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"overeager" poems
my childhood was removed from me inside of a blue mustang and what remained after that I tried to barter off the highest bidder but I grew, not up, but forward further away slowly releasing hands of defiance fists chock full of hopeless words like anger, the flavor that aches the bone, the cold kind, more barren than the green of Christmas lights glimmering off the icy veneer of a white picket fence overeager, in the apathy of theatrics, to strip off the remainder because the empty feeling that followed might one day make a decent poem
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Dec 13, 2015
Dec 13, 2015 at 6:27 PM UTC
blue
Acrid stenches of contrived action stain his sloppy, uneven speeches gallantry is unnerving, obnoxious to me, even in the grandest favors. I sniff with all my offended senses. To a bloodhound nose, it's cloying. He smells like he's trying too hard, trying too hard smells sour, biting. I prefer challenges from a cunning, a silver-tongued fox. Let me chase. Subtle while retaining the ability to remain brazen, aye, there's the rub. Chomping at the bit, the overeager and easily pleased are not my kind, the authentic and untamed always give me more rise than an easy bait.
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 6:56 PM UTC
chasing
fingers tapping against your thigh, music note mumblings. subtract everyone else and watch the feeling m   u      l        t          i            p               l                 y disassemble and reassemble the ensemble and allocate your earnings as earnestly as you can without appearing overeager. overhearing a conspiracy between my lips and your neck. a secret isn't a secret unless you whisper it, so do it, make sure the russians don't hear us as they rush off to give reports on that look I just gave you, the one that is oh so telling. reveling in it. living in the revelation of your skin, pouring down your presence like honey, like sweet molasses dripping thick and sweet, simmering under the sun, glimmering in the water like a jewel, jealous and **** painful and dark and dazzling. beating only in anatomical hearts, out of tune, cacophony and cruel crimson, missing someone not something, left wanting and waning in the light of a lopsided moon, farsighted and fingers that prune in purple light rippling across the walls, willing to travel the planes of your body, embodied travesty traversing the sahara, dunes doomed to be swept away by the wind, breaking and kept away, each grain unable to touch one another more than once, gorgeous enough to be pain, staking your claim on misery before the misers bury it in their own backyards, backwards discovery, a convenient amnesia, believing ruses and runes to decipher in delicate dictum like tricking a language into translating itself. almost too much of not enough.
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Apr 23, 2017
Apr 23, 2017 at 12:14 PM UTC
3:03 am
fingers tapping against your thigh, music note mumblings. subtract everyone else and watch the feeling m   u      l        t          i            p               l                 y disassemble and reassemble the ensemble and allocate your earnings as earnestly as you can without appearing overeager. overhearing a conspiracy between my lips and your neck. a secret isn't a secret unless you whisper it, so do it, make sure the russians don't hear us as they rush off to give reports on that look I just gave you, the one that is oh so telling. reveling in it. living in the revelation of your skin, pouring down your presence like honey, like sweet molasses dripping thick and sweet, simmering under the sun, glimmering in the water like a jewel, jealous and **** painful and dark and dazzling. beating only in anatomical hearts, out of tune, cacophony and cruel crimson, missing someone not something, left wanting and waning in the light of a lopsided moon, farsighted and fingers that prune in purple light rippling across the walls, willing to travel the planes of your body, embodied travesty traversing the sahara, dunes doomed to be swept away by the wind, breaking and kept away, each grain unable to touch one another more than once, gorgeous enough to be pain, staking your claim on misery before the misers bury it in their own backyards, backwards discovery, a convenient amnesia, believing ruses and runes to decipher in delicate dictum like tricking a language into translating itself. almost too much of not enough.
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Tomorrow is St. Patrick's Day, again, and I'm wearing green shoes, green shirt-- overeager as usual. I've never really enjoyed St. Patrick's Day, or any other holiday, for that matter, and I find it ironic that the more significance we give to a person or event the more their meaning is deluded. But it's good to have something to look forward to. Today, in America, St. Patrick may as well be a naked, red-headed lepperchaun. People don't care about him as much as me; they don't get out of bed each day that week wearing green and scoffing at the timid early-spring sun gazing at the short-sleeved men and brown-thighed women. Maybe it matters to them that suntans at the beginning are only de-tubed relics of an ancient, burning photosynthesis relinquished to the ground. It matters to me more that these women think-- even more, know!-- that it is too late in the early spring to cover their legs and allow the pale, unready skin lie in hibernation. They want to show the men their defined calves and undefined dreams. They fain naivety with bright hues, such as Kelly. And I frown, because I know they have to do this, or I wouldn't notice them. Waking up and putting green shirts on the whole week leading up to St. Patrick's day. Anticipating the Spring, which is already here, they raise their glistening arms in the air and lean back, smiling, to sing a toast to the short, Irish martyr. Who wouldn't rub their flesh with dripping tongues for fingers?
