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 Jul 2015 Lothlorien
JD
A storm followed me
day after day,
while the  rain poured
I had nothing to say.

So you came along
and made it go away,
the clouds have lifted
it's now a sunny day

The skies are blue
with not a shade of grey
and it's all thanks to you
for coming my way

I really don't know what else I can say
besides, you're beautiful
So here, I shall stay.
 Jul 2015 Lothlorien
JD
"Everyone I know went on a trip,
I found you with him later in it.
We all met up in a huge room
then switch who we were with in the end.."

Fights happened,
She went to go talk with him
I lost everyone
looking for hours until the sun went black.

I was robbed and lost, no one seemed to care
a gun was pointed a gun at my head
yes, I was scared.

I found her tho,
in place we once were
it turns out it wasn't only me looking for her.

She found me
we found them
left to go home
a new life began

I had my days
I had my time
got into fights
but always made them right

the fights  I had were not with her
but with those who cared..
she was my only
where I was finally her one.

She took the chance
we had our fun
She went missing
I looked for so long

She couldn't remember me
what went wrong?

I just held her close
with tears in my eyes
every moment I choked
please don't die..

With one last breath
I had awoken
I felt that pain in my chest.
unable to be spoken

I love her
we lived a life in my head
the Life with out her
made me wish I was dead

I'd deal with the pain
I'd go through it all
just to relive that moment
where I felt her in my arms.

I don't know what's wrong
maybe it's just Life
but God ******!
could we make it right?

"come to me
as I came you
like my dreams
you loved me too."

A soft kiss is how this will end
but, only hoping for it to really begin.
this is less detailed yet,  just a quick write of my dream.
I don't care how it sounds
but I feel from it.
 Jul 2015 Lothlorien
Julie Butler
tell her
tell them you love them
tell them dramatically so they hear you
say it everyday
remind him
tell him
tell her
make it a big deal
it is a big deal
love is everyday
be grateful for days
for love
for your mother and siblings
for your father and his heart
you only have now
it comes and goes by the second
grab all of those seconds
and be gentle
 Jun 2015 Lothlorien
Cecil Miller
I thought about you for a while today,
Imagined all the things I’d like to hear you say.
You said many things I wanted to be true,
And when I fantasized I said, “I love you, too.”

If only I could feel the things you feel,
Are you just a friend, or will more be revealed?
I know I’m not the perfect specimen.
But I love you now, and I will love you till the end.

And when you think of me,
Remember me with kindness.
If you go away,
Please, close the door with tenderness.
And all you are,
Is everything you could have been to me.
I know you would,
If only you could love me.

I sat in silence with my thoughts today.
And then I practiced all these things you’ll hear me say.
I never knew I had such feelings inside.
I would have said before, if it weren’t for my pride.

The truth is more like that I fear too much,
And do women like their men to be tough?
I wonder maybe if there could be a chance,
If I am bolder, so I’m here to show my stance.

And when you think of me,
Remember me with kindness.
If you go away,
Please, close the door with tenderness.
And all you are,
Is everything you could have been to me.
I know you would.
If only you could love me.

I knew that if I wore my feelings on my sleeve,
There was a chance that things would change and you would leave.
One in a million lucky few can feel like this.
I want to thank-you.
I love you.
You’re worth the risk.

My heart’s not broken, but it’s fortified.
You’ve taught me lessons, you brought joy to my life.
You’ve shown me kindness, and when to let go.
And lots of other things, I think you should know.

I have to tell you all these words I’ve said
Have just been swimming loudly ‘round in my head.
I didn’t mean to put you on the spot.
I am in love, even though you’re probably not.

And when you think of me,
Remember me with kindness.
If you go away,
Please, close the door with tenderness.
And all you are,
Is everything you could have been to me.
I know you would.
If only you could love me.

I knew that if I wore my feelings on my sleeve,
There was a chance that things would change and you would leave.
One in a million lucky few can feel like this.
I want to thank-you.
I love you.
You’re worth the risk.

Was writing for a musician friend, a guitarist, to see what he could do. Negotiations are on the table. Lyrics completed dec. 29, 2015. All copywrites reserved by the writer.
This is the second time I am posting this today. I deleated what I posted because of a bullying comment. I blocked the silly girl, but was unsure if it would remove her harrasing. Please do not comment, unless it it nice.
 Jun 2015 Lothlorien
JD
Heroes die
to show us the sacrifices from the start
of how much they cared in their hearts
to save the self centered people that we are.
I know this may seem odd.
You’ve probably heard stories about me, some of them may not be such good ones.
That’s why I’m writing this.

Don’t make the same mistake as me.

She likes someone who cares enough to be there but also lets her be free.

Don’t make the same mistake as me.

She’s not a materialistic person but remember it’s the little things that count.
Buy her flowers, surprise her with candy. She loves chocolate but not the dark kind so be sure you don’t get it or she’ll give you that grumpy look that is adorable but still means business.

Don’t make the same mistake as me.

She has a great sense of humor, is loyal beyond belief, has more beauty than meets the eye, and a smile that could end a war.
Admire everything about her.
The way she drinks from a cup as if she was a small child.
The way her eyes crinkle at the corner when she smiles.
The way that she laughs, because you can tell it is so genuine and filled with love.

Don’t make the same mistake as me.

She is more of an indoors type of girl. She likes to stay home, relax, maybe watch some tv shows while snuggled up against you.
Though, that doesn’t mean she doesn’t like to go out.
Take her to a funny movie, take her to a fancy dinner, entice her with a picnic in a park.

Don’t make the same mistake as me.

Don’t take her for granted.
Don’t flirt around with other girls if you get bored.
Don’t **** up your second chance if she gives you on, because she is just that loyal and loving that she will give you one.

Don’t you dare make her cry.

Her tears are the most depressing thing you could possibly witness.
The terrifying sound she makes when she sobs heavily is too much to bare.
I
f you make her cry, be there for her.
Hold her and apologize as she grabs your shirt and pushes her face into your chest.
Console her.
Make a promise to make everything better and actually keep it.

But most importantly of all, don’t make the same mistake as me

Don’t leave her.
My first poem
 Jun 2015 Lothlorien
Wanderer
The only thing worse than being hurt is knowing you are hurting someone else
Chancellor
she turned
as the page of a book
I etched my name in her
and
slow came
the burn of a quiet flame
and
slow came
the inferno in her name
that was ushered
into life
by the tempest
of our embattled hearts.
A brief piece. needs work.
 Jun 2015 Lothlorien
JD
Untitled
 Jun 2015 Lothlorien
JD
The one good thing about seeing people smile
is knowing that one day it'll come back to you.
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