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YoungGentleman17 Aug 2015
Come America as i tell a lesson we should all note
First saying on watch out for whom we give our vote
Most politics will tell us all we wanna hear
Yet America is still at it's biggest fear

For the people that we all think to elect
Should first do positive things to earn our respect
"Cause talking is only words" a debate is entertainment to most
So how is America the best Country? When Freedom here is still Lost

All we the people want is a change
Have you seen all the people dying in range
So how will we seek peace? When violence seems to be everyone's key
Yet they'll tell us better days are what we'll see

What we need is a leader role model to others
A person who can unite us as sisters and brothers
A person who puts and end to this war of race
A person who can make America a better place

So which person for president will we all choose
Cause if the wrong person is in charge we all lose
So come america as i tell you something you should note
"The Impact of our freedom is determined by our vote"
Jun 2015 · 440
What Happened/Black America
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
What happened to my people who stood for each other
We shouldn't wanna **** or harm another
Back then we fought for our rights
Now since we've got freedom
We been fighting for our life
Looked at the news friday
Yet another brothers gone
Lord may his sole rest in piece
And friends and family stay strong
I hate to see the emotion of different family cries
If we stop all this killing
Then no one dies
Gang violence is something we should have forbid
Yet daily i see people teaching this mess to they kids
I understand alot of struggled in the hood
But that doesnt mean we cant overcome to something good
We should want better for ourselves
Yet we settle for the worse
All we ever see is bad
Like we're living in a curse
Im just saying how can our future be better
Over everything we done
But i ll never give up until
The battles finally won
R.I.P to cyle we all know your in better place
I know we all wish better things apon our race
And even if i didn't know you
Alot of people care
Shoot when im looking at this dealth
I see it really aint fair
Well thats black america
Land of the dumb
Land of the shame
And land of the people
Who die over a color sign and name
Jun 2015 · 340
UnTitled
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
So i see your doing big things
With even more to come
You've shined like bling
And a couple at there first prom

I must say i was truly speechless
People downed you more than I
Then once you left them all speechless
I had no choice but to also try

If a strong character builds a strong mind
A strong spirit builds a strong heart
Then how is it hard to find nor rewind
Yourself to that perfect start?

If a true personality builds great friends
Then i hope to have mine till the end
If working at a crazy place builds a close connection with other workers there
Then my only reason for working is not only for money but also im around a group of people whom care

Care for each other work great together as a team
Most of us are like family as it seems
Yet there is one lady who's broke the bond
Like a person stealing from funds
You've stolen our trust and there no refunds
Jun 2015 · 497
Long Distance Lovers
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
I will always love you till my dying day
Regardless if we live far away
Or far apart
You will always be the girl that holds my heart

Some people think our love isnt true
That we wont never meet
But as long as the sky is blue
That lie shall always be beat

True love is what we have and not afriad to show
My girl is a Leo a Gamer even jokester and im not afriad for the world to know
Shes beautiful with alot of tats
And loves to show of all that

Chuqeisea Louis is her name
I laugh cause she gives my first name fame
And her last and my first name are the same
But i bet our hatters will think thats lame

We both have proven that long distance love can last
Especially since times moves so fast
We enjoy every moment together that pasts by
So theres no reason for people to ask us why

Why do we prefer long distance in life
Because its a challenge not many have done
And the day you become my wife
Then our long distance love has won
Jun 2015 · 850
The Key To Love
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
Shot outs to all the lovers that live
The ones who last long and ones that give
To all lovers who have came to a fall
Never give up give it your all
To ending relationships or ones who end up hurt
Stay strong cause something better is coming your way
No he or she wont come the next day
You ll even face more heartbreaks till that person is found
So dont beat yourself up there somewhere around
And they might not be in your city or town
But when you find your perfect person remember to always hold them down
Regardless if it gets ruff or tuff
Real lovers do.t worry about that stuff
Also remember to never have affairs or lust
Cause the key to Love is to always trust
Jun 2015 · 511
RAIN
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
LOOK BABY I KNOW IM QUIET AND QUITE SHY
BUT WHEN COMES TO FREAKS IM A DIFFERENT VERSION
I KNOW YOU PROLLY SEE ME AS NON SKILL GUY
ESPECIALLY KNOWING THAT IM A ******

BUT AT THIS POINT TONIGHT I OWN IT
SO LETS SEIZE THE DAY TILL OUR CLOSING  MOMENT
I LL TAKE OUR LOVE DOWN ROMANTIC ROAD
ROSE PEDALS, CANDLES, STRAWBERRIES, WITH CREAM IS MY CODE

BABY YOUR LIKE MY PRIZED POSSESSION AND I LL HAVE YOU SPOILED
COME RELAX WHILE I RUB YOU DOWN WITH THIS OIL
NOW IM NOT SAYING IM NASTY
BUT I PROMISE TO CHERISH ANY LOVER THATS THIS CLASSY

