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YoungGentleman17 May 2014
NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
LOST CAUSES
THEY DON'T KNOW

NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
LOST CAUSES
THEY DON'T KNOW

NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
What's the since of living
When you never feel right
I have no hope
Falling dreams
I know you wonder why a teen says these kinda things

I always been a child with no confidence in this world
I couldn't even get a city lady
So I started talking to out of town girls
Everysince that moment my cousin and brothers
Have judge me talked about me bad
I might smile in person but in the inside
I'm always sad

Girls in my city used me
Made me feel lonely and like a dummy
So I've developed some issues
Thinking every girl will use me for money

But now I understand that ever lady is not the same
I need a real woman to teach me these girls games
So I'm calling out to all women I really need help

My heart has been broken way to many times
I suffered pain everyday
Wish that special lady came
That way my pain will wash away

Mane I remember there was a time I had a crush
I really liked her more than any other
Everytime she came around I'd blush
But it ruined me when I realized she liked my brother

So what's the since of being good when it leads to no joy
I feel I've been more played than a child's toy
I'd rather die than cry
And no one cares to wonder why

I've lost all hope
With none to find
No way I ll cope
Cause at the end I ll be out my mind
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
they say love makes you happy
but it can also make you sad
you think things going good when there going bad
they say love lasts long
but thats only if the chemistry is strong
love is like a war cause you always gotta fight
through the day and through the night
love can also be blind
thats why you always have to use your mind
Love can be amazing
it can also drive you crazy
love is real
so real you will be willing to ****
love can be fake
don't let that overtake
cause it can cause alot of mistakes
so the only way you'll have the right type
if the person your with says you've changed there life
(by Louis Haynes)
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You know that feeling when music plays in the background
Whipped cream and strawberries on the bed
most people rush through I'd rather take it slow instead
You know that feeling when there's rose petals,
That lead inside the room
We both stand here naked as we wait upon the moon
You know that feeling when it starts
If my tounge starts on your body
Is when you give me most your heart
You know that feeling when you say he's a teaser
well tonight my lady I ll be your pleasure pleaser
You know that feeling when it feels more better
My tounge falls between your legs
The secret that gets you wetter
As time goes by,
I hear the sound of your voice
Your love feels like church,
And I'm dying to rejoice
You know that feeling when I'm deeper
Your nails stratching my back
Your moans grow louder
and your becoming more louder
You know that feeling when your legs come to my shoulder
As we ease on to the wall
Eating until I feel a river fall
You know that feeling when  evertime I get inside
Your something like a goddess when you climb on top and ride
I know you know your riding is the best
The feeling of you riding with my face between your breast
You know that feeling when you lose control
We've went in so many places its like were trying to travel
You know that feeling when your trying to hold stable
I enter from behind as she grips on to the table
No my baby never lacks
The deeper I go in
The harder she throws it back
You know that feeling when you lasting for hours
Our bodies are both wet as she's eaten in the shower
I promise I ll always give this kind of endurance
Your body is in good hands
Your my allstate insurance
Our last position is the 69
But tonight will be 68
Because I wanna make you mines
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
your looks are like a sun
every summer you become hotter
and since i'm attracted to beauty
it won't take much for me to spot her

your eyes are like water
because as i stare into them
it feels as i'm watching currents flow in the sea
so i guess the blue in your eyes has hypnotized me

your looks are like a heaven
one look at you fills me up with joy
it even makes me feel heaven's scent
now that's a feeling i must enjoy

your body's like a grave
cause when fall into it it feels i'm a step closer to death
so as i sink into your waters
my best bet is to hold my breath

your personality is like an broom
just being around you has me swept
your mind is like a treasure chest
that's where all my secrets are kept

all of these things together makes you a goddess
even the girl of my dreams
but either way it goes
these words classify you as a queen
funny thing is this actually shows part of what my dream girl possesses
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
The mind of a poet such beauty and pride
I see my mind as an internet
That holds millions of things inside
I work day by day break swaet after sweat
And i must continue this thought till my goal is met

The mind of a poet sich honor and passion
If poetry had a clothing label I'd rock that fashion
You see our minds are different thats what makes it great
Poets bring love never the hate
And like the words said by preachers "It's not to late"

