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Akhil Bhadwal Apr 2015
He danced, we watched
He felt, and let
His trance, our stance
He showed, and we bowed

His aggression, our passion
His fiery vision, was truly art fusion


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Inspired by an awesome performance based on Lord Shiva's Tandava
Akhil Bhadwal Oct 2014
We were helping ourselves, with a lot of fun
And suddenly, I noticed something shining in the sun
The beautiful landscape, was looking very divine
As the mountains, in the sunlight, brilliantly shine

It was something I had seen before, at times
Though, never thought this could fit into a chorus of rhymes
These, known by the name of Chood Dhar range
Was Lord Shiva' s land, the sacred plains

Yes, they were beautiful, like white pearls in the ocean
Below the snow, the mountain, looked like a green lotion
A notion, that made a lot of words for me to contain
Finally I, name this prose, The White Mountains


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This is sixth original poem by me. It follows a a b b rhyme scheme. This poem describes the beauty of Chood Dhar mountains which is meant to be a sacred dwelling of Hindu God, Lord Shiva.
Àŧùl Feb 2015
Oh beloved princess,
I'm just a commoner,
I just drink cannabis,
Lime & shank I have.


You are daughter of the king,
I lack any maids or servants,
You are protected by shawls,
I lack even a blanket or rug..

Get married to a moneylender,
Marry a lucky man...

I have pieces of purity,
But I'm just a commoner,
I just drink cannabis,
Lime & shank I have.


You live in the palaces,
I roam the wilderness,
You are not used to it,
I am used to roaming.

Get married to a rich man,
Marry a lucky man.

I just have purity in me,
Yes, I'm a commoner,
I just drink cannabis,
Lime & shank is all I have.


I carry on my austerity in incense,
I drink a slurry of cinders,
I tame hundreds of snakes on my neck,
I will scare you off my saturnalia.

You need a man with wavy hair,
A man with wavy hair.

My hair is dishevelled,
I am a commoner,
And I drink cannabis,
All I have is a lime & shank.
Translation of a Haryanvi folk hymn.

According to folklore, Lord Shiva tells this to his future wife Sati who was a princess that wanted to get married to Shiva.

She has things her own way in the end and marries the God.

In the story, Sati enters the fire when Shiva drinks the venom after Samundra Manthan - a tussle for the Nectar and thus sparing Shiva his life.

Sati was reborn as Parvati who in turn is a manifestation of Shakti - the energy.

Such are mythical love stories.

My HP Poem #781
©Atul Kaushal
Nandini Aug 2014
Dances the universe in illusional darkness
Recreates light his third eye
Awakes shiva from his celestial slumber
Third eye of shiva : recreates light destroying darkness of illusions
Shiva : god in Hindu mythology

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