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Bree Anna Apr 2015
I love you
I miss you
Oh god I want to kiss you
Please my darling baby
Won’t you come and stay with me

Let’s spend our life together
Even through stormy weather
As long as we’ve got each other
That’s all we need
We can live together
So happily
In love forever
An eternity
Bree Anna Apr 2015
Remember that day
That my heart broke?
I asked about her, and you began to choke
You held me close, you kissed my cheek
You told me it was a big conspiracy

I believed you at first
Yes, I was blind
I didn’t want to believe
You had lied

When I found out the truth,
I wanted to slap you in the head
at that very moment
I wished I was dead

Maybe I am just not enough

but the truth is I did nothing wrong
I was the best I could be all along
if you want to cheat on someone,
then go ahead and see
you will end up alone
losing me
I deserve the best
she’ll break your heart
she’ll do to you
karma’s part

but let me ask
was she worth breaking my heart?
The pain and regret from the very start?
You told her you loved her
I thought you loved me?
One day I know
that you WILL see
Revisions and constructive criticism please!
Bree Anna Apr 2015
You said you loved me
Held me tight
You kissed my forehead
Kept me safe through the night

But you kissed her too
You held her tight
You loved her too
Now we’re in a fight

How can I ever trust you
You kissed other girls
How can I ever love you
You loved other girls

I'll never feel good enough
I'll never fully smile
I'll never be truly happy
I'll never forgive you liar!
Constructive criticism and revisions for this one please!
Bree Anna Apr 2015
Fire
                                           Like Fire, I’m brave
                                                 Courageous
                                                 I have spark
                                                    Passion­
                                         Vigorous enthusiasm
                                                 But, like fire,
                                              I’m also irritable
                                    I destroy love, relationships,
                                          And I burn bridges
                                     I burst into sudden anger
                                                    Jealous­y
                                  Eruptions of past heartbreaks
                               But, unlike fire, I can be calm like

Air
                                                I’m carefree
                                                Kind-hea­rted
                                           Too easily trusting
                                            I’m independent
                                                 Optimistic
                                                   Diligent
                                        Light and free flowing
                                                 But, like air,
                                           I can be dishonest
                                                   Cunning
                                               Backstabbing
                                                Inco­nsistent
                              But, unlike air, I am forgiving like

Water
                                                I am devoted
                                                     Modest
                                                    Intuit­ive
                                                     Loving
                                               But, like water,
                                          I’m taken for granted
                                             Often over looked
                                                     Unstable
                                                   Unreliable
                                                      ­ Rigid
                                                        Laz­y
                                         Violent and moody
                             But, unlike water, I am humble like

Earth
                                              I am cautious
                                                Resistan­t
                                              Responsible
     ­                                              Sober
                                               Ambitious
                                               Respectful
                                                Punctu­al
                                            But, like Earth,
                                               I’m touchy
                                                  Timid
  ­                                              Scornful
          ­                        And periodically dormant
I wrote this one around February. Any thoughts or suggestions?
Bree Anna Apr 2015
Sleepy sleepy lullaby
Im ready ready, time to die
**** me, **** me
In my sleep
Run your tallons
Real real deep
Take me please
I ask real nice
Please **** me **** me
Gouge my eyes
Choke me, scratch me
Pull my hair
Cut me open, blood everywhere
I’ll ask again
Real real nice
Please **** me
In my sleep tonight
Wrote this one in October of last year.
Bree Anna Apr 2015
I lay here in the dark of night
Misty fog around my eyes
How could you **** me?
Crush my soul
You evil devil
I’ll let you know,
I see you on the streets,
and on the train.
In strangers’ faces,
I see the pain
Your footprints show
throughout my life
They follow me
into the dark of night
I wrote this one in October of last year.
Bree Anna Apr 2015
Darkness
Stale air
Death
I’d recognize it anywhere
The end
Oblivion
Wrote it in October. I just found it again. Any suggestions?
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