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On whether technology has influenced the seeming rise in mental health issues: The concept of technology as separate than Nature is impossible to pin down, but to say that a lifetime of social pressures, advertising, television, and processed and genetically altered foodstuffs would not affect what the brain is used to, and what is was designed to do, is a non sequitur. Certainly an entirely separate set of influences also had negative consequences in the brains' of pre-man, but these were not of his own making, as he still lived in an organic environment, and therefore wasn't a part of the "feedback loop" we have going on with humans becoming the products of a man-made environment (one of the only things that sets us apart from most the animal kingdom). Either way, whatever you're doing you're getting better at it, so with the increase in time spent on the web and watching TV we are increasingly better at watching other people - being passive, non-accountable, constantly comparative and self-obsessed, impotent in light of the mass of information constantly flooding towards you - which the brain was not originally intended for. This seems obvious. So the fact that some people have things like crippling anxiety and OCD, or develop anti-social disorders and the like, seems like a logical result produced by a system (the brain) presented with new and inorganic conditions. On top of that, being a non-douche is naturally and evolutionarily based because it increases the likelihood that others will want to chilll'n'stuff and help you when you need it, but when transposed onto a crowded, fast-paced modernity it twists into something like flattery and competition to appear the most altruistic.
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Sep 18, 2012
Sep 18, 2012 at 11:45 AM UTC
Technology and Mental Health
On whether technology has influenced the seeming rise in mental health issues: The concept of technology as separate than Nature is impossible to pin down, but to say that a lifetime of social pressures, advertising, television, and processed and genetically altered foodstuffs would not affect what the brain is used to, and what is was designed to do, is a non sequitur. Certainly an entirely separate set of influences also had negative consequences in the brains' of pre-man, but these were not of his own making, as he still lived in an organic environment, and therefore wasn't a part of the "feedback loop" we have going on with humans becoming the products of a man-made environment (one of the only things that sets us apart from most the animal kingdom). Either way, whatever you're doing you're getting better at it, so with the increase in time spent on the web and watching TV we are increasingly better at watching other people - being passive, non-accountable, constantly comparative and self-obsessed, impotent in light of the mass of information constantly flooding towards you - which the brain was not originally intended for. This seems obvious. So the fact that some people have things like crippling anxiety and OCD, or develop anti-social disorders and the like, seems like a logical result produced by a system (the brain) presented with new and inorganic conditions. On top of that, being a non-douche is naturally and evolutionarily based because it increases the likelihood that others will want to chilll'n'stuff and help you when you need it, but when transposed onto a crowded, fast-paced modernity it twists into something like flattery and competition to appear the most altruistic.
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A six-legged Asian cockroach just washed up on American soil, and it can lay eggs on ice. Roaches are infamous for the myth that they're one of the few species that could survive an atomic bomb. It's not science, but even Adam Savage and his gang of Myth Buster's say it's beyond myth: a human croaks after ten minutes of exposure to 1,000 units of cobalt 60. But for roaches, 10% of their population survives after exposure to 10,000 rads - hell, it's better than zero. This new species is the most evolutionarily persistent thing ever - if surviving means anything, it win's life on earth, hands down. But I'd rather be a monkey. We **** up and **** ourselves everyday. We slip and **** ourselves with power tools, or smash our fists into soccer referees and manslaughter oops ****  We shoot ourselves off of propulsion equipment to see what happens.  Bone-crunching splatter **** From 100 feet up, we look like ******* mad men. But the roach shows up carefully and gets **** done with nasty perseverance. The roach with vapid speech and wide eyes, glued to efficiencies and body armor. To exist plainly - to work, eat. and sleep - is done best by roaches. Success is a cockroach.
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Mar 18, 2015
Mar 18, 2015 at 1:48 AM UTC
Success is a Cockroach
The brimstone quorum of Salvationism a dying paragon : Jettison of the Holy Cities Amiable concordance in Harness of attic faith salving Creations apostasy, Sealing Hells predestine fate, Witnessing Sins forfeitable Baptismal omni-shambles Clandestine of punic Earths Calvalcade beliefs; moving Adamantine Heaven Godwards And humanity froward Evolutionarily bona-fide Of credo. ELEETE J MUIR
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Jan 31, 2014
Jan 31, 2014 at 12:24 AM UTC
Attainted Diffidence.
you continue on the outermost experience of stimuli consuming with poor digestion, your surrounding world you continue on the premise of emotion and nothing more, no analysis, no insight, you exist as a simpler species than those who do analyze, are insightful and it is only negative because you are inefficient and infectious in your inefficiency, less energy is required to live as you do but you are not progressive, you do not offer this human species anything but a vector for dna, an avenue to perpetuate; and you are this way by choice -- you possess potential to have potential but you do not engage and in consequence, you are ignorant and malignant to our human species and perhaps I am a misanthrope or perhaps I am a realist but you will only hinder the most capable of us unless you cease to continue on the outermost experience of stimuli; you are inefficient with the potential, a resounding potential, for efficiency and if only you would wake from this superficial condition our species would gain advantage in survival but I suppose it is irrational to wish for such things, as we are inherently flawed and perhaps our concentrations should not be on perpetuating the human species but rather giving rise to an organism more evolutionarily advanced -- more efficient; more perfect.
