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"tentativeness" poems
Cold nights and nervous bones Your laugh makes me smile The parking lot is empty We are full of tentativeness Cute awkwardness This feels right Like nothing else has before I feel happy I blushed a lot. You're so sweet You called me gorgeous We didn't even touch But it feels like we did.
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Sep 21, 2012
Sep 21, 2012 at 12:25 AM UTC
Popsicle Shivers
Drunk on love Is a phrase I have never understood Until now It's the way you say lollipop It's the minute bobbing of your hair when you laugh It's your ability to fluster me and leave me speechless when I normally pride myself in my rapport and I wonder what you're thinking right now Is any of it the same? It's your curiosity and your genuine soul and spirit and your tentativeness and your fear and It's that the whites of your eyes Remind me of home Sun kissed skies And a longing to roam The horizon There's a familiarity and I get a pit in my stomach that tells me I miss you. I notice the difference when I reminisce, you- The difference is, you don't smell like cow **** You smell like crisp morning rain And bath salts. I don't actually know your scent. What I meant Is that I'm calmed by the crashing of rain And the other supposedly drives you insane. You provide me with both: An overwhelming peace And an ever-growing crease in the folds of my mind As I try to rewind To the first time I met you. Burned into my brain: the first time you set two Boisterous, beautiful, brown gold orbs Patiently on mine as you tried to absorb All of the pieces of me Contrast and contour Not one fault ignored. And by no fault of yours, You sat and you listened As sunbeams glistened And my heart raced And my mind doted A smile donned your face And my emotions exploded Amidst this maelstrom of noise These powerful currents Distant echoes grew poised And struck me recurrent And your laughter sprang forth From your buttercream smile. Time slowed, and I thought: please stay for a while. Residual raindrops grew reluctantly silent The insecurities of my ever-racing mind resided Dim in comparison to the fervor you'd quelled and excited I could feel my legs keel and go weak When you returned stolen breaths as you started to speak And they told me to "be careful" And "not to fall too fast" But this vertigo feels lovely And I'd rather it would last.
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Dec 23, 2016
Dec 23, 2016 at 12:53 AM UTC
Melissande
Drunk on love Is a phrase I have never understood Until now It's the way you say lollipop It's the minute bobbing of your hair when you laugh It's your ability to fluster me and leave me speechless when I normally pride myself in my rapport and I wonder what you're thinking right now Is any of it the same? It's your curiosity and your genuine soul and spirit and your tentativeness and your fear and It's that the whites of your eyes Remind me of home Sun kissed skies And a longing to roam The horizon There's a familiarity and I get a pit in my stomach that tells me I miss you. I notice the difference when I reminisce, you- The difference is, you don't smell like cow **** You smell like crisp morning rain And bath salts. I don't actually know your scent. What I meant Is that I'm calmed by the crashing of rain And the other supposedly drives you insane. You provide me with both: An overwhelming peace And an ever-growing crease in the folds of my mind As I try to rewind To the first time I met you. Burned into my brain: the first time you set two Boisterous, beautiful, brown gold orbs Patiently on mine as you tried to absorb All of the pieces of me Contrast and contour Not one fault ignored. And by no fault of yours, You sat and you listened As sunbeams glistened And my heart raced And my mind doted A smile donned your face And my emotions exploded Amidst this maelstrom of noise These powerful currents Distant echoes grew poised And struck me recurrent And your laughter sprang forth From your buttercream smile. Time slowed, and I thought: please stay for a while. Residual raindrops grew reluctantly silent The insecurities of my ever-racing mind resided Dim in comparison to the fervor you'd quelled and excited I could feel my legs keel and go weak When you returned stolen breaths as you started to speak And they told me to "be careful" And "not to fall too fast" But this vertigo feels lovely And I'd rather it would last.
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When you are gone I will miss you I will miss your difficulties and the issues that surround you Your troubled past, will be a vacant gap, no longer something to troubleshoot I will miss counting wine bottles in your car, behind doors, in corners, under chairs, All of this, I will miss I will miss the size of you Your small blond head, almost, but never fully leaning on my chest, I will miss, your tentativeness I will miss your slurred words and glazed eyes and the sight of you seeking respite, in liquids, gold and white Your hands shaking, and my heart breaking Yes, all of this, all I had of you I will miss
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Jan 24, 2017
Jan 24, 2017 at 4:03 PM UTC
When you are gone
"No Fun — for anybody. 67. You are getting Greedy. Act your old age. Relax — This won't hurt." - hunter thompson but it did, Hunter. and the silence grows fuller like a plane to Nicaragua,   or the sudden surge of quiet    after two bodies have already      fallen from the vertigo       of pleasure.    treading the barbed line of     living as the wind acrobats     and mangles itself into      a dagger - a sharpest edge      of memory's telling:         i am endlessly searching      for something i cannot name.      scouring for lost things      in the pocket of this      realm. tentativeness     a tenfold - sink or swim.      mind dwindles somewhere caught   like a flailing fly in the lair     of a relentless tarantula. furiously this night grows     insectile in its habiliment,   buzzing and drilling against the    walls pounding on them like a man would, angered and hostile    behind narrowing faces of wall     in steep confinement. tiptoeing      through shards         fire             song               light                  no light                    silence. this won't hurt under secret strobe and cigarette haze this won't hurt underneath the parasol of influence as the cosmos rains weighing down eyelids close to pavement this won't hurt this won't hurt won't hurt this, won't this hurt
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Sep 27, 2015
Sep 27, 2015 at 10:26 PM UTC
Onomatopoeic Dissonance In Gonzo
i dreamt of you last night of your name lighting up the screen of my phone of us chatting again, talking as if we're friends as if nothing happened i would say that it was as if thing were normal but that isn't normal for us. or now is it? normal for us is, avoiding ignoring questioning imploring it's ambiguity and tentativeness it is stubbornness and resentment and bottled feelings and empty explanations and hurt pride normal for us is silence and things are back to normal
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Jun 16, 2019
Jun 16, 2019 at 11:46 AM UTC
way overdue
A twist on the knob may bring about another bout of setting this into the brightest contest: in the middle of so many arrivals become departure even when coming into. Fold this abandon into prayer and slide it underneath a pillow – your pillow, a dagger to wage fray. lean toward the absence like a lover, dream befallen like an unwanted visitor. devise a plan as if nothing was here at play. there is nothing here but the tentativeness of space – it may or may not happen, what of it, as if it is possible, our bravest reach to things we recall is our conscious error, pity our duty if not our image cast mirror to broken mirror shared is the damage blown by wind shorn out of an eyelid’s flutter, weaving, turned to writhe in this mortal bed this day will evolve tomorrow and we can say amid transition we are coming to be, and being as we have went how, in this frail wonder are we but unsure.
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May 19, 2016
May 19, 2016 at 8:47 AM UTC
Tentative All Things
Elephant of choice Choose to ignore Both avoid chore Abstain our voice Knowing the fault Question a future Emotions need of suture Unable to halt Nowhere to turn Yearn a soul of you Our love decay true Tentativeness to learn Lonely is the heart Unease and undone Solace I have none Aspect of new start Uncertain a fear Confused and lost Our life a cost The future unclear
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Jun 23, 2016
Jun 23, 2016 at 9:07 AM UTC
Melancholy