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6.0k · Jan 2015
NAUGHTY THOUGHTS
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
You got a body like fire
When you're close i feel your heat
You know how to keep man running
Like runners in a track meet

I ll call you my daredevil
Cause when you in control you do different tricks
She works her mouth like a disease
When she goes downlow it drives me sick

Now im no weather man but rainy weather is what i predict
When im inside i feel a storm
I can make your body roar
Imma stretch your body out
Since thats the type of *** you adore

I'll work my tounge like a magnet
Its attracted to your body
And addicted to its taste
Your middle is like the glue and my mouth is the paper it pastes

What more can i say
Your middle is like a water gun
And i love to see it spray
No i dont need to be taught
But how can i stop all these naughty thoughts
5.6k · Feb 2014
Gentleman Vs Thugg
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
A gentleman is a guy who'll treat a girl right
But s thugg only wants to hit it for one night
A gentleman is romantic and sweet
A thugg is only nice to get in the sheets
The gentleman will open his lady door
And address her by her name of dear
A thugg will leave her and even more
But they say they bring a lady to cheer
A gentleman is faithful
Thugs are ungreatful
Calling girls ******* and hoes can be hateful
Thuggs are winning
Gentlemen are losing
The **** keeps lots of girls choosing
A gentleman dresses professional and neat
While a thugg sags and eorks the streets
You choose which one is best
Which one will win and put other to rest
A gentleman classifies me
But which one would yoh rather be
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2015
I love my ladies in all kinds
But **** why must cougars blow my mind
I done seen alot of hot young girls and boy there fine
But as im looking at this cougar i rather have mine
Shoot i ll baptist myself in your water if that have me saved
A been a bad boy you can whip me till i behave
**** these cougar ladies is definrtly some to crave
And as a bonus you can use me as your personal *** slave
When im bad you can put it in my mouth
I mean force me till i swollow every bit
For my reward i get to **** but thats not it
As a women i know guys put you in alot of mess
So let my hands do all the talking they ll surely relive your stress
1.5k · Feb 2014
KARMA
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
Before I fall asleep I'm thinking about you karma
Wonder why life is full of drama
And why so much pain is in my mamma
I eonder why you make things hard at times
Can't you see its hard enough
And if you ain't got nobody at times
Life can be ruff
You see karma I finally see who you are
But even when your smart doesn't mean your going far
Even when your right doesn't mean there won't be wrongs
But the bedt way to beat you is to move along
Then stay strong cause people judge for no reason
I swear people change more than the seasons
Even your friends will bring you down
But in in that situation now and I just go around
Well thanks karma is been a pleasure
I ll hit you back when my life together
1.4k · Aug 2014
BOY VS. MAN
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Boy Vs Man,
which of these will win
because this is where it begins

A boy is in-mature
a boy only thinks of himself
he doesn't even care if he puts his own lady in stress
a boy will play games
as ladies you should know a boy never cares
he only says nice things to make you weak
and immune to the words he speaks
then after you give him what he wants then he's gone to the next
A boy will cheat on you and even lie
leaving you at a state to cry
A boy will tell you things
but want show no action as well
now we see why these boys always end up in jail
by the way a boy comes in all ages
cause its not about the real age
its about how mature that one person acts
VS,
A man will be there when you need him
be faithful at all times
A man will always be truthful
because there shouldn't be no reason of lying
A man will provide
A man want talk to a lady wrong
So a man is what a lady needs to become strong
A man knows that 2 strong loves equals a lifetime
a lifetime equals a wife
A man knows that at certain times he shouldn't be out with friends
A man would never turn his love to a ex
he treats his lady like a queen
he'll never use her for money nor ***

so there you have it Boy Vs. Man
which one would our ladies choose
because its outta find a winner
or just lose
1.4k · Mar 2014
PARANOID
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm paranoid to wonder when life will end
Will I die alone
Or with family and friends
Is there a chance I ll see the day I ll become a man
Or be tooking away by the lords hands

I'm paranoid to see the Ghost
To become possessed is what I fear the most
I wonder if I ll find my mate
I'm paranoid to see my true fate

I'm paranoid to see true history
Though I wonder why our nations are in misery
At lease were in peace
Instead of war
But when peace has been released
That's when Im paranoid even more

My brother be in And out them streets
I'm paranoid one dat he ll be badly beat
I live a life that's full of drama
Ask karma
Or dharma
Why I'm so paranoid of the disease in my momma