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Jul 5, 2017
Jul 5, 2017 at 1:49 PM UTC
existential perfectionism
i crack like a pistachio nut under the pressure of the shadow you left behind. why? you're hopelessly mediocre and yet your down calls to me like a baby bird's silent squawk. i am evolutionarily compelled for my heart to jump through my skin to get a better view at you.
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Dec 27, 2012
Dec 27, 2012 at 9:06 AM UTC
part ridge
If there ever was a golden age The smile on the cherubim’s grill, Wistfully look into her eyes, Devoted to her algorithms--- Like Christine there are no eyes, Desoto algorithms---if there Ever was a golden age She’s sleeping in, Evolutionarily destroyed by fire--- Mysteriously her eyes go blank, Blank for all eternity, If there ever was an algorithm For the golden age---she was one--- For a quarter of eternity or an hour Show her the pile of stones The men will use Saints go under the bridge While over the bridge go the lions--- Her bones thick and mammalian If there ever was a golden age of stripping, She was there, her ideas and sciences dawning on troglodyte mankind---
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Dec 21, 2017
Dec 21, 2017 at 10:20 PM UTC
The Golden Age of Stripping I
From within the confines of our narrowly concepted rituals of the insular good, we love to love babies we love to pity children we love to forget young adults and we love to blame their parents. How quickly we forget or choose to ignore, from the safety of acceptance & comfortability & choice that we once loved & pitied & forgot every parent we ever blamed. How quickly we forget or never realized how our sunny dispositions to judge blind us so easily from the facts. For example, we know that babies really do prefer the sound of their mother’s voice above all others, that they cry in the accent of their mother’s tongue, because her voice reverberated down, so perfectly into that protected capsule. That in their glassy-eyed stare, they see us in a way no one else ever will. That fetal brains are evolutionarily genius in the way they grow and adapt to the threats of stress or scarcity in ways that will shape the rest of their lives. We know, for example, that children are lanterns of consciousness looking and learning in all directions at once. As helpless, dependent beings they are subconsciously conducting experiments and using conditional probability, reading the complexity of human emotion, and connecting through language to piece together their realities. And so, they exist, Brilliant and Dependent, until the impendent time when we cast them Worthless and Independent, ready (or not) to plant ready (or not) to grow the next season of seeds. In spite of our ignorance and condescension we will, eventually, embrace 0-3 only to realize that it was misadvertised. That humans do not exist in disparate parts. They cannot, like legos, be constructed in an orderly fashion, but, like everything else on this Earth, love and grow wholly with the cycles of the sun and the universe. It is not wrong, but it is not enough until we decide, instead, on that infinite loop from now until death over and over again.
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Nov 1, 2016
Nov 1, 2016 at 3:12 PM UTC
From Now Until When?
From within the confines of our narrowly concepted rituals of the insular good, we love to love babies we love to pity children we love to forget young adults and we love to blame their parents. How quickly we forget or choose to ignore, from the safety of acceptance & comfortability & choice that we once loved & pitied & forgot every parent we ever blamed. How quickly we forget or never realized how our sunny dispositions to judge blind us so easily from the facts. For example, we know that babies really do prefer the sound of their mother’s voice above all others, that they cry in the accent of their mother’s tongue, because her voice reverberated down, so perfectly into that protected capsule. That in their glassy-eyed stare, they see us in a way no one else ever will. That fetal brains are evolutionarily genius in the way they grow and adapt to the threats of stress or scarcity in ways that will shape the rest of their lives. We know, for example, that children are lanterns of consciousness looking and learning in all directions at once. As helpless, dependent beings they are subconsciously conducting experiments and using conditional probability, reading the complexity of human emotion, and connecting through language to piece together their realities. And so, they exist, Brilliant and Dependent, until the impendent time when we cast them Worthless and Independent, ready (or not) to plant ready (or not) to grow the next season of seeds. In spite of our ignorance and condescension we will, eventually, embrace 0-3 only to realize that it was misadvertised. That humans do not exist in disparate parts. They cannot, like legos, be constructed in an orderly fashion, but, like everything else on this Earth, love and grow wholly with the cycles of the sun and the universe. It is not wrong, but it is not enough until we decide, instead, on that infinite loop from now until death over and over again.
