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David Hall Sep 2014
do you think
there is a chance
I could turn this all around

if I choose
to stand up now
can I lift up off the ground

in my life
have often made
a string of stupid choices

choices made
despite the cries
of many helpful voices

I believe
maybe a day
will come when least expected

where I might
forgive myself
not feel so **** rejected
So there are tons of poems that go up tagged 10w 15w 20w.  I decided to try something slightly more difficult.  Each stanza has 3 syllables, 4 syllables and then 7 syllables.  I issue a poetical challenge.
David Hall Aug 2014
Doesn't matter if you hear it, only that it's said.
David Hall Aug 2014
everyone has one true love
well maybe two or three
but you finally found a true love
and I’m glad it wasn't me
This isn't nearly as mean as it sounds.  I just recently saw someone I used to date and she was happy with her husband and their kid and I knew that I would never have been able to make her that happy.
David Hall Aug 2014
Reading someone else’s poetry
is like trying a weird side dish at a party.

It’s that strange dip that your friend made
and they just keep begging you to try it.
When you finally give in and you take a bite,
one of two things is always bound to happen.

It’s amazing, you love it,
you eat the whole bowl.
You shower them with compliments
and ask them for the recipe

or

It’s bland and it’s dry
can’t even finish your first bite.
You muster up your best fake smile
and squeak out, “This is great”.

It’s imperative that you keep in mind
No matter if it’s good or bad
if it rocked your world or burned your tongue
you will probably only taste this once.
  Aug 2014 David Hall
Jack
~

Who knew that one voice,
could launch one thousand heartbeats
David Hall Aug 2014
a warm embrace, your smiling face
butterflies with your every touch
the thought had never crossed my mind
that I could ever want so much

I sit here now with only my dream
a dream of you on a peaceful night
a warm breeze brushing your soft brown hair
it tickling my face as I’m holding you tight

reality takes a darker hue
the longer and farther
I get from you

a painful reality
when I let myself wake
I realize the truth
and let my heart break
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