When writing poems there is no right or wrong.
It may be plain or sound just like a song.
Heroic couplets aren’t the only way.
Yet people always have to have their say.
It may be perfect, it may be not.
Just lose a syllable
Or go completely
Free.
Read unnamed samples of some classic works and you will see
That often you can add the names yourself.
They are distinctive.
A Shakespeare,
A Keats,
A Milton
Or a Yeats.
What matters is whether a poem works,
In some way,
At least for yourself.
Wrote the first verse in my notebook early in the morning then took it from there. Inspired by some forum debates.