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"loonie" poems
There are several ways to earn that loonie, Or even that toonie, Just got to look for the right opportunity, And it is never easy, But that is the harsh reality. I know that sounds heavy, But keep listening to me. I have a drive that pulsates within me, And it wants to set a vibe around me, You see, I want to make the life, So I can spend it with a wife, And buy her the right ring, And pay my parents back their earnings, So keep watching me, Because I am going to make sure, That barrier will shatter, Into forgotten matter.
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Jul 31, 2014
Jul 31, 2014 at 8:25 AM UTC
Ambition
The winter cold freezes his bony hands as he counts mere pennies, While delicious scents waft his way from the grand boulangerie. Filling the air with chocolate, lemon and even Morello cherries, How he wish he could try some too, especially the black forest brownie. He shrugs the dirt off his coat and enters hesitantly, Concerned about his drab attire, he makes his way to the counter slowly. To his surprise, the lady gives a warm smile and greets him courteously, He loosens his clutched palms and drops the few pennies. "What would you like?" asks the lady as though she sees him daily, "A black forest please" he mutters as he jumps with joy internally. She hands him his order and adds an extra smoothie, Yet all he really paid was two dollars and a broken loonie.
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Sep 20, 2020
Sep 20, 2020 at 12:49 PM UTC
Complimentary Cake
foul bug grab it and tug you're a flyin' tooth hockin' loogies Disregard that! I'm a loonie! Meow-cat, can't take it and snap! goes my brain like crack! goes the coffee mug falling from the counter and swoosh! goes the butterfly flapping it's wings... screech! see the blossoming magnolias... and we're all bubbling up from the inside out! we're left downright sideways! looking for the sun to come out... silver lining - fluffy cloud, blue sky fall, hop skip and jump! to high heaven: falling... backwards, in a grand attempt to leap! into a pool of faith from the highest cliff... and when the tables are turned... you are scratches in the vinyl! skip, skip, skip to my loop -loop -looping thought patterns... Meow meow meow
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Sep 14, 2015
Sep 14, 2015 at 12:35 AM UTC
!loop
to finito my infinito; a pile of unwrit scripts, titles, single para, all mine un~completed children awaiting to be ejected and rejected by you dears, with spit+blood+sea salted tears, they not understanding why it has taken so long to exit the twisty. serpentine birth canal thru which they were conceived, then, deceived! by a promise sworn to be given initiating exposure to our atmosphere once upon a time there only forty six imps and seedlings, now *** the poem~notions come so fast that there are more than 76 loonie~loosies, poetic scraps and scrapes & scrips, waiting for a match, a ******* in of the air that requires stating: **Blessed is the Lird, who inserted crazy potions within in my eyes to save my downtrodden soul. And projectile re-iease them To your dangerous selves,** Aman.
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Jul 12, 2025
Jul 12, 2025 at 1:53 PM UTC
A Doula’s Code: Such is life!
Short rap story Lil loonie was a loser school abuser at home told he's was no more than manure Always down on frowned on Hound on! People he's a supposed love are Far being bigons Stuck between two Mother with issues Dead brother picture hanngin in the window. Constant reticule only peace Was dream of revenue Own a avenue be a block owner like the corner toker smokers shadows crews Jammin to the bad words they lingo , The way lean tho , havin honnies chasin at they feet too Seems so blissful I want it! Soo lil Lonnie became a grown up, Started selling grass up in the school bus, Ayo man. Lonnie gone nuts ! Starting fights skippin class grabbing *** up in the hallway , Stealing cash, And ****** in the hallway, Jumpin other kids in the stall way He's gone gray, He finally dropped out , linked up with the corners, made a connection now he's transporting product , Constantly eyes shut , to the fact that he blind but makin quap to support his mom and dads **** So they didn't question his surprised bust , Did 20 rough , came home to a dead conscious mutt , and Cocain addicted **** , Moms up in hospital, dad has lost his mind , nuts. A remarried krutch Brain is crust , powdered dust loonie. Lil Lonnie lost a huge portion of life to a past hobby, trying to good now, takin flowers to the lobby. Only to find he's heading to mortuary section , mom didn't make it past the first chemo injection.
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Sep 28, 2016
Sep 28, 2016 at 2:59 PM UTC
No title yet. (Work in progress)
We took the river boat all the way up the Rio ***** to find the monkey rehab, some said it was a loonie bin for problem simians. And you, rebellious you, always breaking protocol, carried your wares with you instead. Did you not realize the howlers break the rules too? Good God, it was the craziest scene. Two wild ravenous fanged-monkeys ripping threw your stuff like a whirlwind spun out of control. But I bet, you didn't want that Nikon anyways?! I wished I'd taken a picture. Priceless.