These are the things that put me to tears
And are my biggest fears
1.4k · Mar 2015
In The Eyes Of A Gemini
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
For we who see this world as a adventurous place
Must deal with the hardest battles life has to face
We're so kind and generous yet it leads our hearts to pain and tears
Then when we look for ones we've helped no one is near
For we to be the sign of twins
Bi-polar and weirdness is where it begins
We have split personalities which means
We can be your greatest friends
Or worst enemies
For we to be the most trustworth,loyal
Why must we always be hurt
Because others take advantage of our kindness and leave us in dirt
Did i mention we geminis also love to flirt
In the eyes of a gemini what else we see
Well hows about my fellow gemini people tell me
1.3k · Jul 2014
LOST CAUSES PT. 2
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
I'm really starting lose love for this ***** undercover
Its ****** up that I gotta say that about my little brother
But every since this boy gotten older it's more drama
He care about a girl way more than his own momma
And plus this ***** rolling with ****** who be banging
I even tried to talk to this ***** about choices he making
All this ***** said its my life and my choice
This ***** be acting so tuff
He just a bluff
Can't even **** with him
I d beat him if I could
But I keep own keeping it good
LORD I'm really tryna hold a lot of anger its getting harder
Cause the things this boy been doing ain't bringing this family farther
Maybe it would be better if he started living with our father
A Bad Big brother is how this boy rates me
What's the since of shedding a tear
Towards a brother that prolly hates me
He say them ****** out in dem streets his real fam
At first I felt bad now ion really give a ****
He da type ***** that want everything handed to him
And when he can't get what he wants he'd steal
But I ll give him a bit credit if I see him tryna change
But if it doesn't work
It is what it is
I'm done talking about this *****
1.2k · Mar 2015
Nobody Like You
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
after all these years of hurt and pain
I ve finally met a person who has made those lost tears drain
I speak upon a woman whose fire heats my spirit
My mind and soul
Thats why i plan to love her in whole
When im feeling down
She always brings me up
Shes like my 4 Leaf clover
Cause when i think of her i feel luck
I write this poem upon a woman who has taken me as hers
So for her Gift is a man she deserves
She understands me more than my own family
And friends
Shes never judged me cause she sees something special in me that no other girl saw
Maybe this is the reason why i ll do anything to make her happy
Cause shes not only helped me but shes also made me better
I say this to the Lord above
To please help me make it to this woman
Whom i truly love
Shes is the best thing ever thats came into my life
And definetly plan on making her my future wife
I speak my words right here today
To motivate you in every way
Cause as long at day the sky is blue
There shall be nobody like you
Had to write this poem for a special girl that came into my life it truly has came from the heart
1.1k · Sep 2014
Popularity
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
I guess you gotta be popular for followers
popular for likes
once again i speak of this hatred i cannot fight
we all put our hearts into poetry
yet only the popular people get the likes for what they do

i show people love regardless of how many followers or likes they have
cause i understand that a lot of us wanna be heard
we want the world to know that we are here fighting a battle not yet lost
we post our problems so people can understand that life is no joke
we post about ones we love
from boyfriends girlfriends friends and fam
I only speaking the truth cause thats who i am

we all have the talent to change the world
we all have the talent to be as good as poets like Langston Hughes, Tupac and others as well
im just saying saying it's not the followers and likes that make the poet
only Passion and Desire make real poets
It crazy how we all put ours hearts into our poems and get no feedback
964 · May 2014
What Is It That Ladies Want
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
Is it love and affection
Diamond and pearls
Or to be called the most beautiful girl in the world
What is it that ladies want
When we're good to them
Some say we're to weak
When we're bad
They always end up hurt
And I don't speak upon the woman beaters
We all know those guy's are jerks
But what is it that ladies want
For us to stop our cheating
For us to stop our lies
Cause there's nothing more painful hearing than a woman's cry

Admit it every guy should understand
That a ladies tear has the power to bring tears to a man
But what is it that ladies want
For us to open there doors when we go places
Maybe they want more attention from us
They may even want more conversation
More appreciation for the things they do
they might even want more ***
But I really need the anwsers before I move on to next
What is it that ladies want
I really wanna know
Because not knowing this
May allow a lot of danger to show

what is it that ladies want
for us to take care of you while you sick
hold your hands when we walk to places
hold the door for you as well
and hold you in our arms at times when you feel lifes a livig hell
you want us guys to tell you how much we love you
tell you how much we appreciate you
tell you how much you are important to us in this world
that world lady,girl,female,women,and woman it shows power
without yall we are nothing
must guys dont understand how much we need ladies in the world

so what is that ladies want
they want us to be there for them
they want us buy them gifts
to not cheat
or abuse
cause there's nothing more hurtful than a woman's broken heart
God himself created women for a reason
not for guys to dog them
or have *** with anyone he sees

