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Woes of a Writer (unfinished)

by noah-a-baker

A lot of time spent having miscellaneous conversations with the air. Even stupid questions like "how's your day" acting as if it'd give an answer, or, even more, a whisper of inspiration It's an obligation, or, maybe a delegation, or, a confirmation? that we will create a masterpiece before insane peace With a piece of our minds becoming a little less peaceful by the day. Soon our minds will turn into violent catapults hurling out sentence after sentence making our paper bleed                                                      Black, Blue, Red, Gray Joining a cult created by the letters we created ourselves falling into the abyss these stanzas and paragraphs invite us into And don't get me wrong, it sounds terrible, but it's home. There's no place like it. Where these words are so much more than words, they're family. But frequently, we get into arguments that erupt into something sinister and our desks become littered with papers that wilt and wither into nothing more than liters upon liters of a type of alcoholic beverage that'll tempt us into becoming outspoken drunkards But that's the goal: to be outspoken.
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noah-a-baker
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Written by
noah-a-baker
American
Published
Mar 31, 2014
Time
2m
Notes

hm. I need criticism on this, please.

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