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Mar 16, 2012
Mar 16, 2012 at 8:59 PM UTC
St. Patrick's Day Eve
Searching I always thought the iPhone the most human of devices. I named mine George. Like an overeager child George buzzes when engaged. Spent, he recharges to the sixty second cycle of a resting heart. Last night in a hotel bar, an accidental altercation with a roughhousing stein of Great Lakes Lager, ruined the inner George. Now, when shaken, George rattles. No longer able to connect, the heart-rending message “searching,” parades across his shattered screen. How human that yearning for connectedness?
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May 6, 2016
May 6, 2016 at 1:55 PM UTC
Searching
The air is clear tonight I am relaxed overeager hooligans are shooting fireworks into the face of the muggy night sky The light summer breeze smells like her my head is swimming with words the right one always on the tip of my tongue the right one always out of reach a family on the sidewalk out front of their house the women fat and weathered the men unkempt and wiry small children running around laughing and a disabled man sitting in the open door of a car which blares bluegrass and I am yet to walk the hills where does this trail lead? or better yet, what does any of this mean? blah blah blah yaddah yaddah yaddah tonight, none of that matters
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Jul 9, 2014
Jul 9, 2014 at 12:07 PM UTC
On A Night Like This
Shadows slowly cast themselves Upon a stranger’s face today As we sat in silence in the waiting rooms of Hell I stared with transfixed fascination As those shadows kept at bay What little life there was to have inside this putrid cell I felt a hunger as I trembled Morbid thoughts and plots were formed And I began to taste the darkness forming at the edge Promises of bloodlines broken Hopes and dreams obliterated I stalked my prey in silence as I stepped onto the ledge The kiss of death sublime Euphoric in sweet savagery I cleared the mental cliffs as I embraced the crimson tide Sanity and boundaries broken Flesh consumed and penetrated Welcoming the howling of the hell that lives inside Skin and bone I have become Flesh and blood have drained away This heartless shell has grown forever cold To the pain I now succumb An overeager addict slave Watching fractured sanity unfold Memories, they scar my soul Just like a dull and rusty blade More deeply scar the memories that fade I can't take back what I've become But I will surely give away The violence created by mistakes I have made Twilight shines on blinded eyes As blood congeals and silence falls Though the taste of ****** sweetly lingers yet a while Every scream and every cry Nourishing the membrane walls ******** satisfaction brings a cold, sadistic smile Drops of crimson such a pleasure On both skin and ragged clothes The smell of exposed entrails bringing mad, euphoric bliss Lust for killing beyond measure Entering the final throes Still no less ****** than a long-dead lover’s kiss And oh, the lies I tell myself Of how this last will be the end That no more will I give in to the sweet, addictive urge Until the shadows cast themselves Within the mirror once again The promise will be broken as the want and need emerge Skin and bone I have become Flesh and blood have drained away This heartless shell has grown forever cold To the pain I now succumb An overeager addict slave Watching fractured sanity unfold Memories, they scar my soul Just like a dull and rusty blade More deeply scar the memories that fade I can't take back what I've become But I will surely give away The violence created by mistakes I have made An animal I have become Humanity is stripped away Lust for blood will never be controlled Falling farther beyond numb Finding darker games to play My dark mind consumes my very soul Death resides within the hole My failures and mistakes have made As I deny salvation’s masquerade I won’t take back what I’ve become But I will surely strip away The shadow-mask contagion of your bleeding-heart charade
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 4:15 AM UTC
Shadow of Silence