so what is that ladies want
its all in the heart
i mean every guy should know
they just want a person who cares for them
i guarantee you if we love our women like an husband
protect them like an father
then this world wouldn't have so many ******
we wouldn't have so many women commiting suicide
i just want for every woman around the world to know
that somebody understands what you go through
somebody cares
and that somebody is me
I know a lot of guys out here like myself has wondered this
963 · Aug 2014
CARESS YOUR THOUGHTS
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
as I look into your eyes I sense a stress and pain
Come let my words caress your thoughts for that happiness to regain
My words are soft
My charm is gentle
So when I speak my thoughts into yours
I can tell right now your thoughts want more
It's like I'm making love to your mind
Cause you ll start fantasizing about mine
This is when your fantasy forms
Your mind has made your body wet as a storm
So hows about my hands take place next
As we build our way into passionate ***
My words caress your thoughts
As my hands undress you slow
It's like a rhythm so lets go with the flow
When everything is over,
You'll feel better than before
Because when my thoughts are done caressing your thoughts you 'll always want more
942 · Mar 2015
Stronger
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
For the people who judged you
And Ex's that didn't last no longer
The pain they all brought has only made you stronger
For the ups and downs thats crossed your path
We wouldnt know mother nature if we haven't felt her wrath
What makes you weak can you stronger
What makes you stronger makes you better
When a loved one passes away
Only the strongest seak out through the day
When you stay yourself through all the mess we see in life
It shows you are stronger and survive the fight
We as people know that bad is taken over good
But once we as people come together as one
Then watch all the good things our world will have done
935 · Sep 2014
Poetic Disease
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
when your writing non-stop
writing the ink out your pens
or leads out your pencils
then i must confess
have you heard of poetic disease
because i think i've been possessed

when your mind has things flowing
and you know it can't stop
i bet it would be hours until the pencil or pen drops

this is not a real disease
but you can catch this mentaly
and once you do
just imagine all the writing your mind will allow you to

image the thoughts that'll run your mind
image the flow that'll control your mind
when i was first possessed i thought i was crazy
my hands moving non-stop it seemed so amazing

i felt so great
my poems were coming back to back
like music i had a un-controllable flow
and thats a moment i ll never let go

for anyone who has had this disease
tell the world your feelings
your experience
was it good bad or great
did you love it or hate
cause i've never witnessed such a disease that allows us to create
902 · Sep 2014
Waterfalls
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
as i awaken from Heaven
there's this sound
it's no ordinary sound either
but where is it coming from

the sound is loud
but can make a person feel great
the sound is also pure
and will make a person feel calm

a sound of peacefulness
that has me took
legends say it even has a beautiful look
some seen it in person some seen them in books

as i followed the sound
i approached this place
i was shocked by it's beauty
that has approached my face

out of all these years of looking
i still can't believe
that this whole time
waterfalls were the peace of heaven i hadn't seen
850 · Jun 2015
The Key To Love
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
Shot outs to all the lovers that live
The ones who last long and ones that give
To all lovers who have came to a fall
Never give up give it your all
To ending relationships or ones who end up hurt
Stay strong cause something better is coming your way
No he or she wont come the next day
You ll even face more heartbreaks till that person is found
So dont beat yourself up there somewhere around
And they might not be in your city or town
But when you find your perfect person remember to always hold them down
Regardless if it gets ruff or tuff
Real lovers do.t worry about that stuff
Also remember to never have affairs or lust
Cause the key to Love is to always trust
844 · Sep 2014
New World Order
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
for a guy who's struggled his whole life
i must say I've done great
though there's day i feel no good
because today another person gone die in the hood

For a guy who ain't barely had stuff
i must admit i found a way
so things wouldn't be so ruff
cause all that i see is a man

thats what i see
as i look into the mirror
i see the man is me
a new world order is what i wanna see

for a guy thats quite shy and barely talks
i still maintain to make friends
even if i'm a hard person to understand
i know i can make it like that was my only plan

for a guy who speaks on change
he only gets judged since people think thats lame
as i sit here and think i shake my head in shame
no body wants to be different it's like everyone wants to be the same

most girls wanna be hoes
most guys wanna be gangbangers and thugs
we should want a new world order
cause them streets ain't no love
782 · Mar 2014
DEAR ROSE (ROSELINNA)
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
First I would like to say I'm thankful your the caretaker of my mother
Im so happy your nothing like the others
This poem is not only from me its also from my dearest brothers
We're proud to see that your the person you are
A lady with infinite pride
And a personality that's bright as stars
We love how you come around and laugh with us and play
But can you promise louis and momma you won't scare them like you on one day
Dear rose
We see you as a angel that was sent from Christ
it likes God sent you hear to make our mother live more right
Mainly because we treat her so wrong
Rose were trying as hard as can
But for a mother that's now disabled,
Its hard to raise her boys to men
Were saying this now because we know you understand
Dear rose we hope your feeling better
And we all hope you read this poem or family letter
Well thank you rose its been great
While your at home your second family is here
But in the meantime we'll
Make sure mother faces no more pain and tears
767 · Mar 2014
Misunderstood
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
My whole life I was the most talked about person there was
I was talked about by people by co workers by friends
I thought one day it would all end
I laugh and smile not to show how I truly feel around people
It not like anybody will care anyways
I was always judged throughout my life In school
And yet they still judge me to look cool
My whole life people told me I'm nothing I'd always be considered lame
So now I've gaven up on t popularity and fame
I feel there's no reason for me to be in this world
I laugh and feel sad as I wath all my cousin and brothers get girls
Nobody understands me not my brothers and even my mother
I guess that's why it shows from others
Nobody understands  my pain my kife my struggles and more
I'm an angel that's fallen that can no longer sore
Nobody understands me only because I'm different
Different by how I act and how I look
I was the kid who had nicknames still today its the same
I still have pain inside
But out of every hurt I felt it never ruined my pride
So that part is good
My Name is Louis Haynes
And I'm misunderstood
764 · Apr 2014
Feel So Right Pt.1
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
oh i knew the day i got a peak at ya body
i was gonna have dreams of me being naughty
well today's the day my dream will come true
and it starts in this room with me and you
were both virgins,
were both ready
my goal is to make yo body bust like confetti
shhhh baby let the music play
while my hands caress your body bay

