"victorians" poems
I feel as if my head is sliding off my neck like ice cream melting down the cone. I am a witch melting, shrinking smaller as my spine stacks horizontally like shiplap. My body has been refurbished into a pinball machine. Something so tiny as a silver ball destroys so much. It bullets through my body, shooting off like Cuban missiles. I feel the turmoil and chaos seeping through the gutters of this old home of bones. It's like spilled oil sludging through my blood vessels or rats scattering through a sewer, nibbling and feasting away on these muscles of mine until they are frayed like gnawed-on cable wires. At odd hours of the night when time is propelled by the safe travels of breath (that weave in and out like Victorians at a ball) from sleepy children who have yet been touched by monsters or nymphs, whereas each of my breaths steer Odysseus's weather-beaten boat through ten years of treachery. My heavy, melting head slowly sloping like clay off a bust makes its home on my dingy pillow as I lay on a prison bed with cold shackles around my ankles that make my bones shatter into a mosaic as if that could shrink my ankles so I can slip out. I feel like a chained hawk at these hours of the night when I just want to fly until I screech to a halt and flail over the cliff that waterfalls into the ends of the universe. I'd be reluctant at first, perhaps, but what other escape does one have other than to make an autopsist's Y-incision on one's body, then slip out like a hermit crab freeing himself from his heavy shell? Embarking onto a new dimension where there's hope for a radical swap of atoms that don't shape a crippled, deteriorating human is the only choice when you want to live a life other than what you were cursed with. May we then find peace and live as naked souls bearing no heavy shells.
Jul 7, 2017
Jul 7, 2017 at 4:53 AM UTC
*Sonnet is love
sonnet is rhyme'
metaphorical pattern dove
so much sublime....
Popular with poets new
the Elizabethans too
their mistresses so few
used it to woo.....
John Donne, his life
catching the spirit of the Jacobean age
his need to express his love for his wife,
Anne, backstage......
Expression of religious passion
and simply reflections of death
The Victorians fashion
and so many more breath.....
Elizabeth Barrett Browning,
the Rossettis, so blue
and George Meredith were around
were so new.....
American poets noted
Longfellow, expounded
E. A. Robinson, devoted
Elinor Wylie, and Edna St. Vincent Millay, astounded....
Sonnets make us sing
makes us laugh
cry with saving grace brings
universal themes of love mon behalf.....
Keep writing those sonnets
all you wonderful and many more
poets, keep wearing your bonnets
that we all adore...*
Debbie
Jun 18, 2015
Jun 18, 2015 at 1:26 PM UTC
(descent)
Hindered by progress, or the idea of progress:
evolution-in-waiting bellows me to hide,
tattering becomes ruination.
Animism creeps,
not-yet hands pushing at dim velvet.
Peeping one-eyed through the past
where had borne such potent promise
immutability lain intact
flumped into snowy thickness
and thrown hard against Georgian glass.
Here comes the stealth of unillumination
thankfully blanketing
they were tied at the hips
and neck,
then wrapped as old mirrors.
That door went nowhere
it always does
those Victorians, forever meddling,
will folly themselves into any trouble.
(resurrection)
You haven’t changed one bit!
I say to myself,
showing you their brand new niceness
***** as copper pans.
Go on, spit in my fire
the hiss is the thing that’s real.
May 19, 2017
May 19, 2017 at 3:46 AM UTC
Sonnet is love
sonnet is rhyme'
metaphorical pattern
so much sublime
Popular with poets
the Elizabethans too
used it to woo
their mistresses so few
John Donne,
catching the spirit of the Jacobean age
his need to express his love for his wife,
Anne
Expression of religious passion
and simply reflections of death
The Victorians
and so many more
Elizabeth Barrett Browning,
the Rossettis,
and George Meredith
were so new
American poets noted
Longfellow,
E. A. Robinson,
Elinor Wylie, and Edna St. Vincent Millay.
Sonnets make us sing
makes us laugh
cry with saving grace
universal themes of love ....
Keep writing those sonnets
all you wonderful
poets
that we all adore...
As Rupal says,
Wordsworth too..