The mind of a poet What more should i say
You know your a poet if your lines brighten days
Your thoughts run as smooth as soap
You know you have a mind of a poet if you give others hope
Or make a person smile like you opened a bag of lays

The mind of a poet has took over my mind
People's actions has took over my thoughts
Like a person starring into light people are to blind to see
Not only that our words are one of a kind
And the good our poems have brought
But the truth starts with us as a whole not just me
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
My whole life I was the most talked about person there was
I was talked about by people by co workers by friends
I thought one day it would all end
I laugh and smile not to show how I truly feel around people
It not like anybody will care anyways
I was always judged throughout my life In school
And yet they still judge me to look cool
My whole life people told me I'm nothing I'd always be considered lame
So now I've gaven up on t popularity and fame
I feel there's no reason for me to be in this world
I laugh and feel sad as I wath all my cousin and brothers get girls
Nobody understands me not my brothers and even my mother
I guess that's why it shows from others
Nobody understands  my pain my kife my struggles and more
I'm an angel that's fallen that can no longer sore
Nobody understands me only because I'm different
Different by how I act and how I look
I was the kid who had nicknames still today its the same
I still have pain inside
But out of every hurt I felt it never ruined my pride
So that part is good
My Name is Louis Haynes
And I'm misunderstood
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
The color of green
Wanted by all human beings
To have a lot amounts is our biggest dream
Some sell to get it
Some get jops
You can get it by working
But some get it when they rob
Money makes a person feel great
But to much money can turn the realiest person fake
Money is a root of all evil
Money is needed in high levels
Some get money when working with god
But you can also get it while working with the devil
Money is also a life saver
It can get us out struggles thats hard to beat
Money is ***** and money is neat
Money is sour and even sweet
God made money to put us to a test
To see if the  riches would help tbe best
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
A love that's long
a love that lasts
that feels so strong
you can't get pass

A love that impacts us
and makes us who we are today
and even if some have some that passed away
her love remains in there souls everyday

A love that we should value
And never forget as well
her words are like heaven
plus when your down she can tell

she has the words of encouragement
that brings us out even the worst slumps
they even told us where theirs obstacles we must jump

i understand some mothers are good
some mothers are bad
but they always had
a scent or feeling that made us glad

therefore a love we all cherished since our life began
and carried it all the way to where we are today
A love that brings us to joy and spirit
and wash away our sins
Makes me feel a mothers love will never end
for the people with mothers who have passed away
i hope this poems brings you motivation throughout your days
i might not have a mother who's gone
but she has a very bad disease in her muscles
she can barely walk nor barely move
and it's caused me to lose my whole grove
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2015
MS.DENISE SUCH CLASS AND WISE
IS LIKE MY LADY GRIM WHOSE TAKEN MY SOUL BY NO SURPRISE
HER LOOKS ARE MY WEAKNESS
ONCE I LOOK INTO HER EYES
I KNOW LONGER TRY
CAUSE THIS IS WHEN I GIVE HER WHATEVER MONEY CAN BUY

MS.DENISE IS LIKE AN ENDANGERED SPECIES CAUSE HER KIND IS HARD TO FIND
HER FIRE IS SO BRIGHT I MIGHT GO BLIND
MS. DENISE THE WORLD MAY NOT YET NO YOUR NAME
BRING YOUR FIRE INTO MY LIFE AND LET MY AIR ENGUFF YOUR FLAMES

MS. DENISE YOUR MY ADDICTION
ONE DOSE OF YOU CAN SEND ME INTO ANOTHER PLACE
WHEN YOU NEED ME I LL BE RUNNING TO YOU LIKE IM IN A RACE
CAUSE IM NOT ONLY YOUR KING BUT IM ALSO YOUR ACE
I had to write this for the girl im in love with
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
well im sorry i had to leave
but i have to anwser to other needs
so  my goals will suceed
i no she got a heart
and forgive me for tearing it apart
live your life and be strong
be happy and move on
cause at the end you'll see who'll be living long
I hope you be alright
and have a good night
gone and tell your friends cause I know i aint right
but believe me im still different than others
we can be friends there for one another
please dont compare to the bad guy
cause when i was with you i never put a tear inside your eye
just keep living your life
cause im very sure you'll make a person's wife
so enjoy live your life have your fun
and please don't think about this mean thing that I've done
this is already to hard for me to take

therefore this could be my biggest mistake
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
will she be Mexican Latino White, or Black
cool crazy **** or whack
my special one,
who can she be
and would she truly be the one for me
i know alot of us all relate to this
even you ladies who fantasize of the special kiss
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
You got a body like fire
When you're close i feel your heat
You know how to keep man running
Like runners in a track meet