Shadows slowly cast themselves Upon a stranger’s face today As we sat in silence in the waiting rooms of Hell I stared with transfixed fascination As those shadows kept at bay What little life there was to have inside this putrid cell I felt a hunger as I trembled Morbid thoughts and plots were formed And I began to taste the darkness forming at the edge Promises of bloodlines broken Hopes and dreams obliterated I stalked my prey in silence as I stepped onto the ledge The kiss of death sublime Euphoric in sweet savagery I cleared the mental cliffs as I embraced the crimson tide Sanity and boundaries broken Flesh consumed and penetrated Welcoming the howling of the hell that lives inside Skin and bone I have become Flesh and blood have drained away This heartless shell has grown forever cold To the pain I now succumb An overeager addict slave Watching fractured sanity unfold Memories, they scar my soul Just like a dull and rusty blade More deeply scar the memories that fade I can't take back what I've become But I will surely give away The violence created by mistakes I have made Twilight shines on blinded eyes As blood congeals and silence falls Though the taste of ****** sweetly lingers yet a while Every scream and every cry Nourishing the membrane walls ******** satisfaction brings a cold, sadistic smile Drops of crimson such a pleasure On both skin and ragged clothes The smell of exposed entrails bringing mad, euphoric bliss Lust for killing beyond measure Entering the final throes Still no less ****** than a long-dead lover’s kiss And oh, the lies I tell myself Of how this last will be the end That no more will I give in to the sweet, addictive urge Until the shadows cast themselves Within the mirror once again The promise will be broken as the want and need emerge Skin and bone I have become Flesh and blood have drained away This heartless shell has grown forever cold To the pain I now succumb An overeager addict slave Watching fractured sanity unfold Memories, they scar my soul Just like a dull and rusty blade More deeply scar the memories that fade I can't take back what I've become But I will surely give away The violence created by mistakes I have made An animal I have become Humanity is stripped away Lust for blood will never be controlled Falling farther beyond numb Finding darker games to play My dark mind consumes my very soul Death resides within the hole My failures and mistakes have made As I deny salvation’s masquerade I won’t take back what I’ve become But I will surely strip away The shadow-mask contagion of your bleeding-heart charade
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If she could have got inside her head, Nadya thinks, she is sure, her mind can expand like an inner universe. The thoughts moving around like lost planets, clusters of stars, images, words, faces, actions remembered. If she could just put her hand into a hidden orifice and reach into her brain and sort amongst the galaxies of ideas she could be brighter, braver, wiser, and there clinging to certain ideas associations like Proust’s madeleines would be old loves, broken heart moments, melodies from favourite songs. Josef has told her to leave off the ***** to put away the bottles, drink water, tea or whatever. But he does not satisfy. His love making is a joke, all push and poke. Sometimes she thinks her thoughts come out of her head and dance. Time for another drink. She thinks of Paris. Summers past, spring walks. Josef’s endless chatter breaks in; those all too intellectual boring talks. She imagines him as another, pretends some young Russian overeager tends to her, embraces her body, kisses each inch of her flesh, pleasure giving. No more of this boring life, more of that wild, touching the new, exploring *** living.
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Jul 21, 2012
Jul 21, 2012 at 4:22 AM UTC
NADYA IMAGINES.
She trips and falls into my path, overeager with bright smiles and a kindness she tries to conceal. The first time we met she fell into my bed on the pretence of stealing music and laughter. Persistent she hovers on the edge of my life, ready to invade, for a time, whenever invited. She has soft skin and hands that are engulfed by mine; a quiet voice that falters when shouting. I wonder if she has other men, who too extend the right to stay only for a while. I wonder if she likes it. And I wonder of the hesitation that drops from my skin to hers.
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Jun 20, 2015
Jun 20, 2015 at 5:05 AM UTC
How you see me. Part 1.
there is a girl in your bed, her jewelry tossed to the nightstand because you were careless in the dark ankles peeking out from the sheets, hair splayed out like a painting, wild and frozen in the moment of some unknown dream, and you want it not to matter, you said that it was simple, that it was just ******* when you pressed your hand flat against her back and rammed your teeth together in overeager kisses and grinned in lazy triumph when she sighed in your mouth, you said, “don’t worry, this doesn’t mean a thing” you collected phrases to armor the cavity in your chest “it’s just *** “nothing to talk about” “i don’t feel anything” but she stayed the night, pale light from the window is tracing where you’ve kissed; her bony shoulders, the freckles that collar her throat, the purple-red bruise you left just below her right ear now blossoming so much more beautiful than the alcohol and the night would ever let you dream up there is a girl in your bed and you ache with how it matters.