SINCE YOU LOVE YOUR BODY SUCH ADORED
THEN CAN MY LIPS ADORE IT EVEN MORE
IF MY AIR IGNITES YOUR HEAT IN CONTINUOUS LIT
THEN I LL MAKE YOUR CREAM BUST WITH MY BANANA LIKE A  MELTING BANANA SPLIT

CAUSE ONCE IT MELTS YOUR ****** HAS CAME
HATE IS LOST PLEASURE IS REGAINED
SO REMEMBER MY NAME
CAUSE NEXT IM INSIDE I LL LOVE TO FEEL YOUR RAIN

FROM MY NUTS TO MY LIPS
AND IF I EVER FEEL DEHYDRATED I LL TAKE A SIP
May 2015 · 553
Shine
YoungGentleman17 May 2015
We all have the ability to shine
Thats why i take whatever is mine
We all shine in different ways
Like coaches who use different plays
Players who have different skills
Shoot even assassins shine when they ****
You see nobody is a loser
We were all made to shine
All you need is good efforts and time
Patience is also a key to shine bright
Cause you cant get rich in one night
So if anyone has ever told you you cant make it
Break it!!!!
Cause if you make every moment yours like i do mines
Then everybody should have the ability to shine
May 2015 · 354
Lost Cause
YoungGentleman17 May 2015
Now i hate to sit and down myself but im slowly losing hope
Upon a woman i love so much but yet i can cope
I feel my lack of conversation may make her leave
Which equals up to tears in my eye and a no please
with a beautiful girl like herself can attract any man in the world
Yet she always tell me shes my girl
I just wish i could be that guy packed with conversation or at least conversation that she'll like
But yet i feel i bore her with every message i write
How long will it be till she starts thinking different of me will she change her mind
If so then I just killed mostly in mankind
Cause good girls these days are just to hard to find
So what i need is redemption and better pride
But until i get that i ll just sit here and feel bad inside
Apr 2015 · 369
MS. DENISE
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2015
MS.DENISE SUCH CLASS AND WISE
IS LIKE MY LADY GRIM WHOSE TAKEN MY SOUL BY NO SURPRISE
HER LOOKS ARE MY WEAKNESS
ONCE I LOOK INTO HER EYES
I KNOW LONGER TRY
CAUSE THIS IS WHEN I GIVE HER WHATEVER MONEY CAN BUY

MS.DENISE IS LIKE AN ENDANGERED SPECIES CAUSE HER KIND IS HARD TO FIND
HER FIRE IS SO BRIGHT I MIGHT GO BLIND
MS. DENISE THE WORLD MAY NOT YET NO YOUR NAME
BRING YOUR FIRE INTO MY LIFE AND LET MY AIR ENGUFF YOUR FLAMES

MS. DENISE YOUR MY ADDICTION
ONE DOSE OF YOU CAN SEND ME INTO ANOTHER PLACE
WHEN YOU NEED ME I LL BE RUNNING TO YOU LIKE IM IN A RACE
CAUSE IM NOT ONLY YOUR KING BUT IM ALSO YOUR ACE
I had to write this for the girl im in love with
Mar 2015 · 1.2k
Nobody Like You
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
after all these years of hurt and pain
I ve finally met a person who has made those lost tears drain
I speak upon a woman whose fire heats my spirit
My mind and soul
Thats why i plan to love her in whole
When im feeling down
She always brings me up
Shes like my 4 Leaf clover
Cause when i think of her i feel luck
I write this poem upon a woman who has taken me as hers
So for her Gift is a man she deserves
She understands me more than my own family
And friends
Shes never judged me cause she sees something special in me that no other girl saw
Maybe this is the reason why i ll do anything to make her happy
Cause shes not only helped me but shes also made me better
I say this to the Lord above
To please help me make it to this woman
Whom i truly love
Shes is the best thing ever thats came into my life
And definetly plan on making her my future wife
I speak my words right here today
To motivate you in every way
Cause as long at day the sky is blue
There shall be nobody like you
Had to write this poem for a special girl that came into my life it truly has came from the heart
Mar 2015 · 317
Poetic Thoughts
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
LIKE THE CURRENTS IN OCEANS MY THOUGHTS RUN STRONG
AS THEY WASH UPON MY SAND-LIKE MIND THAT PUSHES ALONG
MY LOVE SUCH PASSION AND FIRE
I CAN JUST FEEL ITS HEAT
WHEN MY RARE PERSONALITY COMBINES IT CREATES SOMETHING SWEET
MY CHARM SUCH ATTRACTION GOT THEM LADIES CLOSING IN AND IM THE MAGNET
OH MY SKIN SUCH DARKNESS LIKE CHOCOLATES AND CANDY
MY FLOW WHICH RUNS AS SMOOTH AS WATERFALLS
MY LOYALTY IS KNOWN AS ONE THE BEST
FROM THE FRIENDS I STILL HAVE TODAY
AND FOR NEW ONES THAT WILL COME NEXT
LOUIS HAYNES IS ME AND YES I'VE BEEN CAUGHT
BUT WHO CAN STOP ME FROM HAVING SUCH POETIC THOUGHTS
Mar 2015 · 526
Virgin Loving
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
Now im no ****** expert
But it takes no rocket scientist to know what you like
anyone can find that spot
Just like anyone can make your make your body hot
I might be a ****** but i ll put in good endurance
Got your body in good hands like all-state insurance
Making love to a ****** prolly not what you would expect
But if its coming from me you wont regret
I know your thinking i dont have stamina
I dont have skill
But let tonight your answer thats when things get real
Mar 2015 · 429
Hipnosis
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
Now once  my words caress your mind
And my touch take over your thoughts
Thats Hipnosis baby
Now im no man of magic
But if I whip out my wand
Do you think that ll give us that special bond
Now I needs no genie to grant your wishes
If your body's made like hershey you ll get all these kisses
You got me hypnotized girl
Shoot its like im in your control
Or at your command
Pleasuring your body in anyway you demand
Mar 2015 · 404
HOW DOES
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
How does a woman so faithful
End up with men thats so un-greatful
How does a person so different
Be judged by people who are not
Why doesn't anyone love you
Because you show so much hate
These are lifes quetions i know we all can relate