Debbie Brooks- 2014
Sep 29, 2014
Sep 29, 2014 at 1:12 AM UTC
i. i don’t think i ever expected to live quite this long.
the bus has always been coming
and i have always been braced for impact.
i have never thought that another 80+ years were
automatically allotted to me,
life is too much loss and uncertainty.
i am 17 and i feel tired and oddly lucky.
ii. i’ve heard life is inherently more exciting
when you think of things in terms of “i get to…” rather than “i have to…”
i’m trying to apply it to my life.
i get to wake up tomorrow. i get to go to school, to have a routine.
i get to keep going. i get to live.
iii. some people are born content and some people are born itching --
you were born with ******* poison ivy.
dying to jet set the midwest, always swore
you were gonna leave this town before it burnt you to the ground.
a born nomad who’d never even seen the ocean.
i watched you disappear out the rear view window,
you’ve never left this town and i’d hate for the world
to let you down.
iv. i think that part of me is scared to leave home
because i know that you can always leave but you can’t always go back.
these are the things they don’t tell us growing up;
the way that places are just places
and the air around them can shift into something
that you no longer recognize.
it’s the feeling when you’ve been away for too long
and you come home to find it changed.
it’s the feeling when you want to go home
even when you’re there.
v. i heard you either write to remember or to be remembered.
i dream of crashes and my legacy of stained ink
confined to 15 gigabytes and 12 point font.
there’s thousands of other poets
with shaking hands, bright eyes, loud mouths.
it would be so easy to forget me when i’m gone.
i don’t know how much i mind it.
we are fleeting like fireflies and smoke signals and first kisses.
i still think you burn the brightest.
vi. it’s 10:32 somewhere over the ocean
and i miss you i miss you i miss you.
i’ve heard that victorians believed that if you wrote a poem in a airplane
that it stayed there, suspended in the sky.
your eulogy is hanging somewhere over the atlantic,
pinned up in the stars. waiting.
vii. i held your hand on the take off
until all that was underneath our feet were clouds.
May 9, 2016
May 9, 2016 at 1:46 PM UTC
If given some lycanthropy
perhaps I might choose
to chase horses
and Victorians beneath the moon.
Perhaps it would not seem so strange,
the monthly change
and tide of blood.
Perhaps as a were I might
learn something of grace.
The night is big
and so are shadows.
In the brief time
between teeth and skin
might I find some other
kin or love than life?
When I was eight I found an arrowhead
in a creek bed, chipped
from black obsidian,
perfect and out of place
amongst the granite sand.
I held it in my hand
and knew what death was.
Death is like obsidian,
cold and sharp and
liable to shatter.
She was like obsidian,
smooth and grey
and eyes like chipped edges.
I have since lost the arrowhead.
But if I hadn’t,
I would throw it back.
The rain is leaking onto my windowsill
leaving a stain. Until
my hair grows out, it will rain
and rain and rain and rain.
Then the mice can sail
in tiny ships, round and round,
and discover new continents.
Nov 17, 2010
Nov 17, 2010 at 6:51 PM UTC
The knives have been
Winning
& they're cutting up
Against
Our toes now
But we got ourselves in
This embrace
& there aren't keys
To those cuffs
Yet, honey
But we've just got to
Keep waiting
Until
They fall from our
Weary sky
You were known in
The books
As the one who dreamed
Of much greener grass
& I was more
Inclined
To the Victorians
Than I was to the taste
Of tea.
But oh, did we wage
Our wars in perfect
Rhythm to our
Untamed hearts?
Or we were just shimmering
Light in the bits of cutlery
They found shining
At the bottom
Of the sea?
Nov 27, 2011
Nov 27, 2011 at 5:46 PM UTC
When He asks, quietly, if I still think of You
even when I’m here,
I say
"always."
why?
because snow falls just as softly here as it
did
during our first kiss,
when it melted on your flushed
cheeks
in the mountain light of our childhood.
I think of your face as it was,
like the neighbor’s cornfield,
fogged but bright through the windows of your car
as you raced me home in the pastoral dawn
to beat my parents' alarm clock.
now when I look at you,
I see the ruins of the storm:
the once-grand Victorians of our town,
sunken and foul,
the spray painted x’s, signaling “condemned,”
barely masked by the slush.
this new color in the landscape of your countenance,
is
a translucent grey
—
I think it is called indifference.
They told us
“distance extinguishes small flames,
and fuels great fires.”
my breath burns cold and sharp,
like the icicles that hung outside your mother’s store,
when You told me that it was easy to hurt me,
and You didn’t know why.
those words froze me solid
like citrus trees killed in a late frost.
He says that He still see the pinkness in my own cheeks,
when I talk of You.
I sigh
and say that I will try harder
to stop loving You,
but
the chairlift rocks and shifts the spears in my chest and
I wince,
because I know I will for all my life.
May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 3:20 PM UTC
Arrived late to the early bird special for the heavens of my mind
I'm a hard boiled egg in a soft shell crab waiting to be swallowed by a ***** swamp filled with ugly crocodiles in the same vein at the same time
Looking for a broader spectrum of potential unknowing whispers
whispered a sweet something about a whole lot of maybes in my ear lobe.
Caterpillars sing songs to September
slowly crawling back in time encouraging a butterfly of memories
where two left winged hearts collided making supper with our doubts
about unconcious recollections where we are mapping out the signs of new breakfast and bedrooms.
