Jack Jenkins
Jack Jenkins
3 days ago

take me to the shore
where seagulls cry among rocks
taste the salty air

#haiku   #on   #when   #still   #salt   #beach   #sand   #jack   #sands   #jenkins  

There once was a woman
-- a baker, a chef -- claimed by many
to be.. a liv-ing god-dess, but she.. was jus-s-s-st ..an-artist;
however, far---- ...beyond, the rest.  Each one of her morsels...
individual masterpieces... with individual, homemade-auras.

Her pastries, her candies, her honey
-- oh-so sweet -- her cake, with her frosting...
She once-produced.. such irresistible treats.
Those sugar-dusted desserts ...enriched with her cream:
this woman created that which most only dream..

Although, as people do, she started to cry.

Into her mixing-bowl -- falling ...from her eyes --
..tears did travel.  ‘Tis said even deeper...
-- outside of the brim of the bowl --
..tis said they dripped downwards, dampened her soul -
that they tenaciously trickled, rusting her forge..
&.. inner-anvil.

Not-yet fully bitter, yet still bittering-sweet...
Regardless, results, showed that there was nothing honeyed ...left..
baked, or drizzled passionately to a T..
                ...to ...eat.

For her sweets no longer edible now, but rather overly salted, instead...
They taste like she sweat & sweat & sweat, & then stood ..upside-down,
& wrung all the sweat into her mixing-bowl from her head.

“I am sorry,”  she cried.  “It is not my fault."

She echoed,  "I am human ....only human.”

What was once~sugared, leaked now:
...nothing, but water & salt.

Haven't gone through and italicized that which should be italicized.  Apologies.
#tears   #sweet   #salt   #sugar   #sweets   #cooking   #baking   #treat   #treats   #ambrosia  
Selesha
Selesha
Jan 6

Being in love with your best friend's partner is like revelling in the destruction of a tsunami.
You watch the waves roll and weave their way through the closing sky and yet you stand boldly on the beach front -
Arms open and eyes closed
The feeling of cracking wide inside you,
but you're a masochist, and the pain is your drug,
the only antidote to the touch of
The forbidden fruit.

Being in love with your best friend's partner is like tearing open all your bandaged wounds, just to let the salt rub them dry
again and again and
Again.

#love   #sadness   #forbidden   #sea   #salt   #bestfriend   #wounds  

I am trying
but trying doesn't make
deep wounds heal any faster,

and you rubbing salt in them
does not help them to
hurt any less.

~~ From another time, where things seemed much worse without anything being that different. ~~
#pain   #time   #hurt   #past   #stop   #fast   #try   #salt   #fix   #heal  

i remember the soft sand
that never burnt my feet
because you were with me.

i remember the calm ocean
when the waves were soft
on the shore we got lost.

i remember the salt smell
that had felt so cleansing
you were my best friend
the ocean, you, the sand.

i remember the sun’s reflection
that rippled with the water
and your eyes were never brighter.

i remember the shells we found
waist deep in water or just wandering
with you i had never felt calmer.

but the night was cold
while our hands were warm
as we floated in the starry water.

the wolf and the ocean's love story - innocence (part two)
#sun   #water   #ocean   #salt   #bestfriend   #sand   #seashells  
Atul Kaushal
Atul Kaushal
Nov 30, 2016

In these youth that only ditch,
There is a thread loosely stitch,
They gave a name for the glitch.

They just feel so entangled,
If I could satiate the deranged,
I would have felt happier & loved.

Not in the slightest her fault,
The fault is in my safety vault,
I can't protect it by adding salt.

She had her personality affected,
On the borderline of love she was,
She might get better when matured.

So I will wait for her to grow up,
Because mangoes are sour unripe,
So she might not repent her flurry.

Even though she is upset now,
I should patiently wait for her,
Us both together, life be wow!

She suffers a borderline personality disorder,
And I suffer its deranged consequences,
But I have not given up yet on her.

Of course, it was a relationship,
And every ship sails in waters,
Salt gets dissolved in water.

So she got bored when the salt subdued.
She is beautiful, young and youthful.
She shows the Borderline Personality Disorder.

It is marked by quick changes in opinions.

In BPD, people have dramatic changes in their interpersonal relationships, self-image, moods, and behaviour. Borderline personality disorder usually becomes evident in adolescence or early adulthood and becomes less common with age.

And her BPD is to be blamed for my loss.

Main poem rhyme scheme:
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HP Poem #1287
©Atul Kaushal
#in   #relationship   #water   #gets   #salt   #ship   #dissolved  
Mary Ab
Mary Ab
Oct 14, 2016

P===>Put everything aside, get away from your worldly problems, let your soul fly in the skies of faith by the starting point of "takbirat elihram" Allah is the Greatest , and everything is just none ...

R===> Relax your soul and refresh your mind , let your every vain of heart be filled with the purest glimpses of light, of pure love and eternal true belief ..

A===> Awaken your soul from its oblivion and remember that every single creature on earth is praying to Allah,  the Almighty ..

Y===> Yearn for paradise, imagine its eternal beauty and enchanting rewards with every move in your prayer ...


E===> Engage in your salât with the deepest concentration and embrace Allah's marvellous bounties on you ! Be a thankful grateful servant !

R===> Repent to your Lord whenever you sin ... Repentance is embedded in your salât, Allah is the most merciful , just be sincere and declare your honest repentance ...




Rule your life the way you want , YOU ARE THE LEADER OF YOUR OWN LIFE.  

أقم صلاتك ... تستقم حياتك !
by : Meriem.A

Salât : Islamic prayer
#love   #prayer   #life   #honest   #salt   #repentance   #allah   #each   #leader  

Be careful
Some times it's hard to tell salt from sugar,
I have found,
People are like that too.

#nice   #salt   #mean   #sugar   #tricks  
Brent
Brent
Sep 26, 2016

Rain
slowly pouring down
as all the fragments of time, space,
and every dimension,
collide between every tear
that falls from your lover's eyes.

Rain
is nothing
but salty water.

#love   #sad   #life   #pain   #tears   #cry   #time   #space   #salt   #dimension  
Light House
Light House
Sep 25, 2016

She -- the black -- which had salted him,
as well as every single one of his wounds.
But he - be the white, now blotching her;
he be the white, peppered now
on her skin.

Many call some situations & life in general, "grey or gray." Others see things for as they are, "black & white."
#black   #white   #her   #him   #perspective   #salt   #grey   #gray   #pepper  
 
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