Why do the guys go for mainly *****
Because a guy would do anything to catch a nut
Why are our ladies always in pain
Because those kind of guys can drive a women insane
He who speaks to those
Is not only a person to come to for help
He comes to those we need a friend
Or someone to trust
And he stands to do so until he s turned to dust
Who's that guy whos shy but sweet
Who's quiet when you first meet until he finally greets
That person will be me
Mar 2015 · 1.4k
In The Eyes Of A Gemini
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
For we who see this world as a adventurous place
Must deal with the hardest battles life has to face
We're so kind and generous yet it leads our hearts to pain and tears
Then when we look for ones we've helped no one is near
For we to be the sign of twins
Bi-polar and weirdness is where it begins
We have split personalities which means
We can be your greatest friends
Or worst enemies
For we to be the most trustworth,loyal
Why must we always be hurt
Because others take advantage of our kindness and leave us in dirt
Did i mention we geminis also love to flirt
In the eyes of a gemini what else we see
Well hows about my fellow gemini people tell me
Mar 2015 · 960
Stronger
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
For the people who judged you
And Ex's that didn't last no longer
The pain they all brought has only made you stronger
For the ups and downs thats crossed your path
We wouldnt know mother nature if we haven't felt her wrath
What makes you weak can you stronger
What makes you stronger makes you better
When a loved one passes away
Only the strongest seak out through the day
When you stay yourself through all the mess we see in life
It shows you are stronger and survive the fight
We as people know that bad is taken over good
But once we as people come together as one
Then watch all the good things our world will have done
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2015
I love my ladies in all kinds
But **** why must cougars blow my mind
I done seen alot of hot young girls and boy there fine
But as im looking at this cougar i rather have mine
Shoot i ll baptist myself in your water if that have me saved
A been a bad boy you can whip me till i behave
**** these cougar ladies is definrtly some to crave
And as a bonus you can use me as your personal *** slave
When im bad you can put it in my mouth
I mean force me till i swollow every bit
For my reward i get to **** but thats not it
As a women i know guys put you in alot of mess
So let my hands do all the talking they ll surely relive your stress
Jan 2015 · 495
Mind Of A Poet
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
The mind of a poet such beauty and pride
I see my mind as an internet
That holds millions of things inside
I work day by day break swaet after sweat
And i must continue this thought till my goal is met

The mind of a poet sich honor and passion
If poetry had a clothing label I'd rock that fashion
You see our minds are different thats what makes it great
Poets bring love never the hate
And like the words said by preachers "It's not to late"

The mind of a poet What more should i say
You know your a poet if your lines brighten days
Your thoughts run as smooth as soap
You know you have a mind of a poet if you give others hope
Or make a person smile like you opened a bag of lays

The mind of a poet has took over my mind
People's actions has took over my thoughts
Like a person starring into light people are to blind to see
Not only that our words are one of a kind
And the good our poems have brought
But the truth starts with us as a whole not just me
Jan 2015 · 343
Who Am I
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
Who am I
Im just a guy who wonders
Who falls but will push till he dies
Between pain and fear he's trapped under

Who Am I
Im just a guy who feels down
Sometimes i wonder why
I've cried so many tears if i slept in them I'd prolly drown

They'll judge you by your looks
But know nothing of your pain
My mind is like endless books
Hidden in a deep rain

And people wonder why im so shy
Why i hardly talk
Im just a different guy
If they faced my daily battles "Do you think they'll walk?"