let me undress you slow
while i kiss you soft
yea go with flow
cause imma set the mood off
kissing on your neck
down to ya breast,
you no what comes next
this the definition of real ***
shhhhh baby no need to tell me things
i know you like it when that tongue play with your belly ring

next I come down to ya thighs
going down your legs,
when i get between i see your wet that's no surprise
your body's like my jungle
i'm the last survivor
feel so much heat,
i might just be ya fire fighter
so when she see me going through it i surpised her
your body's my intense,
so im giving it great sastisfaction
you know you wasn't ready for this ***** eating action
your body's my problem,
and imma solve it no math fractions
this not a movie but we both giving plenty action

you really thinking imma keep on *******
put them legs around my waist its time to start *******
see baby were no longer dreaming
as im stroking it back to back your loudly screaming
little did i know,
she turned over on top
riding on me fast,
like she don't even wanna stop
i swear i wanna make her my only girl in this city
as she rides me i start ******* on both her ******
once she stopped i'll admit i thought she was done
then when she put it in my face,
i seen the battle wasnt won
dang she got me lost inside with no map
even tried to escape but my heads trapped
im not giving up,
this not a battle meant for losing
got me ******* on ya **** as body oozing

hate to say it but im almost going down
this girl trying her best to make me drown
i finally see shes tryna be tough
so i puwhile i hit her from behind
it feels so right we wish that we could rewindt her hands behind her back
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You know that feeling when music plays in the background
Whipped cream and strawberries on the bed
most people rush through I'd rather take it slow instead
You know that feeling when there's rose petals,
That lead inside the room
We both stand here naked as we wait upon the moon
You know that feeling when it starts
If my tounge starts on your body
Is when you give me most your heart
You know that feeling when you say he's a teaser
well tonight my lady I ll be your pleasure pleaser
You know that feeling when it feels more better
My tounge falls between your legs
The secret that gets you wetter
As time goes by,
I hear the sound of your voice
Your love feels like church,
And I'm dying to rejoice
You know that feeling when I'm deeper
Your nails stratching my back
Your moans grow louder
and your becoming more louder
You know that feeling when your legs come to my shoulder
As we ease on to the wall
Eating until I feel a river fall
You know that feeling when  evertime I get inside
Your something like a goddess when you climb on top and ride
I know you know your riding is the best
The feeling of you riding with my face between your breast
You know that feeling when you lose control
We've went in so many places its like were trying to travel
You know that feeling when your trying to hold stable
I enter from behind as she grips on to the table
No my baby never lacks
The deeper I go in
The harder she throws it back
You know that feeling when you lasting for hours
Our bodies are both wet as she's eaten in the shower
I promise I ll always give this kind of endurance
Your body is in good hands
Your my allstate insurance
Our last position is the 69
But tonight will be 68
Because I wanna make you mines
746 · Sep 2014
DEAR NYMPHOS
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
or the guys who love a ******,
they say you should move on to the next
cause when you ain't the one who's ******* her
she find somebody else for ***
these ****** women will love you for your heart
but love another for ***,
and for the real men out here i know yall won't go for that
to much *** only leads to 2 things
that's a disease and a baby
then once it happens
you'll lie to your man cause you know things will get crazy
trying to be slick when yall use protection
trying to be slick when yall change yall phones
when a man already knows whats going on
at that moment there she ready to cheat
that feeling of randsom hits her
it turns up her heat
Then once she get to you she tease you into ***
just to make it seem she's won
I be **** if imma fall into a trap
Cause i much rather be done
when thats the stuff that they wanna be on
shoot don't back to me when im gone
733 · Sep 2014
Someone Else
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
right now our feelings can't maintain
well at least mines
i'm just saying it's messed up how you tell me you love me
tell me you ll be there
tell me one day we'll be married
i just feel you don't care

why you get a new phone and wont me text the old one
that shows you hiding something
that shows you lied
now i'm sittings here along with tears flowing in my eyes
i wonder how you'll feel if i was with someone better
someone more of my type
i bet then then you wouldn't feel right
I loved this girl since middle school school it's messed up how she does me wrong knowing all the good i done for her

somebody tell me what to do i feel lost
731 · Feb 2014
Just Being Real
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
I'm just sitting looking at the people
Praying for the ones who out here tryna be illegal
Lifes like a game but its one we shouldn't play
Its people out here dying in my city everyday

For the ones who got a loved in the jail
If I had the money I'd pay to let them all bail
I'm keeping it real this is how I live
God made me as a person who don't mind to show and give

I just want this world to know
Judging a person doesn't mean there true feelings will show
They hold it deep deep inside there hearts
Crying cause they see yall tryna tear them straight apart