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On my way down the street Saw Unbroken ad on bus Survival, Resilience, Redemption Yea that's me Have to survive this cruel place called earth Must be resilient for many difficult things will happen Must believe in Jesus to help redeem me Went to Macy's To use my gift card Bought the gold toe socks And some red earth colored dockers Poor cashier Was dealing with a nightmare transaction They wanted that 25 dollars Credited to their account Well, turns out they had used the wrong card To make the initial purchase Charge showed up on the wrong card Or something like that The guy had to call the manager Cashier handled it well Lady said something like, "So what your saying is you won't give us back our twenty-five dollars" Ugh relax lady, remember it was your boyfriend or hubby Or whoever the heck he was Who initially purchased it with the wrong card This lead to all the problems So be more careful next time, okay? And do not snap please. Nice asian lady Handled my transaction Simple transaction I bought with gift card She was pretty Patient too I liked her I dreamed of holding her at night Usually dreams don't come true in this life It seems Then went to hiking store Overheard the guy explaining There are sleeping bags made for me And bags made for women Evolutionarily speaking He explained how men's body heat Is more spread out at their extremities With women he says it is more in their core Too many problems with evolution It's not the be all and end all Like he thinks it is Was going to buy some different energy bars and snacks Put them back Cashier was kind of annoying Bleh Overly cheery He was a good guy Just didn't want deal with overly cheery guy Maybe he will start long conversation Don't need those snacks anyway Overpriced Life is sad Life is lonely these days At least I am going on a hike With a friend tomorrow
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Dec 30, 2014
Dec 30, 2014 at 12:10 AM UTC
My Night
On my way down the street Saw Unbroken ad on bus Survival, Resilience, Redemption Yea that's me Have to survive this cruel place called earth Must be resilient for many difficult things will happen Must believe in Jesus to help redeem me Went to Macy's To use my gift card Bought the gold toe socks And some red earth colored dockers Poor cashier Was dealing with a nightmare transaction They wanted that 25 dollars Credited to their account Well, turns out they had used the wrong card To make the initial purchase Charge showed up on the wrong card Or something like that The guy had to call the manager Cashier handled it well Lady said something like, "So what your saying is you won't give us back our twenty-five dollars" Ugh relax lady, remember it was your boyfriend or hubby Or whoever the heck he was Who initially purchased it with the wrong card This lead to all the problems So be more careful next time, okay? And do not snap please. Nice asian lady Handled my transaction Simple transaction I bought with gift card She was pretty Patient too I liked her I dreamed of holding her at night Usually dreams don't come true in this life It seems Then went to hiking store Overheard the guy explaining There are sleeping bags made for me And bags made for women Evolutionarily speaking He explained how men's body heat Is more spread out at their extremities With women he says it is more in their core Too many problems with evolution It's not the be all and end all Like he thinks it is Was going to buy some different energy bars and snacks Put them back Cashier was kind of annoying Bleh Overly cheery He was a good guy Just didn't want deal with overly cheery guy Maybe he will start long conversation Don't need those snacks anyway Overpriced Life is sad Life is lonely these days At least I am going on a hike With a friend tomorrow
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Humans: Large sacks of flesh; ****** bags of meat Encased in a thin, stretched filmy layer, Like sausages. And here I am, An evolutionarily pre-packed sausage Stuffed full of blood, bone and fat Ambling around Like everyone else Indignant to deterioration, Ignorant to the passage of time Eventual collapse of functions. Immune, Even to love.
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Mar 2, 2018
Mar 2, 2018 at 3:37 AM UTC
Man-made narcissist
His chiding of those berating, confiding in peers, pals, kin, from neighbor's din to seaside inn, with 'backwards', caused chagrin. My heart did jump in, 'backwardness' could never extinct humanity, like the religion of scientism has in only the latest 400 years of it's tryst with oligarchy. 'One insect damaging so much grain', one instant evolutionarily, destroying so much grace, that it took the Cosmos 18 billion years of evolution to create. "Truer words were n'er spoken", was his snort, in retort, as we savaged our insides on with tonics, nuts, gin.
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Jun 11, 2020
Jun 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM UTC
rabbit's hole, looking glass
His chiding of those berating, confiding in peers, pals, kin, from neighbors din to seaside inn, with "backwards", caused chagrin. My heart did jump in, "backwardness" could never extinct humanity, like the religion of scientism has in only the latest 400 years of it's tryst with oligarchy. "One insect damaging so much grain", one instant evolutionarily, destroying so much grace, that it took the Cosmos 18 billion years of evolution to create. Truer words were n'er spoken, was his snort, in retort, as we savaged our insides on with tonics, nuts, gin.
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Nov 10, 2019
Nov 10, 2019 at 5:22 AM UTC
rabit's hole, looking glass