So Who Am I
Im the guy that strikes before thunder
Who writes till i die
So Who Am I Im just a guy who wonders
Jan 2015 · 699
Sonnet 3
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
If we loved each others souls
Would that make us soulmates
If i gave you my love in wholes
Then why must your soul hate
Now im no cupid
Though i feel like i've been hit by his bow
All your exes should feel stupid
For letting something this amazing go
No ones love is perfect
But that doesn't mean we cant come close
With faith it will be worth it
So lets give this our most
Cause no new man will appear upon a coast
So for this new year of us lets toast
Jan 2015 · 6.1k
NAUGHTY THOUGHTS
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
You got a body like fire
When you're close i feel your heat
You know how to keep man running
Like runners in a track meet

I ll call you my daredevil
Cause when you in control you do different tricks
She works her mouth like a disease
When she goes downlow it drives me sick

Now im no weather man but rainy weather is what i predict
When im inside i feel a storm
I can make your body roar
Imma stretch your body out
Since thats the type of *** you adore

I'll work my tounge like a magnet
Its attracted to your body
And addicted to its taste
Your middle is like the glue and my mouth is the paper it pastes

What more can i say
Your middle is like a water gun
And i love to see it spray
No i dont need to be taught
But how can i stop all these naughty thoughts
Jan 2015 · 496
A Man
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
A man without hope
A man that barely speaks
A man on a mission
Who battles till his defeat

A man who has heard it all
Seen a bit to
Nomatter what they say about Louis
He's a man that stays true

A man who stays to himself
But stands for the ones he loves
He wishes others will be themselves
And one day hopes to fly away like doves

a man who fights for respect
Speaks upon peace
This man is even a reject
Now he came from his best to his least

Regardless of the people he had to face
Because he always came back to embrace
Jan 2015 · 316
SONNET 1
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
Look im feeling a feeling i've never felt
Seeing beauty i've never pictured in mind
Your like the heat that makes my ice melt
You've even turned a cold heart to kind
Mystery woman i dont know Who you are
But love is now something i've been taught and shouldn't miss
I'd wish upon you if i seen a shooting star
Your more special than a first kiss
If your heart were a prison or jail
I'd lock myself in you forever
I wouldn't even have to bail
Because the two of us will be together
Oh mystery woman so cool and grace
Has showed me something i cant replace
Jan 2015 · 311
SONNET 2
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
When i think of a women like you
I start to wonder why im single
Its just when i see the good you do
It gives my heart a tingle
Your like a angel that God has sommoned
And im the man dying for your soul
We even have alot in common
So having you is like a long-time goal
Or a risk im willing to take
I ll be lucky and more likely blessed if i achieve
I feel this will be the hardest choice you ll make
But anythings possible if we believe
I've seen angels but not like this
Please angel come take me and heal me with your kiss
Dec 2014 · 328
DEAR GOD
YoungGentleman17 Dec 2014
Mane i dont know how im going to make it
Everysince i walked out that hospital i cant take it
Dear God
Out of all people
I just wonder why my mom has to go through all the stress all the pain
Why did she have to feel so misunderstood most of her life
Because most people did her wrong the more she came back with a right
And all i ask for you mother is fight
I remember you said you ll be here and there when i graduate
Maybe see me ehen i grown
But what if you dont make it
Then its me on my own
Along with my brothers to
And i bet right now those who done you wrong are not only crying over your condition
But its also guilt to
I rather be in your position than see it acted in you
So im hoping you get better
Cause my emotion just dont know what do
How can i ever smile again
When all i can do is cry
Please God give my mother a second chance
I dont wanna see her die
Dec 2014 · 331
I STILL PRAY
YoungGentleman17 Dec 2014
They say a family that prays
Is a family that stays
So if i prayed tonight and today
Will that give her longer days

That would be a work of art
When it came to support
All she needed was more
My momma aint only hurt in her muscles but its also her heart

Honestly mom I am you
I might not have faced everything you faced
But i have faced enough to know it wont be replaced
People in this family talk about me like they did you
People told me lies to

Some of my friends turned they back on me when i needed them most
If i had a glass for every lie my ex's told me
Everyday we would toast

But i still right to God
because i want him to see the words that flow from my sole
To fix your broken heart into a whole

But the key to this at the end of the day
I still write as i pray
And for whom reads this you can leave a comment if you have something to say
My mom has been in the hostpital for a week even on this chrismas day and its killling me mentally
Dec 2014 · 720
DEAR FAMILY
YoungGentleman17 Dec 2014
Family what family mane me my brothers and mom been struggling for years
When we needed yall yall disappered
Most of them dont even calls
But feel guilty once one falls