To those people all they tryna do is hate
So put a smile on your face and move at your own rate
I pray for the young people going crazy
Hoping that young girl make it with her baby

I pray for all my people in the streets
Hoping in the future we ll have statistics beat
Main they say us black people been beated
The only reason they won is cause the racist people cheated

Gotta admit this world can be a shame
They say we living in a world of the cools and the lames
Ha who ever said that your a joke
Why cause that lie has been broke

But sadly our people dying off lust
Which shows in relationships we can't even have trust
Looking at world all around in range
Just be real I hope one day it change
726 · Jul 2014
DAMN REALITY
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
**** reality look at what you done
Got people on Facebook posting there selfs with guns
Then the people who doing it be thinking it's so cool
But what if the tables got turn around
What if somebody crazy saw it
What would you do
Now you got ****** out here looking for you
Because you wanna do what your friends do
NO!
be yourself homie your girl has said lots of good things about you to
And nobody don't wanna see none happen to you
I ll tell you straight up that life ain't a game
I know my bestie don't be saying that **** for nothing mane
Why follow your friends
When they should be following you
I know you da realiest ***** they can come to
I ll tell you what happens when you follow behind a bad person steps
You get set up for the ****
You get set up for time
You ll get set up over anything for trusting to many people in mind
Its a lot of ****** out here blind to see that
You a educatate brotha with money so
Be that
You a educated brotha with a good ******* your side
And I know don't wanna do none that put tears in her eyes
Ay it's your life
And we all just want the best
We seen a lot of ****
And don't want you to end like the rest
**** Reality
I hope this poem can bring a change
It's ****** up how we speak of real and people look pass it dang
720 · Dec 2014
DEAR FAMILY
YoungGentleman17 Dec 2014
Family what family mane me my brothers and mom been struggling for years
When we needed yall yall disappered
Most of them dont even calls
But feel guilty once one falls

I can honestly count maybe two handfulls of people as my real fam
While the others Prolly wouldn't give a ****
What kind of family talks bad about others
Like my mom for example people in the family judged her along with me and my brothers
To those who did it remember God dont like ugly

Yall better learn soon
We struggled our whole life
We never had the silver spoon
To whom reads this i dont mean to sound mean
But i got a sister cousin and relatives i haven't even seen

To my brother L Christopher Haynes-Rhodes speedy and sisters Ashley Rhodes maury and LarChelle Haynes we know our other mom to faces pain but as i write this poem i want us to build upon each others struggle for a happiness to regain its not like the others really care we dont even have get togethers nor reunions to

Smh we gotta do better as a family right now my mom has been in the hostpital for nearly a week for the ones Who came to see her who texed her and sent gifts i thank you all it's good to see that a small amount of people care and even the ones who said they ll pray as well
To everyone who is family on my mom and dad side if you can i want you all to share this if not spread the word  because this is not only a poem but this is a message

The day we become one whole will be a moment. Of truth i dont know how long it ll take but the only way that ll come true is if we all be real with one another besides fake thats all i have to say
I thought a family was suppose to bring happiness seems like mine is the opposite
699 · Jan 2015
Sonnet 3
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
If we loved each others souls
Would that make us soulmates
If i gave you my love in wholes
Then why must your soul hate
Now im no cupid
Though i feel like i've been hit by his bow
All your exes should feel stupid
For letting something this amazing go
No ones love is perfect
But that doesn't mean we cant come close
With faith it will be worth it
So lets give this our most
Cause no new man will appear upon a coast
So for this new year of us lets toast
678 · Jul 2014
NOW IN DAYS
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
now in days,
every guy wanna become a thugs
Cause when they was broke they saw people got connected to some plugs
And on top of that they start selling drugs
Now in days,
These women becoming hoes
These women becoming thots
These women getting faster
Cause there hormones getting more hot
Especially when they developed quick
Don't you know once you develop
There's a dog out searching for its cat
No I don't only write out poetry
I point out facts
Its up to anybody who reads my messages to get a understand how I feel
Now in days
There's people younger than me that robs and steals
People younger than me talking about they in da mob
Now in days,
These ****** getting popular off these made up *** gangs
Dying cause they think its a game
I'm done speaking
I've preached to them enough
Cause they could do better
And very well
Plus they never went to church
But then pray to god once they in jail
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2015
Come America as i tell a lesson we should all note
First saying on watch out for whom we give our vote
Most politics will tell us all we wanna hear
Yet America is still at it's biggest fear

For the people that we all think to elect
Should first do positive things to earn our respect
"Cause talking is only words" a debate is entertainment to most
So how is America the best Country? When Freedom here is still Lost

All we the people want is a change
Have you seen all the people dying in range
So how will we seek peace? When violence seems to be everyone's key
Yet they'll tell us better days are what we'll see

What we need is a leader role model to others
A person who can unite us as sisters and brothers
A person who puts and end to this war of race
A person who can make America a better place

