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Maggie Emmett Nov 2014

                                                    War
        ­                                         is good
                                            for business
                                       both big and small
                        Profits will rise and make inflation fall
                        But soldiers, sailors, airmen, warriors all
                                        must heed the call
                                             face fighting
                                                  even
         ­                                        Death
Revived poems to honour Musarrat Bte Salam and her use of this highly unusual form
‘War’ won equal first prize in the Tetractys section
It was first published in Yellow Moon Issue 17, Winter 2005; p. 47.
Dark n Beautiful Aug 2015
****
scars all
the victims
sweet revenge
attacker castrated: open wound bleeds
Tetractys


Tetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1.

Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1

Triple Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10

and so on.

"Euclid, the mathematician of classical times, considered the number series 1, 2, 3, 4 to have mystical significance because its sum is 10, so he dignified it with a name of its own - Tetractys. The tetractys could be Britain's answer to the haiku. Its challenge is to express a complete thought, profound or comic, witty or wise, within the narrow compass of twenty syllables." - Ray Stebbing

Example #1:
freedom

free
from you
your ego
your blaming me
i am a free spirit who has no past
Butch Decatoria May 2016
Tour
De force
of nature
Lady songstress
How all her babies go "Gaga" for more!

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Tour / De Force / of nature / Lady songstress / How all her babies go "Gaga" for more!
Tetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1.
pistachio Nov 2019
Moon
smiles
Though the sky
Gets dark and sad
Becomes more resplendent,
Luster, an optimistic satellite
Though its alone in the dim firmament
Its sheen does not waver
Gives a wider,
Brighter,
Beam
pistachio Apr 2019
Dusts
Wistful
Dry powder
Of lost moments
Specks of melancholy and heartaches
Dan Hess Aug 2019
Eyes
Mindless
Indicate
A source of light
Yet with strength of mind there is so much more
So much that you can find in metaphor
Spies, all-knowing
Gates to souls
Danger
Dark
Hope Latoza Jul 2020
[a sextuple tetractys]


i
can't seem
to forget
the pain you did
sculpt on my soul–you never used chisel.

the thing you used to carve in me are the
words you never
knew i longed
much to
hear.

the
words i
am aware
that you wanted
to tell, but you were never able to.

i heard lullabies that placed me to sleep.
music to my
ears–they were.
they will
be.

those
were what
your heart said,
"goodbye, my love."
finally, you have let me go, somehow.

somehow–because you left marks, like beggar,
you plead to me
to never
forget
you.

— The End —