I can honestly count maybe two handfulls of people as my real fam
While the others Prolly wouldn't give a ****
What kind of family talks bad about others
Like my mom for example people in the family judged her along with me and my brothers
To those who did it remember God dont like ugly

Yall better learn soon
We struggled our whole life
We never had the silver spoon
To whom reads this i dont mean to sound mean
But i got a sister cousin and relatives i haven't even seen

To my brother L Christopher Haynes-Rhodes speedy and sisters Ashley Rhodes maury and LarChelle Haynes we know our other mom to faces pain but as i write this poem i want us to build upon each others struggle for a happiness to regain its not like the others really care we dont even have get togethers nor reunions to

Smh we gotta do better as a family right now my mom has been in the hostpital for nearly a week for the ones Who came to see her who texed her and sent gifts i thank you all it's good to see that a small amount of people care and even the ones who said they ll pray as well
To everyone who is family on my mom and dad side if you can i want you all to share this if not spread the word  because this is not only a poem but this is a message

The day we become one whole will be a moment. Of truth i dont know how long it ll take but the only way that ll come true is if we all be real with one another besides fake thats all i have to say
I thought a family was suppose to bring happiness seems like mine is the opposite
Nov 2014 · 401
God's Gift
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
I just wanna love her
hold her tight
and tell her i'll never let go
because i feel thats when love is at it's best

come my queen
receive this ring and let me become your king
let me be your prince and i'll fill you with my charm
even the strongest disasters cant put you in harm

as long as im here by your side
i promise i ll never lie
i ll never cheat
because i'd rather see good in repeat
you are the greatest thing iv'e came across in life
in my future i ll be proud to call you my wife

you possess something special that i haven't seen in the others
you even earned respect from my mother
never again will i cry over my ex
cause God has gave me something way better as my next

So i thank you and i promise our commitment will never be burned
since we both teach each other stuff daily
then every day is a day we learn
that's why the Lord gives us so much good in Return
A Must Read and also this how i picture my special girl in the future
Nov 2014 · 605
Portrait Of a Women
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
if shes fought her whole life
been through break-up after next
that shows that us guys only want women for ***
to all of the real women out here i'm on your side
you don't deserve none of the pain you face
and for the ones who hurt there good men
i must say that'll be hard to replace
Mane if we just man up for least
then we wont have to worry about females going gay
or turning into thots
what if someone did our mothers and sisters the same
along with the number of suicides I've seen
it's all just a shame
We tell them we'll be faithful
but then go behind and cheat
trying fix things with ***
then keep the cycle in repeat
We tell them we love them
but can't even settle down with one
Because they say being unfaithful equals fun
for all the girls out here stuck in a heartbreak just hang in there
your sun will shine again
with a good man in your life to begin
and to the guys out here hoeing around
when your older and lonely with no one to hold or kiss
just remembered those hearts you broken in your pass cant be missed
i dont know why we cant show love in might
all our women want is for someone to treat them right
Nov 2014 · 517
Guilty By Suspicion
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
i know a guy who's great with his game
talks to different women everywhere he goes
to his main girls who's fell into his trap
one day feels loss and cant be helped by a map
he talks to that one girl
her emotions for him is deep
daily i know it's on the rise
she even dissed me numerous amount of times
but then at certain times she wants to be my friend
when he breaks her heart i wonder then if she'll understand
he talks to her when shes around
he messes with her
flirts with her and even plays
once she gives herself up
that'll be the end of him
she now feels alone has no one else to see
so who does come to now since he's gone
no surprise it's me
she now feels guilty
mentally she feels sad
because she never knew i had
such feelings for her in the past
but when it came to me and him
she put me last
so theres this girl at my job i had a crush on right my friend took her away nut the worst part is she had feelings for him the whole time
Oct 2014 · 304
Doing Just Fine
YoungGentleman17 Oct 2014
Wish i could be doing fine
but its hard when you got so much stuff on your mind
it's bad enough daily i see the pain in my mama
plus the other stuff that effects only brings more drama

there's been so many nights i'd sit here and wanna die
despite of all the tears that fell out of my eye
daily i gotta hear more insults these people have said
and people wonder why there so many bad thoughts in my head

it seems like when people can't find nobody to judge
they look for me
it doesn't matter what i say or do
cause the people who do it are in my family to

on top of that i'm still stuck on a girl i'm in love with
though she doesn't me back
i'm so busy being stuck on her i **** there lost control of myself
and it isn't right
but what would you do if you slept an every lonely night

i must admit words from others have brought my confidence low
it ain't rising no time soon
Like snails and turtles i feel i'm moving to slow
because my heart has craters like the ones in moons

