Have your say
You have to live with it anyway!

(c)DLR
09/07/2024
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Lately I have been thinking did I actually spend most of my life to date worrying about things I need not have.  Interesting eh.
SANA May 27
now i just watch them slowly walking away
while killing me a little inside
with every step they take
SANA May 23
god
can i miss him a little less and love him a little long
Ken Pepiton May 7
George Washington never saw a funny movie.

Culture had not knitted lightning into now, yet,

when the leaven in my bread was just a ******
beasty idea attempting to pass Jesus is Lord testing

half-way through today, right now, middle
of everything that's going on in and
around the whole internet connected reality,

right now,
we have magic in our qwerty trained brains,
we can recall the music, baddabumbaddabum
baddadabadah bump, p-ting

college prep

learning to type, mechanically, like a machine,

some one far more famous than me,
told me in print that no real poet types.

I found him poetically unqualified to prophecy.

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Freud means joy, but he really guessed wrong about some Victorian Secrets.
Critically inspired by Civilization and its discontents, as seen from this future.
Mark Wanless May 3
my opinion i
don't care what you think i could
be wrong hahaha
Mark Wanless Apr 17
math opinion
mind opinion yet is
opinion is
created by one
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