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Aug 8, 2014
Aug 8, 2014 at 9:47 PM UTC
what it isn't
What is known as the Great Divide? The Continental Divide, also known as the Great Divide, is one of the most iconic and essential mountain ranges in the Americas, dividing the continents in half and extending all the way from the Cape Prince of Wales in Alaska to the Strait of Magellan at the southernmost tip of South America. <> Perhaps. I have seen the Great Divide from 30,000 feet and not known & appreciated what I had seen, voyaged across. For sure, I have watched witnessed, crossed and embraced, no doubt and have breathed the new air over our current continental divide, though some will say it always was, and never disappeared this divided country, a deep rendering, more a sundering, a shearing trench where the state of your statutory residence maybe a bad bad, color so don’t drink from the same walter  fountain as me, don’t **** in any toilet I might use, and keep your kids far,far away from mine or I’ll make their corrupted minds happily ill at ease enough. you get my drift, that’s a big hint go live among your “kind” stay not my side of the line, drift away for I be overeager to show you the contents of my democratic gun collection oh yeah, God Bless America
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Sep 23, 2024
Sep 23, 2024 at 11:48 AM UTC
The Great Divide
do you know this dream? tied to a fence, barking. the mailman comes, afraid - he confuses your overeager friendliness with ill feeling. do you know this dream? the sun never goes away - your cratered imperfection never shows his face. do you know this dream? on her sleeve worn, you wear away. the wind never blows you straight - do you know this dream?
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Sep 30, 2018
Sep 30, 2018 at 11:25 AM UTC
Untitled
Stream of consciousness ... Go— The best days are ahead, I know. I think? I hope. But I want to be happy now. And these highs and lows are neither high nor low. Everything is sustained by nothing more than a monotone heart rate while inside a voice cries "static is suicide." And I don't know if I am relieved or offended that you didn't think I was a cheerleader. And I don't know why it even matters. And my best friend let me down, but I don't want to talk about it. And how can someone get to know me when I don't yet know myself? And mom and dad, there has been no drought. Consistently watered, my deeply rooted insecurities have only grown. And most days I just want to go home, yet that very thought is what drives me mad. Give me something that gets me out of bed. I don't care if it cools my lungs or burns my throat, just give it to me. My hands are greedy, my heart overeager. Because even though Jack Kerouac said that it is dreams that unite all humans beings and although I melt at that beauty of that thought, I want to be kissed in this life. I want to be kissed today. I wanted to be kissed yesterday. How do you be an active participant in your fate yet still let Destiny do it's thing? I don't want to live in cottony allusions that are spun from slumber and made into the burdening burgundy sweater I must put on to go outside. My dreams don't release me— they make me sad and sentimental. Give me a life worth dreaming about. A life to inspire dreams— not a life lived with eyelids shut.
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Oct 25, 2014
Oct 25, 2014 at 12:28 PM UTC
James Joycin' it
Stream of consciousness ... Go— The best days are ahead, I know. I think? I hope. But I want to be happy now. And these highs and lows are neither high nor low. Everything is sustained by nothing more than a monotone heart rate while inside a voice cries "static is suicide." And I don't know if I am relieved or offended that you didn't think I was a cheerleader. And I don't know why it even matters. And my best friend let me down, but I don't want to talk about it. And how can someone get to know me when I don't yet know myself? And mom and dad, there has been no drought. Consistently watered, my deeply rooted insecurities have only grown. And most days I just want to go home, yet that very thought is what drives me mad. Give me something that gets me out of bed. I don't care if it cools my lungs or burns my throat, just give it to me. My hands are greedy, my heart overeager. Because even though Jack Kerouac said that it is dreams that unite all humans beings and although I melt at that beauty of that thought, I want to be kissed in this life. I want to be kissed today. I wanted to be kissed yesterday. How do you be an active participant in your fate yet still let Destiny do it's thing? I don't want to live in cottony allusions that are spun from slumber and made into the burdening burgundy sweater I must put on to go outside. My dreams don't release me— they make me sad and sentimental. Give me a life worth dreaming about. A life to inspire dreams— not a life lived with eyelids shut.
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The pen is not your friend But you don't know that yet You sit clenched fist looking nowhere mind going everywhere or drawing a blank You've clenched your fist too tight Blood is never blue but if it were it might look like this Rivers cascading down to your wrist the ink finding a home in the crevices of your hand Your pen is not flying the page is not splattered with overeager writing Instead you're left with a sticky hand and a mess to clean up
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May 12, 2020
May 12, 2020 at 12:45 AM UTC
Writer's Block
I was always a bit overeager at answering questions I just wanted to make sure everyone knew I wasn't totally clueless.
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Dec 5, 2015
Dec 5, 2015 at 10:29 PM UTC
raising my hand