I ll call you my daredevil
Cause when you in control you do different tricks
She works her mouth like a disease
When she goes downlow it drives me sick

Now im no weather man but rainy weather is what i predict
When im inside i feel a storm
I can make your body roar
Imma stretch your body out
Since thats the type of *** you adore

I'll work my tounge like a magnet
Its attracted to your body
And addicted to its taste
Your middle is like the glue and my mouth is the paper it pastes

What more can i say
Your middle is like a water gun
And i love to see it spray
No i dont need to be taught
But how can i stop all these naughty thoughts
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
for a guy who's struggled his whole life
i must say I've done great
though there's day i feel no good
because today another person gone die in the hood

For a guy who ain't barely had stuff
i must admit i found a way
so things wouldn't be so ruff
cause all that i see is a man

thats what i see
as i look into the mirror
i see the man is me
a new world order is what i wanna see

for a guy thats quite shy and barely talks
i still maintain to make friends
even if i'm a hard person to understand
i know i can make it like that was my only plan

for a guy who speaks on change
he only gets judged since people think thats lame
as i sit here and think i shake my head in shame
no body wants to be different it's like everyone wants to be the same

most girls wanna be hoes
most guys wanna be gangbangers and thugs
we should want a new world order
cause them streets ain't no love
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
after all these years of hurt and pain
I ve finally met a person who has made those lost tears drain
I speak upon a woman whose fire heats my spirit
My mind and soul
Thats why i plan to love her in whole
When im feeling down
She always brings me up
Shes like my 4 Leaf clover
Cause when i think of her i feel luck
I write this poem upon a woman who has taken me as hers
So for her Gift is a man she deserves
She understands me more than my own family
And friends
Shes never judged me cause she sees something special in me that no other girl saw
Maybe this is the reason why i ll do anything to make her happy
Cause shes not only helped me but shes also made me better
I say this to the Lord above
To please help me make it to this woman
Whom i truly love
Shes is the best thing ever thats came into my life
And definetly plan on making her my future wife
I speak my words right here today
To motivate you in every way
Cause as long at day the sky is blue
There shall be nobody like you
Had to write this poem for a special girl that came into my life it truly has came from the heart
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
now in days,
every guy wanna become a thugs
Cause when they was broke they saw people got connected to some plugs
And on top of that they start selling drugs
Now in days,
These women becoming hoes
These women becoming thots
These women getting faster
Cause there hormones getting more hot
Especially when they developed quick
Don't you know once you develop
There's a dog out searching for its cat
No I don't only write out poetry
I point out facts
Its up to anybody who reads my messages to get a understand how I feel
Now in days
There's people younger than me that robs and steals
People younger than me talking about they in da mob
Now in days,
These ****** getting popular off these made up *** gangs
Dying cause they think its a game
I'm done speaking
I've preached to them enough
Cause they could do better
And very well
Plus they never went to church
But then pray to god once they in jail
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Once i rise,
i hope i make things better for my mother and brothers
cause God knows we struggled to long
but no matter what happened we stayed strong
even if things have gotta worse for my mother
As your first son i still treat you like any other
Once i rise,
i hope i make a good living for me and my girl
cause when nobody was there when i was down
i had her in my world
Once i rise,
i hope i can make all my hatters mad
cause every since i was younger they tried to make things bad
Once i rise,
i can finally show the world who i truly am
show others who struggle that someone understands
you talking to a guy who grew up with not to many friends
cause people i considered as friends were enemies
that must showed why a lot of them envy me
Once i rise,
i ll finally let you all see
why real,loving,caring,trustworthy,and loyal
are definitions of me
cause even for a guy who was quiet in school
A lot of people still love me as a friend today
and the only reason i unleash these inner thoughts into the world
Cause i feel more of a man today
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm paranoid to wonder when life will end
Will I die alone
Or with family and friends
Is there a chance I ll see the day I ll become a man
Or be tooking away by the lords hands