So which person for president will we all choose
Cause if the wrong person is in charge we all lose
So come america as i tell you something you should note
"The Impact of our freedom is determined by our vote"
624 · Mar 2014
DEDICATION
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm dedicated to the writing I do
If I can achieve my goals you can to
All It takes is time and dedication
faith and hope
Disregaurd the feelings cause they shall cope
when you give your dedication to something
You won't achieve it in a day
You gotta put in more time
Put in more focus
You even have to put in tears
Cause there's time we will fail
I mean well fail a lot
But if on trying you ll feel like a star player when there hot
And when that happens,
Your now in a zone
now since you, ve reached your limit
Everyone will see your on
605 · Nov 2014
Portrait Of a Women
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
if shes fought her whole life
been through break-up after next
that shows that us guys only want women for ***
to all of the real women out here i'm on your side
you don't deserve none of the pain you face
and for the ones who hurt there good men
i must say that'll be hard to replace
Mane if we just man up for least
then we wont have to worry about females going gay
or turning into thots
what if someone did our mothers and sisters the same
along with the number of suicides I've seen
it's all just a shame
We tell them we'll be faithful
but then go behind and cheat
trying fix things with ***
then keep the cycle in repeat
We tell them we love them
but can't even settle down with one
Because they say being unfaithful equals fun
for all the girls out here stuck in a heartbreak just hang in there
your sun will shine again
with a good man in your life to begin
and to the guys out here hoeing around
when your older and lonely with no one to hold or kiss
just remembered those hearts you broken in your pass cant be missed
i dont know why we cant show love in might
all our women want is for someone to treat them right
594 · Sep 2014
Mothers Love
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
A love that's long
a love that lasts
that feels so strong
you can't get pass

A love that impacts us
and makes us who we are today
and even if some have some that passed away
her love remains in there souls everyday

A love that we should value
And never forget as well
her words are like heaven
plus when your down she can tell

she has the words of encouragement
that brings us out even the worst slumps
they even told us where theirs obstacles we must jump

i understand some mothers are good
some mothers are bad
but they always had
a scent or feeling that made us glad

therefore a love we all cherished since our life began
and carried it all the way to where we are today
A love that brings us to joy and spirit
and wash away our sins
Makes me feel a mothers love will never end
for the people with mothers who have passed away
i hope this poems brings you motivation throughout your days
i might not have a mother who's gone
but she has a very bad disease in her muscles
she can barely walk nor barely move
and it's caused me to lose my whole grove
573 · Sep 2014
How I'm Feeling
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
right now i feel like rapping
right now i feel like singing
even tho i sit here and write poems
i ll rather read them to you in song
i'm afraid to fall in love,
because what i thought was good was a heartbreaker
so if i show my true love to her
will she become m hearts taker

cause i'm tiring of being hurt
i wanna be with a woman that loves me for me
the girl i used to love has betrayed me lied
plus she doesn't care for the tears in my eyes
how im feeling right now is crazy and sad i know i ll never get her back
553 · May 2015
Shine
YoungGentleman17 May 2015
We all have the ability to shine
Thats why i take whatever is mine
We all shine in different ways
Like coaches who use different plays
Players who have different skills
Shoot even assassins shine when they ****
You see nobody is a loser
We were all made to shine
All you need is good efforts and time
Patience is also a key to shine bright
Cause you cant get rich in one night
So if anyone has ever told you you cant make it
Break it!!!!
Cause if you make every moment yours like i do mines
Then everybody should have the ability to shine
542 · Sep 2014
I'm Still In Love With you
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
regardless of the cheating
lies
betrayal
and pain
it's like everywhere i go i see your name

i know we are the perfect couple
i know we are meant to be
i know you are the girl for my life
as i read these prays i pray that you become my wife

right now i'm sad because this separation is just killing me
it's killing you even worse
cause i know you love me
bus as a girl i know you wanna party
have fun
and have ***

those the main reasons why you don't answer my texts
a lot of people told me i can do better
at first i didn't listen now i think it's true
cause there's someone out here who is need of a man
a man who'll be there love them
care for them support them
and where ever that one special girl is
i just want you to know that i'll find you one day
and when that day comes
just know that the rest our life's will be a happy ending
as long as a long happiness forever
so my girlfriend left me today and i feel bad but good to cause i know God has something better for me
542 · Sep 2014
Stayed To Myself
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
even when i was judged
even back when i was dissed
i stayed to myself
showed people i didn't care about how they thought of me
that whole time that made me wanna become a man they never be

everyplace i go,
like school, barbershops, parties, and work
i stayed to myself,
not tryna have have to many friends
i heard that brings more drama to your life
is that to hard to understand

see regardless of what they think
regardless of what they done and  tried towards me
those jokes only show one thing in-mature you see

i stayed to myself
to stay out of harms way
to keep away from fake people
because to much popularity can be a danger
so dont worry about me i'd rather walk this world a stranger
538 · Sep 2014
Metaphors
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
your looks are like a sun
every summer you become hotter
and since i'm attracted to beauty
it won't take much for me to spot her

your eyes are like water
because as i stare into them
it feels as i'm watching currents flow in the sea
so i guess the blue in your eyes has hypnotized me

your looks are like a heaven
one look at you fills me up with joy
it even makes me feel heaven's scent
now that's a feeling i must enjoy

your body's like a grave
cause when fall into it it feels i'm a step closer to death
so as i sink into your waters
my best bet is to hold my breath

your personality is like an broom
just being around you has me swept
your mind is like a treasure chest
that's where all my secrets are kept

all of these things together makes you a goddess
even the girl of my dreams
but either way it goes
these words classify you as a queen
funny thing is this actually shows part of what my dream girl possesses
537 · Mar 2014
This Woman's Work
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
It takes a real man to treat a lady right
You give her love
Affection Attension
Pleasure you do these things
And your bound to be together
Forever