I use to wish i was that guy that girls would chase
But when girls see me i'm a guy they erase
But when i look at my friends brothers and cousins
them girls be on them in dozens

so now when i see a girls comes my way
those old days
will interview now i don't know what to say
because i feel she gone do what them other girls did
and it's not okay

one day i'll rise over all these people who have ran over me
for being nice
for every girl who took advantage of me for treating them right
and when when that day finally comes i'll have a brighter and better mind
and that's when i finally be doing just fine
Sep 2014 · 594
Mothers Love
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
A love that's long
a love that lasts
that feels so strong
you can't get pass

A love that impacts us
and makes us who we are today
and even if some have some that passed away
her love remains in there souls everyday

A love that we should value
And never forget as well
her words are like heaven
plus when your down she can tell

she has the words of encouragement
that brings us out even the worst slumps
they even told us where theirs obstacles we must jump

i understand some mothers are good
some mothers are bad
but they always had
a scent or feeling that made us glad

therefore a love we all cherished since our life began
and carried it all the way to where we are today
A love that brings us to joy and spirit
and wash away our sins
Makes me feel a mothers love will never end
for the people with mothers who have passed away
i hope this poems brings you motivation throughout your days
i might not have a mother who's gone
but she has a very bad disease in her muscles
she can barely walk nor barely move
and it's caused me to lose my whole grove
Sep 2014 · 538
Metaphors
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
your looks are like a sun
every summer you become hotter
and since i'm attracted to beauty
it won't take much for me to spot her

your eyes are like water
because as i stare into them
it feels as i'm watching currents flow in the sea
so i guess the blue in your eyes has hypnotized me

your looks are like a heaven
one look at you fills me up with joy
it even makes me feel heaven's scent
now that's a feeling i must enjoy

your body's like a grave
cause when fall into it it feels i'm a step closer to death
so as i sink into your waters
my best bet is to hold my breath

your personality is like an broom
just being around you has me swept
your mind is like a treasure chest
that's where all my secrets are kept

all of these things together makes you a goddess
even the girl of my dreams
but either way it goes
these words classify you as a queen
funny thing is this actually shows part of what my dream girl possesses
Sep 2014 · 940
Poetic Disease
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
when your writing non-stop
writing the ink out your pens
or leads out your pencils
then i must confess
have you heard of poetic disease
because i think i've been possessed

when your mind has things flowing
and you know it can't stop
i bet it would be hours until the pencil or pen drops

this is not a real disease
but you can catch this mentaly
and once you do
just imagine all the writing your mind will allow you to

image the thoughts that'll run your mind
image the flow that'll control your mind
when i was first possessed i thought i was crazy
my hands moving non-stop it seemed so amazing

i felt so great
my poems were coming back to back
like music i had a un-controllable flow
and thats a moment i ll never let go

for anyone who has had this disease
tell the world your feelings
your experience
was it good bad or great
did you love it or hate
cause i've never witnessed such a disease that allows us to create
Sep 2014 · 542
Stayed To Myself
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
even when i was judged
even back when i was dissed
i stayed to myself
showed people i didn't care about how they thought of me
that whole time that made me wanna become a man they never be

everyplace i go,
like school, barbershops, parties, and work
i stayed to myself,
not tryna have have to many friends
i heard that brings more drama to your life
is that to hard to understand

see regardless of what they think
regardless of what they done and  tried towards me
those jokes only show one thing in-mature you see

i stayed to myself
to stay out of harms way
to keep away from fake people
because to much popularity can be a danger
so dont worry about me i'd rather walk this world a stranger
Sep 2014 · 321
Hold YouDown
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
even if we're far apart
i'll still be there to hold you down
still be there when helps in need
got me feeling some type of way
i might even far to one knee

for a couple who loved each other since middle school
i must say we came a long path
there were days we made mistakes
there were days our hearts were broken
but we are always here to hold each other down
that's why i claim you like my token

even i know your not perfect
i know you had a past
you went from a girl who posted half-naked pictures on Facebook
to a girl with a bit a class
now your acting in ways a lady should
see even you falling into struggle
i was holding you down baby

see every girl i had wasn't like you
they used me for my money
a lot of them cheated
those were the days i thought it would only be repeated
and then you came and changed it all
so i thank you for that
you see we talk mostly everyday
our hearts feelings are strongly carried
just the other day we had plans to be married
so anytime you feel to around
just call on me because i was always there to hold you down
Sep 2014 · 573
How I'm Feeling
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
right now i feel like rapping
right now i feel like singing
even tho i sit here and write poems
i ll rather read them to you in song
i'm afraid to fall in love,
because what i thought was good was a heartbreaker
so if i show my true love to her
will she become m hearts taker

cause i'm tiring of being hurt
i wanna be with a woman that loves me for me
the girl i used to love has betrayed me lied
plus she doesn't care for the tears in my eyes
how im feeling right now is crazy and sad i know i ll never get her back
Sep 2014 · 902
Waterfalls
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
as i awaken from Heaven
there's this sound
it's no ordinary sound either
but where is it coming from

the sound is loud
but can make a person feel great
the sound is also pure
and will make a person feel calm

a sound of peacefulness
that has me took
legends say it even has a beautiful look
some seen it in person some seen them in books

as i followed the sound
i approached this place
i was shocked by it's beauty
that has approached my face

out of all these years of looking
i still can't believe
that this whole time
waterfalls were the peace of heaven i hadn't seen
Sep 2014 · 844
New World Order
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
for a guy who's struggled his whole life
i must say I've done great
though there's day i feel no good
because today another person gone die in the hood

