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Kerdell Jul 10
As the air flowed through the room, emotions filled each crevice, the color stained walls seemed gray, shadows of sorrow grew where the lights died, the distinct and loud sound of her inner drums drowned the silence which was slowly creeping out.
This was the moment;
Her pain was felt.
Kerdell Mar 26
“ nothing that last forever is real, real always grows sick, withers and die some day”
Kerdell Apr 2017
Coloured vibe, caring heart, thoughtful mind, a blissful smile,
I know a girl who's gold inside.
Bright eyes, puffy hair, angelic voice like Rihanna's peer.
I know a girl who's gold inside.
Aries child, her soul is pure, a beautiful face you'd want no more.
I know a girl who's gold inside.
Judged by the cover on many occasions, read her pages, now give a standing ovation.
I know a girl who's gold inside.
She's a wonder of this world i hope she see's that, such an admirable flower which blossom's where the streets crack.
I know a girl who's made of gold.
I'd never thought someone could be like this, you know that perfect dream? that premeditated wish?
I know a girl who gold is like, to the darkest of hope she brings to it. Light!
Wrote this for a friend as a birthday treat. still needs some work though.
Kerdell Mar 2017
I wanna live like forever, not thinking that i'll die someday.
Kerdell Jul 2016
Just like the candle, my light die sometimes.
Constructive criticism welcomed.
Kerdell Jan 2016
I like being alone, in a room full of thoughts
Sitting in silence daydreaming of all soughts.
In MY subconscious my life is like clay
Villain by night, Hero by day
You may think it's boring, but this is fun to me
Set your mind free and know boring is the thing to be.
Kerdell Jan 2016
Your mask fits well. Almost seamless, hiding the cracks that you thought made you seem-less in his eyes. The critique of a million voice carried no tongue , all but one. One with a voice so agonising , so torturous so raw but tolerable- under the mask. You whisper your pain in the winds while drying your tears in the silk of the morning sun.
It's only a rough cut..should have the final within a few days or more...you're honest critique is welcomed :)
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