You know she's real when she breaks her back to be in your life
Thats the type of girl I ll be dying to make my wife
A lot of people don't know ehat the power of love can do
But I see a lot of power I as look into you

This woman's work,
Can make a man fall to his knees
Begging her that's she's the answer to his needs
you know she's special when you start to cope
Living a day of love and infinite hope

This woman's work,
Can bring the nation close
Her work can  put a end to crime
This woman was made to shine
And I'm hoping at the end,
This kind of woman will be mine's
This is my poem version of the real song
537 · Mar 2014
FIRST LOVE
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
That moment when you first see there face
Knowing if they were in your life it'll always be great
So is true your first love
Keeps you in the cool mind of state

I remember my first crush
I was only in the 5th grade
Everytime I saw her face
I really thought I had it made

You know that feeling when they walk pass
And you catch them by your eye
Sometimes you feel like your in heaven
Sometimes you feel relief
And when there in a emergency you become the 911

That moment when they finally come to your
Heart
Making promises to never break apart
Its like you started a new life part
Attiension all how did yall feel when yall seen yall first love
531 · May 2014
Words Of Encouragement
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
Words that have given hope
given faith
Words that build momentum
words that make you not wanna give up
you see words of encouragement
is the reason why we stood up after a fall
made it through the storms and ups and downs

words of encouragement
is what kept those collasping relationships together
who ever knew that simple words had so much power
now i see how i won my tack meets
how teams win sports game
it's the words of encouragement that makes them want it even more

words of encouragement is what can keep a good world together
to make not many people wanna make that better
but how about we all just encourage somebody
if you have an friend thats facing hard times
give them the words of encouragement
watch how good that make that person feel
watch how those words put an big impact on them
and  watch how God will Reward you for the helpful deed you've done

Word that are such meaning
such pleasure
can even make the devil himself feel better
words that seak out
like the words we hear in church
all fall into that one category
Words Of Encouragement
526 · Mar 2015
Virgin Loving
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
Now im no ****** expert
But it takes no rocket scientist to know what you like
anyone can find that spot
Just like anyone can make your make your body hot
I might be a ****** but i ll put in good endurance
Got your body in good hands like all-state insurance
Making love to a ****** prolly not what you would expect
But if its coming from me you wont regret
I know your thinking i dont have stamina
I dont have skill
But let tonight your answer thats when things get real
522 · Jul 2014
FROM THEN TO NOW
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
Back then was the worst apects of my life
That's when people did me wrong and then they swared they did right
People use to hunt me down each day in night
So I locked myself within my thoughts as they began to write
I use to be intimidated by word people would say now since I changed they say they never thought they ll see the day
Just like I ll never see the day my brother go back to good ways
Never see these street ****** turn into gentlemen
And these hoes turn into women with class
Couldn't make money the right way so she in clubs shaking her ***
But enough about the world
This poem is wrote to me
So the people who faced what I faced want be alone you see
Fron then to now
Now to then
I promise to only love those who I been with through thick and thin
522 · Feb 2014
Trayvon Martin
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
Since a white killed a black then we all get mad
But we **** each other daily now that's all just sad
But the person who did it walked away all glad
But it only happened cause the judge was his dad

We still dying over a a color sign and name
Sorry trayvon but your deaths brought none but total shame
Cause we do this each day and each night
And once one die by a white

We call it racism and start up fights
So either way it ain't right
Cause if he died by a black it ll be alright

I'm just being real
This is how I feel
God gave everybody a a time we ll be killed