I'm paranoid to see the Ghost
To become possessed is what I fear the most
I wonder if I ll find my mate
I'm paranoid to see my true fate

I'm paranoid to see true history
Though I wonder why our nations are in misery
At lease were in peace
Instead of war
But when peace has been released
That's when Im paranoid even more

My brother be in And out them streets
I'm paranoid one dat he ll be badly beat
I live a life that's full of drama
Ask karma
Or dharma
Why I'm so paranoid of the disease in my momma

These are the things that put me to tears
And are my biggest fears
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
when your writing non-stop
writing the ink out your pens
or leads out your pencils
then i must confess
have you heard of poetic disease
because i think i've been possessed

when your mind has things flowing
and you know it can't stop
i bet it would be hours until the pencil or pen drops

this is not a real disease
but you can catch this mentaly
and once you do
just imagine all the writing your mind will allow you to

image the thoughts that'll run your mind
image the flow that'll control your mind
when i was first possessed i thought i was crazy
my hands moving non-stop it seemed so amazing

i felt so great
my poems were coming back to back
like music i had a un-controllable flow
and thats a moment i ll never let go

for anyone who has had this disease
tell the world your feelings
your experience
was it good bad or great
did you love it or hate
cause i've never witnessed such a disease that allows us to create
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
like a person who's high
My mind reacts quick
but my thoughts thinks slow
and since my personality is currents in the water
it creates a poetic flow
my poems are addictive
my poetic style is rare
one read will have you shocked
two read will have you stuck
and once you reach three you'll never get enough
my flows are like dreams
cause they'll make yours come true
and if i were your genie
i ll grant your wishes to
my words are soothing
so soothing
when i speak,
you'll be feeling smooth
i would tell you the rest
but i'm not trying turn something good to a mess
My soul is like the wind
you never know when it blows
My name is Louis Haynes
And this is my poetic flow
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
LIKE THE CURRENTS IN OCEANS MY THOUGHTS RUN STRONG
AS THEY WASH UPON MY SAND-LIKE MIND THAT PUSHES ALONG
MY LOVE SUCH PASSION AND FIRE
I CAN JUST FEEL ITS HEAT
WHEN MY RARE PERSONALITY COMBINES IT CREATES SOMETHING SWEET
MY CHARM SUCH ATTRACTION GOT THEM LADIES CLOSING IN AND IM THE MAGNET
OH MY SKIN SUCH DARKNESS LIKE CHOCOLATES AND CANDY
MY FLOW WHICH RUNS AS SMOOTH AS WATERFALLS
MY LOYALTY IS KNOWN AS ONE THE BEST
FROM THE FRIENDS I STILL HAVE TODAY
AND FOR NEW ONES THAT WILL COME NEXT
LOUIS HAYNES IS ME AND YES I'VE BEEN CAUGHT
BUT WHO CAN STOP ME FROM HAVING SUCH POETIC THOUGHTS
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
I guess you gotta be popular for followers
popular for likes
once again i speak of this hatred i cannot fight
we all put our hearts into poetry
yet only the popular people get the likes for what they do

i show people love regardless of how many followers or likes they have
cause i understand that a lot of us wanna be heard
we want the world to know that we are here fighting a battle not yet lost
we post our problems so people can understand that life is no joke
we post about ones we love
from boyfriends girlfriends friends and fam
I only speaking the truth cause thats who i am

we all have the talent to change the world
we all have the talent to be as good as poets like Langston Hughes, Tupac and others as well
im just saying saying it's not the followers and likes that make the poet
only Passion and Desire make real poets
It crazy how we all put ours hearts into our poems and get no feedback
YoungGentleman17 Nov 2014
if shes fought her whole life
been through break-up after next
that shows that us guys only want women for ***
to all of the real women out here i'm on your side
you don't deserve none of the pain you face
and for the ones who hurt there good men
i must say that'll be hard to replace
Mane if we just man up for least
then we wont have to worry about females going gay
or turning into thots
what if someone did our mothers and sisters the same
along with the number of suicides I've seen
it's all just a shame
We tell them we'll be faithful
but then go behind and cheat
trying fix things with ***
then keep the cycle in repeat
We tell them we love them
but can't even settle down with one
Because they say being unfaithful equals fun
for all the girls out here stuck in a heartbreak just hang in there
your sun will shine again
with a good man in your life to begin
and to the guys out here hoeing around
when your older and lonely with no one to hold or kiss
just remembered those hearts you broken in your pass cant be missed
i dont know why we cant show love in might
all our women want is for someone to treat them right
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
LOOK BABY I KNOW IM QUIET AND QUITE SHY
BUT WHEN COMES TO FREAKS IM A DIFFERENT VERSION
I KNOW YOU PROLLY SEE ME AS NON SKILL GUY
ESPECIALLY KNOWING THAT IM A ******