For a guy who ain't barely had stuff
i must admit i found a way
so things wouldn't be so ruff
cause all that i see is a man

thats what i see
as i look into the mirror
i see the man is me
a new world order is what i wanna see

for a guy thats quite shy and barely talks
i still maintain to make friends
even if i'm a hard person to understand
i know i can make it like that was my only plan

for a guy who speaks on change
he only gets judged since people think thats lame
as i sit here and think i shake my head in shame
no body wants to be different it's like everyone wants to be the same

most girls wanna be hoes
most guys wanna be gangbangers and thugs
we should want a new world order
cause them streets ain't no love
Sep 2014 · 542
I'm Still In Love With you
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
regardless of the cheating
lies
betrayal
and pain
it's like everywhere i go i see your name

i know we are the perfect couple
i know we are meant to be
i know you are the girl for my life
as i read these prays i pray that you become my wife

right now i'm sad because this separation is just killing me
it's killing you even worse
cause i know you love me
bus as a girl i know you wanna party
have fun
and have ***

those the main reasons why you don't answer my texts
a lot of people told me i can do better
at first i didn't listen now i think it's true
cause there's someone out here who is need of a man
a man who'll be there love them
care for them support them
and where ever that one special girl is
i just want you to know that i'll find you one day
and when that day comes
just know that the rest our life's will be a happy ending
as long as a long happiness forever
so my girlfriend left me today and i feel bad but good to cause i know God has something better for me
Sep 2014 · 522
The Words I Speak
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
the words i speak will make you feel that i'm teaching
It must the real stuff I say
must be the way i look at life through the day

The words i speak,
will let all know im quite different than others
might be a reason why im judged
can't say i really care
i've been living for 18 years i been known life ain't fair

The words i speak will have you shocked
cause i speak upon power
speak upon school
i even speak upon the wanna be's who think they so cool

The words i speak aren't ordinary
I speak against my mind
fight against my thoughts
they say life is a lesson
i can't tell cause lot's haven't been taught

The words i speak don't mind to be heard
don't mind to be known
until people pay attention,
i guess my words speak for there own

Cause when you talk about changing the world
people then will think your weird or even lame
But when your killing, hoeing, or ****-gin
it's like the whole world knows your name
Sep 2014 · 319
How Could You
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
how could you,
do a friend wrong
like going behind there back talking
trying to be with a person they love
I guess it's true people gone do what other people do

How could you,
lie right in front of a person who loves you
who always been there
I guess we people really don't care

How could you,
Give up on something good
just to go to something bad
chasing streets in your hood
but when it ends a lot of people will be sad

thats the moment when your gone
somebody came and took your life
see while you deep inside that grave
them same people you thought we're your friends
forgot all about you

How could you,
really think them people we're real
must be because they got all of that bread
How could they be considered as friends
when they didn't show up when you were dead

they set you up with the bust
And people wonder why i never gave alot of people trust
Sadly this was true story that happened to a friend of mine
May his soul rest in Peace
Sep 2014 · 396
JUST ENOUGH PT.2
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
what do you mean just enough,
what will i come to next
did i really fall in love with a girl who was my ex
will our love stay strong or fall into a lust of ***

i don't know what if she cheated
or told me a lie
No I wont cry
even though It'll show I did try

Tried to be right
Even Stayed faithful
now you're going from grateful to hateful

what happened to being together
what happened to the good in your heart
what happened to love me forever
tell me why you wanna be apart

I put it all on the table
just enough,
I guess we should give up
since you think its so tough