But I gotta admit trayvon maybe it wasn't your time
Wrong place and wrong time had you victim of the crime
Uts bad to see another brothers been deseased
So last thing I ll say is rest in peace
518 · Feb 2014
MONEY
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
The color of green
Wanted by all human beings
To have a lot amounts is our biggest dream
Some sell to get it
Some get jops
You can get it by working
But some get it when they rob
Money makes a person feel great
But to much money can turn the realiest person fake
Money is a root of all evil
Money is needed in high levels
Some get money when working with god
But you can also get it while working with the devil
Money is also a life saver
It can get us out struggles thats hard to beat
Money is ***** and money is neat
Money is sour and even sweet
God made money to put us to a test
To see if the  riches would help tbe best
517 · Nov 2014
Guilty By Suspicion
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
i know a guy who's great with his game
talks to different women everywhere he goes
to his main girls who's fell into his trap
one day feels loss and cant be helped by a map
he talks to that one girl
her emotions for him is deep
daily i know it's on the rise
she even dissed me numerous amount of times
but then at certain times she wants to be my friend
when he breaks her heart i wonder then if she'll understand
he talks to her when shes around
he messes with her
flirts with her and even plays
once she gives herself up
that'll be the end of him
she now feels alone has no one else to see
so who does come to now since he's gone
no surprise it's me
she now feels guilty
mentally she feels sad
because she never knew i had
such feelings for her in the past
but when it came to me and him
she put me last
so theres this girl at my job i had a crush on right my friend took her away nut the worst part is she had feelings for him the whole time
516 · Aug 2014
JUST ENOUGH
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Look I ve not only wrote this to catch your attention
I ve written this to let you know when nobody's there just look for me
Then you'll see,
What a real friend is
I care for those who I'm cool with and even the ones I'm not cool with
Why,
Cause this is me
I stand for louis haynes and nobody else
No,
Words will never bring me down again
If life was a checkered flag
We all should go for that win
And I guess that'll be just enough till it ends
514 · Sep 2014
The Words I Speak
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
the words i speak will make you feel that i'm teaching
It must the real stuff I say
must be the way i look at life through the day

The words i speak,
will let all know im quite different than others
might be a reason why im judged
can't say i really care
i've been living for 18 years i been known life ain't fair

The words i speak will have you shocked
cause i speak upon power
speak upon school
i even speak upon the wanna be's who think they so cool

The words i speak aren't ordinary
I speak against my mind
fight against my thoughts
they say life is a lesson
i can't tell cause lot's haven't been taught

The words i speak don't mind to be heard
don't mind to be known
until people pay attention,
i guess my words speak for there own

Cause when you talk about changing the world
people then will think your weird or even lame
But when your killing, hoeing, or ****-gin
it's like the whole world knows your name
513 · Mar 2014
Devil Is A Lie
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
The devil is a lie
I was raised as a Christian,
Made to sore in tbe sky
The devil is only trying to make me become wrong
Or even an society threat
I never wished upon evil
Guess we never met
The devil is a lie
If he puts himself In other people
The lord I serve says to never be illegal
But the devil thinks he sneeky
The devil thinks he's slick
One day I felll for a lady
And she wasn't the wrong chick
The devil took over her life
So when she passed away,
She became the devils wife
The devil is a lie
If he thinks I ll give him my life or my sole
I belong to Jesus
Yes devil he has my whole
511 · Jun 2015
RAIN
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
LOOK BABY I KNOW IM QUIET AND QUITE SHY
BUT WHEN COMES TO FREAKS IM A DIFFERENT VERSION
I KNOW YOU PROLLY SEE ME AS NON SKILL GUY
ESPECIALLY KNOWING THAT IM A ******

BUT AT THIS POINT TONIGHT I OWN IT
SO LETS SEIZE THE DAY TILL OUR CLOSING  MOMENT
I LL TAKE OUR LOVE DOWN ROMANTIC ROAD
ROSE PEDALS, CANDLES, STRAWBERRIES, WITH CREAM IS MY CODE

BABY YOUR LIKE MY PRIZED POSSESSION AND I LL HAVE YOU SPOILED
COME RELAX WHILE I RUB YOU DOWN WITH THIS OIL
NOW IM NOT SAYING IM NASTY
BUT I PROMISE TO CHERISH ANY LOVER THATS THIS CLASSY

SINCE YOU LOVE YOUR BODY SUCH ADORED
THEN CAN MY LIPS ADORE IT EVEN MORE
IF MY AIR IGNITES YOUR HEAT IN CONTINUOUS LIT
THEN I LL MAKE YOUR CREAM BUST WITH MY BANANA LIKE A  MELTING BANANA SPLIT

CAUSE ONCE IT MELTS YOUR ****** HAS CAME
HATE IS LOST PLEASURE IS REGAINED
SO REMEMBER MY NAME
CAUSE NEXT IM INSIDE I LL LOVE TO FEEL YOUR RAIN

FROM MY NUTS TO MY LIPS
AND IF I EVER FEEL DEHYDRATED I LL TAKE A SIP
497 · Jun 2015
Long Distance Lovers
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
I will always love you till my dying day
Regardless if we live far away
Or far apart
You will always be the girl that holds my heart

Some people think our love isnt true
That we wont never meet
But as long as the sky is blue
That lie shall always be beat

True love is what we have and not afriad to show
My girl is a Leo a Gamer even jokester and im not afriad for the world to know
Shes beautiful with alot of tats
And loves to show of all that

Chuqeisea Louis is her name
I laugh cause she gives my first name fame
And her last and my first name are the same
But i bet our hatters will think thats lame

We both have proven that long distance love can last
Especially since times moves so fast
We enjoy every moment together that pasts by
So theres no reason for people to ask us why

Why do we prefer long distance in life
Because its a challenge not many have done
And the day you become my wife
Then our long distance love has won
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