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  Jun 2015 dusk
avery
we get it, poets. things are like other things.
this is a familiar concept to us all so why do we speak in metaphor all the time?

it is because when we tell you we feel like our insides are on fire,
we feel as though we are a house that is burning down until all that remains is a fragile frame accompanied by a pile of ash,
it is not a metaphor

it's a simile, notice my use of like or as

but it is not a metaphor

when you stick a cigarette between your teeth you do not fail to light it
the thing that does the killing will **** you
and you will let it

when you write down the exact amount of pills you took and the number of days you felt worthless tallied into your stretch marks
there is no metaphor there

my poetry isn't metaphor
it is a direct reflection of honest to god feelings
I have never written a poem not meant literally

we get it, poets. things are like other things.
but that is a simile.
things are not other things.
we do not speak in metaphor.
  Jun 2015 dusk
Romali Arora
Slowly the tears will begin to dry
The pillows no more stained
The scars visible to the eye
But it'll cause no pain
Yes it hurts, it takes time
to let go
But you'll be fine
For all you know
It ain't comes easy, nor overnight
Takes up all your courage, breaks all your might
You can't stop loving him
You never did
As much courage it takes to defy
You can't hide from it
And as time passes by
Maybe days, week or months, sometimes
Courageously you'll be be able to look behind
And smile over memories, that once made you cry!
We usually tend to fall in love with people we can't have in our lives. Someone who is not "the one" for us, but we can't stop ourselves from loving them... And when we finally muster courage to leave them behind coz they ain't doing us any good, we walk away with memories that are difficult to let go off....
dusk Jun 2015
you tell me about her and
how she broke your heart and
how you're so empty now that she's gone.

all i do is say how sorry i am
that life messes up the best of us
and tell you to keep hanging on.

but what else can i say
when all i want to do is run to you
and tell you how much i love you?

what else can i say
when inside i bleed for you
and what we can never have?

what else can i say
when you tell me you can't picture
life with anyone else?

what else can i say
but tell you i'm so sorry
and mean it with all my heart.

what else can i say?

she's tearing you apart and
you're tearing me apart and
i know i'm tearing him apart too.

sometimes i sit and wonder why
love is so
cruelly blind.
for O.
  Jun 2015 dusk
Perri
People seem to think I am completely fine,
that I am so strong.
But oh I would pay fine money
to see their reactions
when they find out
I am gone.
  Jun 2015 dusk
Andreas Sfakianakis
Is it love?
When you start writing her name with a razor instead of a pen,
is it still love?
All answers are welcome :)

A side note, this is more of a metaphor for hurting yourself mentally than the actual act.

Thank you very much for your answers.
  Jun 2015 dusk
Perri
people love to come into my life,
and dangle themselves in front of me
so close,
that I can feel their warmth
and hear their breath
so I can smell their scent
and see their beauty
and just as I am about to reach out
to embrace their presence,
they yank themselves up and out of my life
leaving me confused and hopeless,
until the next one finds me
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