Investigate the vacancies of hearts you wish to keep with an open ended pitch of the other ones who seek you out.
Heart's for rent here
Who's the last tenant that moved out? Blur kaleidoscope of old addresses with similar layouts
Because you're looking for French bathtubs in old Victorians
And with the right selling line
It's just a vintage room lined with dusty curtains and a sunroof with penetrated ceilings
A character of wills you say,
blueprint of rented feelings.
Stir a cocktail of shock waves
from stone cold realizations
while i mull steadily on my unsure
recollection of what you meant when you said I'm the best thing
you've found in a long time.
But that's just a new line
you've heard wiser men say
So you say it without hesitation and
make earlier reservations.
God, this could take an hour
Or a second if your patient
Adapt to different payments
Unusual affective statements
Encase it in sarcastic shell
crack it by the cases
Sew it at the seams make sure
I seem real sure of your supposed
intentions.
Oct 10, 2014
Oct 10, 2014 at 7:43 PM UTC
Victorians old aged queen hast come to greet me
Come to treat me to extraterrestrial highs
Where her tongues forensic
With mine love we shalt dine!!!
So fine are thy heavied lids
Thy skin painted on spanishly clear
Heaven draws near
To thy angelic trim!!!
Make me feel five again lover!!!
Wherein I haveth no more care nor worry
Just romance novel stories
To maketh me anew!!
Thou missing puzzle
Thou clue I've sought so long
Thou fit's me perfectly friend
Thy smell to be the Rosie's
Mine own to be in stench!!!
Paralyze me again
Thine eyes daily do I seek
Wherein nothing goes bleaque
Between ourn child laughs and words!!!
I'm alive once again
After so long a sleep
The queens kiss
Has once again awoken me
To die for love!!!!
To love for years
For many weeks!!!!
Jun 9, 2015
Jun 9, 2015 at 3:54 PM UTC
I'm fighting Victorians, Edwardians thinking they're Georgians.
Does Cameron think he's a battlestar?
He may shoot from the lips but does he take things too far?
and where are we in all this?
The kiss me quick, vote for me slick brigade come
on a hunting raid and
bang the **** out of my door.
Whatya knocking me up from my bed for?
Votes just confuse me and you lot just
use me.
I'm still fighting, streetwise, keeping tight in
the clinch
at a pinch I could compromise, might let
them see the light that shines but
when I open my eyes
I think
Nah,
I'll not bother.
Feb 7, 2015
Feb 7, 2015 at 3:54 PM UTC
Victorians old age queen,
Where art thou to come and greet me?
To extrarestrial high!!!
Where her tounges forensic,
With me thy love we shall dine!!!!!
Soo fine are your heavied lids!!!
Your skin painted on so fluorescent,
Heaven draweth near to your angelic trim!!
Make me feel child once again lover where I have no more cares of worries,
Just romances novel stories to make me anew!!
Thine missing puzzle,
Thine clue I've sought so long....
You fit Soo neatly to me mine friend,
Your smell to be thine gardenias,
Mine own to be its end....
Parylize me extend!!!
Thine eyes do I daily seek,
Where nothing goes weak between our child laugh and words...
To be alive once again Soo long after sleep!!
Thy queens kiss to abrupt me to die for ones approbation,
To predilection for years,
For weeks!!!!
May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 4:12 PM UTC
We love you cos' you are Victorians,
Here we are all Melburnians,
Here there are genres of folks,
Listen up, let's have a joke,
One type of plebs here goes to church,
Or plebs go fishing, to catch some perch,
Some are drinkers and go to the pubs,
Some are football tragics, hubbub!
Then there's the anti-football league,
Not participating non-vigorously,
Then some folk go to the library,
Or some can belong to the Dr. Who Society,
Or they can be a combination of any of the above,
It's all a norm in olde Melbourne town we love!
Apr 8, 2017
Apr 8, 2017 at 3:41 PM UTC
But do I really see them when I'm traveling on the central line?
do I really take the time to take a look?
The window cleaner logo man
reads a book and jammed up next to him is a lady looking very grim,
she's watching me watching him and he's unaware,
but probably in that zone cleaning windows and feeling right at home.
Lots of buns as well
Victorians must have
saved a fortune on hair gel.
Pearl earrings is not a singer
it's what young girl is
wearing
and not an oyster in sight.
People
there's such a large variety
and I only see what I
want to see
if only I could look a
little deeper.
Jarndyce gets off at
Chancery lane
his case comes up after
the crown
versus Abel or is it Cain?
I'm wandering in the inns
but it's time to get out.
Morning Holbein
or it might be
Holborn
I'm just
mooving on.
Jun 28, 2018
Jun 28, 2018 at 1:21 AM UTC