BUT AT THIS POINT TONIGHT I OWN IT
SO LETS SEIZE THE DAY TILL OUR CLOSING  MOMENT
I LL TAKE OUR LOVE DOWN ROMANTIC ROAD
ROSE PEDALS, CANDLES, STRAWBERRIES, WITH CREAM IS MY CODE

BABY YOUR LIKE MY PRIZED POSSESSION AND I LL HAVE YOU SPOILED
COME RELAX WHILE I RUB YOU DOWN WITH THIS OIL
NOW IM NOT SAYING IM NASTY
BUT I PROMISE TO CHERISH ANY LOVER THATS THIS CLASSY

SINCE YOU LOVE YOUR BODY SUCH ADORED
THEN CAN MY LIPS ADORE IT EVEN MORE
IF MY AIR IGNITES YOUR HEAT IN CONTINUOUS LIT
THEN I LL MAKE YOUR CREAM BUST WITH MY BANANA LIKE A  MELTING BANANA SPLIT

CAUSE ONCE IT MELTS YOUR ****** HAS CAME
HATE IS LOST PLEASURE IS REGAINED
SO REMEMBER MY NAME
CAUSE NEXT IM INSIDE I LL LOVE TO FEEL YOUR RAIN

FROM MY NUTS TO MY LIPS
AND IF I EVER FEEL DEHYDRATED I LL TAKE A SIP
YoungGentleman17 May 2015
We all have the ability to shine
Thats why i take whatever is mine
We all shine in different ways
Like coaches who use different plays
Players who have different skills
Shoot even assassins shine when they ****
You see nobody is a loser
We were all made to shine
All you need is good efforts and time
Patience is also a key to shine bright
Cause you cant get rich in one night
So if anyone has ever told you you cant make it
Break it!!!!
Cause if you make every moment yours like i do mines
Then everybody should have the ability to shine
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
I speak upon change
Speak upon those who face pain
Speak on those who are bullied
Fighting battles with diseases
Why
Because I care for you all
I show love to any and everybody
Even those here on hellopoetry

Just because we all live in different places
Doesn't mean we can't encourage each other
Were all sisters and brothers
So why not be there for one another
To those who are feeling down
Somebody love's you
To the one's who lose a person
Just look up
Cause somebody love's you

Poetry love me I even love it back
So I speak my words
To make my fellow followers attached
Not attached to me but words I say
The things I face
Cause we all know we play a role in a world called our place
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
right now our feelings can't maintain
well at least mines
i'm just saying it's messed up how you tell me you love me
tell me you ll be there
tell me one day we'll be married
i just feel you don't care

why you get a new phone and wont me text the old one
that shows you hiding something
that shows you lied
now i'm sittings here along with tears flowing in my eyes
i wonder how you'll feel if i was with someone better
someone more of my type
i bet then then you wouldn't feel right
I loved this girl since middle school school it's messed up how she does me wrong knowing all the good i done for her

