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CJ Sutherland Oct 2024
Follow.        Your
Head
When.        .     you
Pray

Follow       Your
Heart
It              knows
what.    to
say

Follow          your
dreams
They                       know
the                                    Way

Inspired song

1)Follow me
by John Denver
1970 greatest hits album
(This song makes me cry every time)
I’m working on subliminal messaging.
Follow your
head.
It’s a circle.

The middle part
Follow your
heart
It’s in the shape of a
heart

Follow your
dreams
They have legs
to take you there

All in all, it’s a person
Me
  Oct 2024 CJ Sutherland
Pax
Art
Poetry is a hard life. Writing is a hard life. Art, in any way, shape or form is a hard life. But we do it because we feel it in our souls. We might not necessarily be good at it. It might not be able to earn us a living, and all the words in our heart may threaten to tear us apart, or to overflow and drown the world. It may seem like too much of a burden, to have the power of the pen, to feel like you're drifting out on an ocean of emotions that flicker so quickly past you don't have time to grasp it and put it on paper, thoughts and feelings too beautiful to ever be captured by words. And so many times we want to walk away, to stop, to give up. But I think what makes it worth it isn't the result. It doesn't matter what happens in the end. Whether the words are clumsy or not. Whether anybody publishes it or not. Whether or not anyone else approves, even. It doesn't matter in the end. What matters is the journey. And honestly, for people like us? The journey itself is enough.
This was a gift, a review to my poem in Writerscafe by Rose of Gondor. I share it here for inspiration, for encoragement, and for my learning. This was one of those reviews i cherished the most, there were many in WC but this is one of them. I hope everyone can relate. Even me when i felt like not writing anything and be insecure on my poems, I remember this one and be okay with my journey.
you can read the whole piece of my poem this review is inspire from:
Link: https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/willyampax/1294269/
  Oct 2024 CJ Sutherland
KarmaPolice
You took a sip of my pain,
And mocked your fellow man.
Take the whole bottle-
Let's see if your
Still standing

Man

By Darren Wall ©
Being bold,  
  Not as easy,
    When old.
          Yet!
Best, stories
   often unfold,
     when told.
CJ Sutherland Oct 2024
All men
Are created
Equal

They
Are equal
In
arrogance

They
Are equal
In
Ignorance

They
are equal
in
stubbornness

They
are equal
in
Love

You know
You found
“ The One”

When you
Want Him
Just the way
He is

Inspired songs;
1) A Poor Man’s Roses, or (a rich man gold)
Patsy Cline 1956

2) They Long to be Close to You
The Carpenter1970

3) Silly, Love,Song
by Paul McCartney 1976
The irony of the oxymoron
  Oct 2024 CJ Sutherland
Khoisan
We CAN talk the talk
and walk the walk
side by side
across the vastness
of water
on Earth
reaching out
holding hands
it's really
like walking on water
above supercool sand
CAN you see it now
Do you understand.
#global villagers of peace not war.
CJ Sutherland Oct 2024
We write for Posterity
In unique forms clarity
Write before thoughts gone
Who we are not what we do
Poems From within Soul breaks through


Tanka
Form of Haiku
Five lines 31 syllables
5-7-5-7-7

Inspired song
The snare of prosperity lyric video, YouTube
By prosperity music
BLT Webster’s Word of the Day challenge
10-3- 24 posterity
A formal word refers to all future generations of people a recorded event was preserved for prosperity

Foot note
We paint with words in the cobwebs of  our mind . A scrap of paper, the back of a receipt, the palm of your hand. When the flow where is Russia’s for you have to capture it. It’s what we do know who we are some say that poet is an every fabric of your being. It’s the way we are seen
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