Not to much just enough
why use this term
because the word is a term we can learn from
just enough of anything makes a nothing non-exist
but i guess nothing makes you happy now
since you changed
Sep 2014 · 1.1k
Popularity
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
I guess you gotta be popular for followers
popular for likes
once again i speak of this hatred i cannot fight
we all put our hearts into poetry
yet only the popular people get the likes for what they do

i show people love regardless of how many followers or likes they have
cause i understand that a lot of us wanna be heard
we want the world to know that we are here fighting a battle not yet lost
we post our problems so people can understand that life is no joke
we post about ones we love
from boyfriends girlfriends friends and fam
I only speaking the truth cause thats who i am

we all have the talent to change the world
we all have the talent to be as good as poets like Langston Hughes, Tupac and others as well
im just saying saying it's not the followers and likes that make the poet
only Passion and Desire make real poets
It crazy how we all put ours hearts into our poems and get no feedback
Sep 2014 · 733
Someone Else
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
right now our feelings can't maintain
well at least mines
i'm just saying it's messed up how you tell me you love me
tell me you ll be there
tell me one day we'll be married
i just feel you don't care

why you get a new phone and wont me text the old one
that shows you hiding something
that shows you lied
now i'm sittings here along with tears flowing in my eyes
i wonder how you'll feel if i was with someone better
someone more of my type
i bet then then you wouldn't feel right
I loved this girl since middle school school it's messed up how she does me wrong knowing all the good i done for her

somebody tell me what to do i feel lost
Sep 2014 · 755
DEAR NYMPHOS
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
or the guys who love a ******,
they say you should move on to the next
cause when you ain't the one who's ******* her
she find somebody else for ***
these ****** women will love you for your heart
but love another for ***,
and for the real men out here i know yall won't go for that
to much *** only leads to 2 things
that's a disease and a baby
then once it happens
you'll lie to your man cause you know things will get crazy
trying to be slick when yall use protection
trying to be slick when yall change yall phones
when a man already knows whats going on
at that moment there she ready to cheat
that feeling of randsom hits her
it turns up her heat
Then once she get to you she tease you into ***
just to make it seem she's won
I be **** if imma fall into a trap
Cause i much rather be done
when thats the stuff that they wanna be on
shoot don't back to me when im gone
Aug 2014 · 325
Whats The Point
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
when a relationship falls
then we gotta fight
for every wrong we make
it's not to late to make them right

we all know love wont be perfect
at times it won't be great
most of us feel trapped between that one person
and can't escape

some of us can be in love with one person
but have feelings for another
some of us even tell the ones we love lies
and hold the truth cause it only unleashes pain and cries

so what i'm saying is we can do better
i wish we can go back into days when things were good
but every since this new generation has started
most people have fell into the traps of the hood
Aug 2014 · 265
Poetic Flow
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
like a person who's high
My mind reacts quick
but my thoughts thinks slow
and since my personality is currents in the water
it creates a poetic flow
my poems are addictive
my poetic style is rare
one read will have you shocked
two read will have you stuck
and once you reach three you'll never get enough
my flows are like dreams
cause they'll make yours come true
and if i were your genie
i ll grant your wishes to
my words are soothing
so soothing
when i speak,
you'll be feeling smooth
i would tell you the rest
but i'm not trying turn something good to a mess
My soul is like the wind
you never know when it blows
My name is Louis Haynes
And this is my poetic flow
Aug 2014 · 376
Once I Rise
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Once i rise,
i hope i make things better for my mother and brothers
cause God knows we struggled to long
but no matter what happened we stayed strong
even if things have gotta worse for my mother
As your first son i still treat you like any other
Once i rise,
i hope i make a good living for me and my girl
cause when nobody was there when i was down
i had her in my world
Once i rise,
i hope i can make all my hatters mad
cause every since i was younger they tried to make things bad
Once i rise,
i can finally show the world who i truly am
show others who struggle that someone understands
you talking to a guy who grew up with not to many friends
cause people i considered as friends were enemies
that must showed why a lot of them envy me
Once i rise,
i ll finally let you all see
why real,loving,caring,trustworthy,and loyal
are definitions of me
cause even for a guy who was quiet in school
A lot of people still love me as a friend today
and the only reason i unleash these inner thoughts into the world
Cause i feel more of a man today
Aug 2014 · 1.5k
BOY VS. MAN
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Boy Vs Man,
which of these will win
because this is where it begins

A boy is in-mature
a boy only thinks of himself
he doesn't even care if he puts his own lady in stress
a boy will play games
as ladies you should know a boy never cares
he only says nice things to make you weak
and immune to the words he speaks
then after you give him what he wants then he's gone to the next
A boy will cheat on you and even lie
leaving you at a state to cry
A boy will tell you things
but want show no action as well
now we see why these boys always end up in jail
by the way a boy comes in all ages
cause its not about the real age
its about how mature that one person acts
VS,
A man will be there when you need him
be faithful at all times
A man will always be truthful
because there shouldn't be no reason of lying
A man will provide
A man want talk to a lady wrong
So a man is what a lady needs to become strong
A man knows that 2 strong loves equals a lifetime
a lifetime equals a wife
A man knows that at certain times he shouldn't be out with friends
A man would never turn his love to a ex
he treats his lady like a queen
he'll never use her for money nor ***

so there you have it Boy Vs. Man
which one would our ladies choose
because its outta find a winner
or just lose
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