somebody tell me what to do i feel lost
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
Sometimes I think About the way she treats me
The way she speaks
I even think. Of times when she doesn't. Reply maybe I'm not her type of guy
Do I care
Yes
Sometimes I feel I'm not blessed
So much mess
Is putting me through a lot of stress
But does she care
No she only thinks of her needs and desires
Sorry baby but that's not the type of heat you use to light my fire
Knowing I hate liers
But you ll lie in my face
Sometimes I wonder did I deserve to be in this place
Sometimes I wonder how life looks through other people's eyes
To see if there struggles are worse than mines
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
Look im feeling a feeling i've never felt
Seeing beauty i've never pictured in mind
Your like the heat that makes my ice melt
You've even turned a cold heart to kind
Mystery woman i dont know Who you are
But love is now something i've been taught and shouldn't miss
I'd wish upon you if i seen a shooting star
Your more special than a first kiss
If your heart were a prison or jail
I'd lock myself in you forever
I wouldn't even have to bail
Because the two of us will be together
Oh mystery woman so cool and grace
Has showed me something i cant replace
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
When i think of a women like you
I start to wonder why im single
Its just when i see the good you do
It gives my heart a tingle
Your like a angel that God has sommoned
And im the man dying for your soul
We even have alot in common
So having you is like a long-time goal
Or a risk im willing to take
I ll be lucky and more likely blessed if i achieve
I feel this will be the hardest choice you ll make
But anythings possible if we believe
I've seen angels but not like this
Please angel come take me and heal me with your kiss
YoungGentleman17 Jan 2015
If we loved each others souls
Would that make us soulmates
If i gave you my love in wholes
Then why must your soul hate
Now im no cupid
Though i feel like i've been hit by his bow
All your exes should feel stupid
For letting something this amazing go
No ones love is perfect
But that doesn't mean we cant come close
With faith it will be worth it
So lets give this our most
Cause no new man will appear upon a coast
So for this new year of us lets toast
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
even when i was judged
even back when i was dissed
i stayed to myself
showed people i didn't care about how they thought of me
that whole time that made me wanna become a man they never be

everyplace i go,
like school, barbershops, parties, and work
i stayed to myself,
not tryna have have to many friends
i heard that brings more drama to your life
is that to hard to understand

see regardless of what they think
regardless of what they done and  tried towards me
those jokes only show one thing in-mature you see

i stayed to myself
to stay out of harms way
to keep away from fake people
because to much popularity can be a danger
so dont worry about me i'd rather walk this world a stranger
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
For the people who judged you
And Ex's that didn't last no longer
The pain they all brought has only made you stronger
For the ups and downs thats crossed your path
We wouldnt know mother nature if we haven't felt her wrath
What makes you weak can you stronger
What makes you stronger makes you better
When a loved one passes away
Only the strongest seak out through the day
When you stay yourself through all the mess we see in life
It shows you are stronger and survive the fight
We as people know that bad is taken over good
But once we as people come together as one
Then watch all the good things our world will have done
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
When hope is given up
when rain has fallen down
when you've lost all luck
just find another way around

when nightmares occur
when things go bad
just pray among evil
next day wont be sad

when you say its all over
lost confidense in all things
given up where lifes left ya
you've witnessed a sunken dream
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
Shot outs to all the lovers that live
The ones who last long and ones that give
To all lovers who have came to a fall
Never give up give it your all
To ending relationships or ones who end up hurt
Stay strong cause something better is coming your way
No he or she wont come the next day
You ll even face more heartbreaks till that person is found
So dont beat yourself up there somewhere around
And they might not be in your city or town
But when you find your perfect person remember to always hold them down
Regardless if it gets ruff or tuff
Real lovers do.t worry about that stuff
Also remember to never have affairs or lust
Cause the key to Love is to always trust
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2015
Come America as i tell a lesson we should all note
First saying on watch out for whom we give our vote
Most politics will tell us all we wanna hear
Yet America is still at it's biggest fear

For the people that we all think to elect
Should first do positive things to earn our respect
"Cause talking is only words" a debate is entertainment to most
So how is America the best Country? When Freedom here is still Lost

All we the people want is a change
Have you seen all the people dying in range
So how will we seek peace? When violence seems to be everyone's key
Yet they'll tell us better days are what we'll see

What we need is a leader role model to others
A person who can unite us as sisters and brothers
A person who puts and end to this war of race
A person who can make America a better place

So which person for president will we all choose
Cause if the wrong person is in charge we all lose
So come america as i tell you something you should note
"The Impact of our freedom is determined by our vote"
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You played me
After all I done
After the money I sent away for you
Did something that your own family wouldn't help you do
And what I get in return
You cuddling with another man
After him hiself said yall were friends
You make out with this guy as well
Mane you both can burn in hell

How could you say you want a guy who nice
And dat guy ain't even right
He got a felony but you still let him in right
I'm hurt inside but you don't know
At least god let the real in you show
Tell me what can he do for you
Without a job
Car and even house
And don't bother tell me what this really about

