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"tendentious" poems
Nowhere is now here, desolation; within my adulterated honesty you took from me that which you did not believe I still owned in your break-neck speed habitually freed into earthly delight in the last shades of dim light wild with sin, hiding a sparse vapid wilderness within. You firmly handle my grip as milky droplets of ineptitude drip.
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Oct 27, 2010
Oct 27, 2010 at 8:50 PM UTC
Tendentious.
Contemporary poetry does not have allure for me. It is full of adjectives, but at the end I ask, “what gives?” No meaning, point, or moral clear, no joy or anger, love or fear. Words are crafted carefully, but in the lines I do not see any interesting story. It is boring, I am sorry! What happened to imagination? Ecstasy and indignation? If Donne or Longfellow wrote now, editors would not say “wow!” Verses passionate by Blake publishers would not take. “That Poe guy’s maudlin, Yeats pretentious; Allen Ginsberg is tendentious. Tennyson’s an epic bore; his lengthy rhymes of days of yore are not to our liking,” they’d say. I would like to see the day when poetry regains emotion. I even have the novel notion that we’d welcome the returning of passionate and lustful yearning. Of rhyme and meter, song and lyric. Or of verses bitterly satiric. If I read more sterile free verse I’ll toss the magazine and curse.
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Nov 4, 2016
Nov 4, 2016 at 9:21 AM UTC
A Letter to the Poetry Editor of The New Yorker
It sits out in your driveway a glittering metallic sculpture. It costs more than your house, you love it more than your spouse. You can hardly drive it, it’s too high, you can barely park it, it’s so wide. Like an exotic compulsion, you need it, though you can barely afford to feed it. There’s a cockpit with winking tech, offering a printer, wi-fi and refrigeration. It can pull a house off its foundation. Is there a tendentious ecological statement, in this prestigious monster you claim is for work? Is the fact that it’s tax deductible just a perk? With this polished and pampered machine, you get the rewards of effective parenting, as it literally reflects the care that it’s given. It’s a spaceship ready for expedition, what else in creation is as elysian, as your gigantic pickup truck. . . songs for this: Dreamin’ by G. Love and Special Sauce Driving by Everything but the Girl Get Me Some by Drew Love, TOKiMONSTA & Dumbfoundead
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Apr 28, 2024
Apr 28, 2024 at 5:49 PM UTC
pickups
At times like this, amok often reigns in the head Complaints accompany sleep all day Revolt to and fro It's never good from the right or left ear Awake when people isolate themselves; dying Sleep with an effort to escape tendentious thoughts Perceived briefly in the planning that was never discussed Missing monologue with swearing and cracking and cursing Traces and shadows haunt the footsteps The devil opened the door wide; come on! Sobs broke out The children in the soul are no longer heard Buitenzorg April, 2020
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May 1, 2020
May 1, 2020 at 9:36 AM UTC
Adrift
A loop in the middle of the line-track of life gathering the final dreams but yawning infinite abyss of sorrow eternal man-dness desire extasis pale golden dream that's bringing the knowledge and dusk from an era to new dawn golden as well the fishes and Sun and mirror and stars and fire thats burning inside the chest Oh! You and my multiple hearts hidding yourself to the public, full of old and pernicious wishes ready to die in each single moment pausa 30 seconds later we'll watch where the night deposit a scumbag inside a box and a box inside a bag as and old, and pernicious too tendentious joke.
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Feb 27, 2018
Feb 27, 2018 at 2:04 PM UTC
Golden wishes, and the fish... es
ambitious, surreptitious, the divine, habitats mesic renounced, from the zenith to the horizon, blue the firmament, the heyday of the Hohenzollern, hurrying stars challenging the sun, hues unidentified for imputation, wild actions for massive vile feasts, surrender although merciless, render mustered defenders of night a promised glory of summer days, top hamper's ephemeral shadows, read missals, winds high nocturnal, sempiternal, temperaments submissive or passive, missives from the gullible victimised given the defenders of divinity toil and moil for wondrous eyes of immortals, look to the future although worthless, perfumes of irascible Arabia, all charged with statistics mendacious, an affinity for false repudiation, parasitic Memphis inundated with unlucky calls tendentious, sunglow tombolos put at risk
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Oct 3, 2020
Oct 3, 2020 at 3:54 AM UTC
ambitious, surreptitious, the divine, habitats mesic