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Sep 6, 2014
Sep 6, 2014 at 5:48 AM UTC
Don't Break The Rules When You Visit A Monkey Loonie Bin
Who the **** am I? Why am I living a lie? Who else can I run to and trust While the intentions unjust? Who the **** are you? Are you just another person I can sue? Why are you speaking to me When all I want from you is money? Who the **** are they? They'll put me in a loonie bin... Who else can I trust and turn to When everyone is stabbing me with pins
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Sep 8, 2011
Sep 8, 2011 at 11:54 AM UTC
Life
My efforts are strong and faithful. I await for my spotlight. To shine upon me and end the skeptic's rant. On how "I cannot do everything" and often ignore my "delightful" Ways to entertain and to brighten "their ways out of the darkness of failure" to the bright light of success'  care?!" What is the key to open up a door to be an equal part of "their life?" Instead of a loner in a "non-conformer's" quiet realm? While Working His Tools, from his inventive ideas... as so too, the name  and his works...... Made into babbling loonie created poppycock.. The "Normal's" tagged just "humor"  of the  likes  of  Leonardo Da-vinchi As I bang my creations, part by part, together to a miracle.... as this "hero of mine" inspires me through  my dark and present unseen "creativity." Must it always be an art form as defined by those "Eccentric Critiques" so well known for what is to be, "Amazing?!" Wasn't it my other hero, "Andy Warhol," who placed Soda Cans in piles to reveal his defining vision of our beloved "Marylin Monroe?!" Yes!!! It wasn't until  "out of the ashes of the end of his existence" that finally defined him the right as a new "form" of "art" that has now,justly been defined, as a "Must-show?!" My Uniqueness is a way of life. I'm no "Copy-Cat." Inside my work shop, don't I need a view or a peer from "someone?!" To inwardly show to the world... a glass of wine,  "  a toast to my life's creations," to be brought to the surface from this "lake" of "Creators?!" I, as the newer and redefining "special recipe art vat?!" "YES!" Producing a bold and new flavor to the palates of the taste of the "Art's Highest." I should think of  my Creative "Galleries" to be "worthy of a footstep and a light shine.." on my "Newest of the Unique Human Artistic Existence?!" A Toast to that Up-Coming Future! As my other inspirational heroes once proclaimed, in his artistic words, "To Be...." "Or not to be...That is The Question!" As I gaze at his,and  also  his other brethren  of an "almost the never was,"  art spirit's "legends.... " their after-life speaks to me of spirited and powerfully lit advice  and placement.... My future and hard work... "Staying Rebellious and Unique" I shall have guaranteed my legend's entry... Into the galleries of "a newer history..." Their  advice I truly live by -" I am  not only what I Chose to be..." "I choose to be 'me,' 'truly','creatively, 'and 'worthy'  of becoming  the 'truer' and 'more uniquely'  defined 'artistic'  legend Who is simply named  as... "free!"
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Feb 17, 2016
Feb 17, 2016 at 12:06 AM UTC
The Legend Simply Named as Free
My efforts are strong and faithful. I await for my spotlight. To shine upon me and end the skeptic's rant. On how "I cannot do everything" and often ignore my "delightful" Ways to entertain and to brighten "their ways out of the darkness of failure" to the bright light of success'  care?!" What is the key to open up a door to be an equal part of "their life?" Instead of a loner in a "non-conformer's" quiet realm? While Working His Tools, from his inventive ideas... as so too, the name  and his works...... Made into babbling loonie created poppycock.. The "Normal's" tagged just "humor"  of the  likes  of  Leonardo Da-vinchi As I bang my creations, part by part, together to a miracle.... as this "hero of mine" inspires me through  my dark and present unseen "creativity." Must it always be an art form as defined by those "Eccentric Critiques" so well known for what is to be, "Amazing?!" Wasn't it my other hero, "Andy Warhol," who placed Soda Cans in piles to reveal his defining vision of our beloved "Marylin Monroe?!" Yes!!! It wasn't until  "out of the ashes of the end of his existence" that finally defined him the right as a new "form" of "art" that has now,justly been defined, as a "Must-show?!" My Uniqueness is a way of life. I'm no "Copy-Cat." Inside my work shop, don't I need a view or a peer from "someone?!" To inwardly show to the world... a glass of wine,  "  a toast to my life's creations," to be brought to the surface from this "lake" of "Creators?!" I, as the newer and redefining "special recipe art vat?!" "YES!" Producing a bold and new flavor to the palates of the taste of the "Art's Highest." I should think of  my Creative "Galleries" to be "worthy of a footstep and a light shine.." on my "Newest of the Unique Human Artistic Existence?!" A Toast to that Up-Coming Future! As my other inspirational heroes once proclaimed, in his artistic words, "To Be...." "Or not to be...That is The Question!" As I gaze at his,and  also  his other brethren  of an "almost the never was,"  art spirit's "legends.... " their after-life speaks to me of spirited and powerfully lit advice  and placement.... My future and hard work... "Staying Rebellious and Unique" I shall have guaranteed my legend's entry... Into the galleries of "a newer history..." Their  advice I truly live by -" I am  not only what I Chose to be..." "I choose to be 'me,' 'truly','creatively, 'and 'worthy'  of becoming  the 'truer' and 'more uniquely'  defined 'artistic'  legend Who is simply named  as... "free!"
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Lift your head and stare at the heavens. Open those eyes before the means justifies the end. Orchestrate your words like theres no tomorrow. New light will come you wont stay in sorrow. Imprint in others lives and you will understand it. Each minute that you will breathe will be worth it.
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Sep 14, 2017
Sep 14, 2017 at 6:06 PM UTC
LOONIE
Man oh man, it’s been too long Since I heard your piano songs I used to hate them everyday I’d rip my hair out when you’d play Each time i’d take a bit to read Your notes would play, my ears would bleed They’d send me right around the bend To loonie bins and back again But man I miss your stupid songs Though they’d have any crowd soon gone To hear them once again someday I’d sure cut off my arm n’leg I never got much time to sleep While hearing your piano screech Each time I’d try to take a nap You’d give those notes a violent smack! But man, I miss your slammin’ hands Though no one’s ears were quite a fan If you could play for me once more My smile’d reach right to my core Each time I’d ask for “quiet, please!” You’d play like cats dancing on keys Those horrid notes would never stop Like nails scraped down on board for chalk But man, I miss those melodies Though they’d have made a deaf man flee If you could spare just one more tune Your notes would fill this sorry room Man oh man, it’s been so long Since I last heard you play a song I used to beg your notes would go But now I hate this hollow home I hope you play still in the clouds And make birds from blue skies fall out Go, keep on gifting garish tunes I know you brought them to your tomb
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Jun 20, 2025
Jun 20, 2025 at 11:39 AM UTC
Those **** piano songs