This situation has put me in rage
She's only 15 and he's 19 in age
Dude your a ******
And it makes her a ****
I don't even wanna be your friend nomore
Telling me you might fall asleep
When I know you lyin
Your gonna sleep with this man
Thinking I'm stupid
If he's what you really want,
He can be your cupid
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
the words i speak will make you feel that i'm teaching
It must the real stuff I say
must be the way i look at life through the day

The words i speak,
will let all know im quite different than others
might be a reason why im judged
can't say i really care
i've been living for 18 years i been known life ain't fair

The words i speak will have you shocked
cause i speak upon power
speak upon school
i even speak upon the wanna be's who think they so cool

The words i speak aren't ordinary
I speak against my mind
fight against my thoughts
they say life is a lesson
i can't tell cause lot's haven't been taught

The words i speak don't mind to be heard
don't mind to be known
until people pay attention,
i guess my words speak for there own

Cause when you talk about changing the world
people then will think your weird or even lame
But when your killing, hoeing, or ****-gin
it's like the whole world knows your name
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
It takes a real man to treat a lady right
You give her love
Affection Attension
Pleasure you do these things
And your bound to be together
Forever

You know she's real when she breaks her back to be in your life
Thats the type of girl I ll be dying to make my wife
A lot of people don't know ehat the power of love can do
But I see a lot of power I as look into you

This woman's work,
Can make a man fall to his knees
Begging her that's she's the answer to his needs
you know she's special when you start to cope
Living a day of love and infinite hope

This woman's work,
Can bring the nation close
Her work can  put a end to crime
This woman was made to shine
And I'm hoping at the end,
This kind of woman will be mine's
This is my poem version of the real song
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
Hello to all poeotry Writers
I welcome you all to this imaginary place
Come join us all and let your thoughts erase
my name is louis tennessee is my state memphis is my town
I can never go a day without writing something down
But I made a lot of poems and imma have fame
See growing up as me you never heard you name

If u show me live I ll show it back
Then maybe my page wilk be packed
To all poem writers your all my family
Not only because we all do the same thing
Pardon me
I just wanna see how respect this poem me
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
Since a white killed a black then we all get mad
But we **** each other daily now that's all just sad
But the person who did it walked away all glad
But it only happened cause the judge was his dad

We still dying over a a color sign and name
Sorry trayvon but your deaths brought none but total shame
Cause we do this each day and each night
And once one die by a white

We call it racism and start up fights
So either way it ain't right
Cause if he died by a black it ll be alright

I'm just being real
This is how I feel
God gave everybody a a time we ll be killed

But I gotta admit trayvon maybe it wasn't your time
Wrong place and wrong time had you victim of the crime
Uts bad to see another brothers been deseased
So last thing I ll say is rest in peace
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I hate to see you face so much
You gotta deal with people
Plus today you were beat an d *****
I know that's to hard to forget and escape

If I was in your city with you
I ll always keep you safe
Cause I guess my feelings have been tooken over by your grace

I hate the fact no justice has been done
So right now your in a battle that's not even won
How could your brother allow them to do what they did
I guess he didn't know what to expect
So tell me how should give him respect

Its bad enough you deal with diabetes
You deal with stress
And this has added on to the rest
So I know your feeling a mess
But hope one day you ll be at your best
So may God bless
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
So i see your doing big things
With even more to come
You've shined like bling
And a couple at there first prom

I must say i was truly speechless
People downed you more than I
Then once you left them all speechless
I had no choice but to also try

If a strong character builds a strong mind
A strong spirit builds a strong heart
Then how is it hard to find nor rewind
Yourself to that perfect start?

If a true personality builds great friends
Then i hope to have mine till the end
If working at a crazy place builds a close connection with other workers there
Then my only reason for working is not only for money but also im around a group of people whom care

Care for each other work great together as a team
Most of us are like family as it seems
Yet there is one lady who's broke the bond
Like a person stealing from funds
You've stolen our trust and there no refunds
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2015
Now im no ****** expert
But it takes no rocket scientist to know what you like
anyone can find that spot
Just like anyone can make your make your body hot
I might be a ****** but i ll put in good endurance
Got your body in good hands like all-state insurance
Making love to a ****** prolly not what you would expect
But if its coming from me you wont regret
I know your thinking i dont have stamina
I dont have skill
But let tonight your answer thats when things get real
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
it's ok to be a ******
it shows your disease free
it shows that one your not ready
or even shows your waiting till the right one shows
but for the people who are ******'s its also a test
cause mostly for ladies
cause a guy will tell you anything to get what we he wants
we all know what that is
but even for guys we know girls have a way to get what they want to
all it takes is some suductivity and a simple dance on you
then in a snap your virginity is all away

