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Moon & Rain

A boy gazes at the moon.
Suddenly, he imagines her 
the way she’d step onto the terrace,
Letting her hair fall through her fingers

As the memory drifts,
he recalls how he once saw her as the moon.
Likewise,
she saw him as the rain.

Though he was life 
soft, cleansing, gentle 
she called him bad weather,
and brought an umbrella.

He/rain could fall on everything:
rooftops, rivers, roses in bloom 
but never on her.
(Even though she stood on the rooftop to begin with.)

Rain was never meant
to touch the moon.
*She was never his to begin with
Just feel it
"Thou, I can't tell what I need,
Yet in thy heart, it's already known.
I will whisper, I will resist—
Be my sapphire, I, your metal.
Molded to hold, forged to protect,
For one to be yours,
I am black—
Ever beneath you, unseen but near."
This peice is very vague and deep! Need summary? Here it is
The Poem Explores Longing, Silent Sacrifice, and Emotional Detachment in Modern Relationships.

1. An Emotionless World & Unspoken Longing

The poem highlights the contrast between past depth and modern detachment. "Thou" evokes an era of deeper emotions, while "can't" confirms the present, where people hesitate to express feelings. The speaker longs for love, attention, or care, yet cannot voice it. The beloved already knows this but chooses to ignore it, showing how emotional connections today often lack sincerity.

2. The Ring Metaphor: Love as Silent Support

The speaker compares love to a ring—where sapphire and metal exist together. The beloved is the shining sapphire, rare and precious, while the speaker is the metal, molded to hold and protect it. The metal bends, shapes, and sacrifices its form only to uplift the gemstone, symbolizing selfless devotion and silent endurance.

3. "I Am Black": The Pain of Being Unseen

The phrase "I am black" carries deep meaning. In a ring, the metal beneath the gemstone remains hidden, unseen, and unappreciated, yet it is the foundation that holds everything together. The speaker embraces this role, willing to stay in the shadows, to let their beloved shine brighter. The final line, "Ever beneath you, unseen but near," reinforces this devotion—a love that remains constant, selfless, and unnoticed, existing in darkness so the beloved can glow in the light.
"If we part this time, who knows if we’ll ever meet again—
Maybe in stories that were soon meant to end,
On pages that fate refused to turn.
Like a rose that once blushed in the sun,
Now kissed by the midnight moon—just like my heart,
Still longing for the touch of yesterday."
Written with molten heart

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