my elated grin shows my pleased heart beat
my world my everything my dear lover
with you i do believe in lust so sweet
something i never thought to discover
whiskey gin and wine all heat up insides
none compare to how you melt a stiff heart
eyes of blue calm this though like ocean tides
grin of warm glance of cool are just a start
mind like rivers twisting and unbroken
strong and balanced he withstands all of it
calm and collected with chaos within
in the dark it is only light he’ll omit
i admire all that he is and more
i love my dear more than ever before
my first attempt at a sonnet
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