some people hate being ******'s
cause most guys say they do it like **** stars
and last longer than batteries
to me if your a ****** dont feel bad
even though our un-****** friends gone make you feel sad
why
cause you get tired of hearing of all there ****** stories knowing you wont have anything to add
i know this cause it happens to me daily
YoungGentleman17 Sep 2014
as i awaken from Heaven
there's this sound
it's no ordinary sound either
but where is it coming from

the sound is loud
but can make a person feel great
the sound is also pure
and will make a person feel calm

a sound of peacefulness
that has me took
legends say it even has a beautiful look
some seen it in person some seen them in books

as i followed the sound
i approached this place
i was shocked by it's beauty
that has approached my face

out of all these years of looking
i still can't believe
that this whole time
waterfalls were the peace of heaven i hadn't seen
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2014
trust
faith
***
these top 3 things make any relationship last
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2015
What happened to my people who stood for each other
We shouldn't wanna **** or harm another
Back then we fought for our rights
Now since we've got freedom
We been fighting for our life
Looked at the news friday
Yet another brothers gone
Lord may his sole rest in piece
And friends and family stay strong
I hate to see the emotion of different family cries
If we stop all this killing
Then no one dies
Gang violence is something we should have forbid
Yet daily i see people teaching this mess to they kids
I understand alot of struggled in the hood
But that doesnt mean we cant overcome to something good
We should want better for ourselves
Yet we settle for the worse
All we ever see is bad
Like we're living in a curse
Im just saying how can our future be better
Over everything we done
But i ll never give up until
The battles finally won
R.I.P to cyle we all know your in better place
I know we all wish better things apon our race
And even if i didn't know you
Alot of people care
Shoot when im looking at this dealth
I see it really aint fair
Well thats black america
Land of the dumb
Land of the shame
And land of the people
Who die over a color sign and name
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
Is it love and affection
Diamond and pearls
Or to be called the most beautiful girl in the world
What is it that ladies want
When we're good to them
Some say we're to weak
When we're bad
They always end up hurt
And I don't speak upon the woman beaters
We all know those guy's are jerks
But what is it that ladies want
For us to stop our cheating
For us to stop our lies
Cause there's nothing more painful hearing than a woman's cry

Admit it every guy should understand
That a ladies tear has the power to bring tears to a man
But what is it that ladies want
For us to open there doors when we go places
Maybe they want more attention from us
They may even want more conversation
More appreciation for the things they do
they might even want more ***
But I really need the anwsers before I move on to next
What is it that ladies want
I really wanna know
Because not knowing this
May allow a lot of danger to show

what is it that ladies want
for us to take care of you while you sick
hold your hands when we walk to places
hold the door for you as well
and hold you in our arms at times when you feel lifes a livig hell
you want us guys to tell you how much we love you
tell you how much we appreciate you
tell you how much you are important to us in this world
that world lady,girl,female,women,and woman it shows power
without yall we are nothing
must guys dont understand how much we need ladies in the world

so what is that ladies want
they want us to be there for them
they want us buy them gifts
to not cheat
or abuse
cause there's nothing more hurtful than a woman's broken heart
God himself created women for a reason
not for guys to dog them
or have *** with anyone he sees

so what is that ladies want
its all in the heart
i mean every guy should know
they just want a person who cares for them
i guarantee you if we love our women like an husband
protect them like an father
then this world wouldn't have so many ******
we wouldn't have so many women commiting suicide
i just want for every woman around the world to know
that somebody understands what you go through
somebody cares
and that somebody is me
I know a lot of guys out here like myself has wondered this
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
when a relationship falls
then we gotta fight
for every wrong we make
it's not to late to make them right

we all know love wont be perfect
at times it won't be great
most of us feel trapped between that one person
and can't escape

some of us can be in love with one person
but have feelings for another
some of us even tell the ones we love lies
and hold the truth cause it only unleashes pain and cries

so what i'm saying is we can do better
i wish we can go back into days when things were good
but every since this new generation has started
most people have fell into the traps of the hood
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