"acomplished" poems - Hello Poetry

Isn't it weird how one bad comment can overcome several good comments? Isn't it weird that it's easier to feel bad about yourself than feeling good about yourself? Isn't it weird how evil can be acomplished faster than the good? Isnt it weird that we live in such an intricate world, where the negativity always outcomes the positivity, because no good is left, when the bad often lets you down. Alike charges repel, opposite charges attract. This was our philosophy in dealing with the atoms in our world. But what about our world? How come all the positivity and the negativity in the world in all of their different forms, , as they cancel each other, get the world cancelled along?

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May 16, 2014

May 16, 2014 at 4:46 AM UTC

deemz

A cancelled world.

Isn't it weird how one bad comment can overcome several good comments? Isn't it weird that it's easier to feel bad about yourself than feeling good about yourself? Isn't it weird how evil can be acomplished faster than the good? Isnt it weird that we live in such an intricate world, where the negativity always outcomes the positivity, because no good is left, when the bad often lets you down. Alike charges repel, opposite charges attract. This was our philosophy in dealing with the atoms in our world. But what about our world? How come all the positivity and the negativity in the world in all of their different forms, , as they cancel each other, get the world cancelled along?

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Never ending netflix Are you still watching? Yes. I am always watching Binging: rapid consumption The sin of a glutton Always feeling guilty afterwards Marathoning: a long journey Requiring stamina and determination When you finish You feel acomplished but half empty As you long for the next race. The continue watching section Is an ever changing battle ground Where titans like Mad Men With its 7 seasons and hour episodes Rise and fall The catalog rotates constantly An exercise in media darwinism Where only the strong remain And the marathon runners Are at the top of the food chain

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Sep 9, 2016

Sep 9, 2016 at 10:46 PM UTC

patrick-mccombs-1

Netflix: media darwinism

Never ending netflix Are you still watching? Yes. I am always watching Binging: rapid consumption The sin of a glutton Always feeling guilty afterwards Marathoning: a long journey Requiring stamina and determination When you finish You feel acomplished but half empty As you long for the next race. The continue watching section Is an ever changing battle ground Where titans like Mad Men With its 7 seasons and hour episodes Rise and fall The catalog rotates constantly An exercise in media darwinism Where only the strong remain And the marathon runners Are at the top of the food chain

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I've always been best at rebellion Secret rebellion my most acomplished I've always been best at standing out And never blending in Somehow fading into the background While sticking out like a nail I've learned to be original There isn't a copy of me anywhere I'm unique And while I don't always love My strange or weird tendencies They make me feel stronger Prouder As though I finally have somthing worth fighting for And I'm not doing it for attention I'm doing it all because it is who I am Strange as it seems I like being me And even though it gets lonely sometimes Every once in a while I come across someone that Has pride and originality Someone that doesn't care And who's weirdness Matches mine And then I laugh Because I know not everyone Has become a follower.

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Apr 1, 2013

Apr 1, 2013 at 2:02 PM UTC

oddhonesty

Pride Babble

I've always been best at rebellion Secret rebellion my most acomplished I've always been best at standing out And never blending in Somehow fading into the background While sticking out like a nail I've learned to be original There isn't a copy of me anywhere I'm unique And while I don't always love My strange or weird tendencies They make me feel stronger Prouder As though I finally have somthing worth fighting for And I'm not doing it for attention I'm doing it all because it is who I am Strange as it seems I like being me And even though it gets lonely sometimes Every once in a while I come across someone that Has pride and originality Someone that doesn't care And who's weirdness Matches mine And then I laugh Because I know not everyone Has become a follower.

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i can not force myself to complete a task I would prefer not to do I do not have the force to succum the painful vibes that you give off i cant force myself to accomplish something that would not better me Just like how you you can not mold something into my mind that has no need to be there you can not create half witted, unintellegent, simple minded, rules on how to survive in this world You can not create a student. A student is created when there heart, and mind, and soul, and body, and every ***** in them is commited to something. You can not forge a person into you. We are our own people. And when i do make it in this world YOU will not be granted permession to take credit for what I have acomplished.

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Apr 14, 2014

Apr 14, 2014 at 2:03 PM UTC

turningpaiges

Force

i can not force myself to complete a task I would prefer not to do I do not have the force to succum the painful vibes that you give off i cant force myself to accomplish something that would not better me Just like how you you can not mold something into my mind that has no need to be there you can not create half witted, unintellegent, simple minded, rules on how to survive in this world You can not create a student. A student is created when there heart, and mind, and soul, and body, and every ***** in them is commited to something. You can not forge a person into you. We are our own people. And when i do make it in this world YOU will not be granted permession to take credit for what I have acomplished.

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