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"untwining" poems
As the beer somehow kept spilling over the edge of the ping-pong table— as its cascading luxury of foam called to mind, for some reason, ruins of imaginary Babylonian gardens and the girls began to unravel with the night, besotted with spume, gradually untwining their spooled effervescence— as our volume rose, and our thoughts clacked against our teeth, the laughter silly— as we unhooked ourselves for a time from the existences we ourselves had stressed, kneading them—and I smelled euphoria— I, half-drunk off something other than beer, turned to my friend and let out: but what do you say to the doomed? Teeth clacking. His eyes heavy at me for having wrenched at this. His eyes fading behind a film of alcohol. His eyes silent. Then his cup to the air, firm, salute-poised. Then his cup to his mouth, quick chug amid clamor of enclosed mirth—small, clanging against walls, girls’ skirts— as if you could only salute, then wash down the aftertaste with imaginary Babylonian gardens.
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Apr 2, 2012
Apr 2, 2012 at 8:20 AM UTC
Aftertaste
I, too, have seen the darkest dark, shining Iridescent like a raven’s feather In the sun. I have felt the untwining Of my mind, stormwracked by psychic weather, And I have tried to laugh it all away Faking that I’m keeping it together. So often the ones we thought were OK The ones who helped us laugh and sing and drink . . . So often the one thing they needed to say Never got said or got said with a wink. Listen closely. Watch closely. It is there: A welling tear can be erased with a blink. I blink, you blink, we all blink; what’s more rare Is the unblinking gaze on both foul and fair.
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May 13, 2015
May 13, 2015 at 1:15 PM UTC
On The Death of Amy Winehouse
Along a trickling stream, there's a hushed whereabouts she likes to routinely gather her thoughts from, before assigning her task to bathing amongst the shadows. Today's reflections vastly withdrew, untwining such musings, as a playful breeze whispered unto her of an unbeknownst admirer's dedication. And so avidly fixed it was upon the arched swell of her lower back, she quite shivered. But be it a pleasurable fear, she allowed him such liberties, and stepped into the light.
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Dec 2, 2019
Dec 2, 2019 at 11:40 AM UTC
Bathsheba
If I have to get over you.. I have too forget about you. And... Our smiles. Our laughs. And... Our tears. Our fears. But that's what I have too do... Just to forget about you... But I can't. No matter how much pain and regret I have. I am still in this untwining bind. The string attached, the chains holding me down. Your a big part of who I am. In the present and hopefully my future. Your the fog in my eyes, the sight I have. My heart was pure, but your welcoming blackness took over. Your the voice in my mind, controlling what I think. Just know I'm on my brink.
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Mar 3, 2014
Mar 3, 2014 at 10:01 AM UTC
Blinded, Unwanted
Hell is not Fire and brimstone Frozen Or sheeted in ice No, Hell is The hollow pain Inside your stomach From days spent staring at the walls It is the panic That sits on your chest Crushing your sternum Under the weight of his absence The ache In the marrow Of your spine As you wake to face Another Mountain Another Monster Another Day The terror of forgetting How all his corners and edges Feel beneath your finger tips Or how the constellations Glittered in the cerulean night Of his eye Hell is The fear that All the threads holding you together Woven like tapestry Will fray And fall apart The thought Of your souls untwining Pulled and picked apart By time Distance And silence
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Jul 17, 2014
Jul 17, 2014 at 11:57 AM UTC
The Tenth Circle
there is no good in goodbyes, nor the rendition of the universe in who comes and goes, when the lights have dimmed and I close my eyes, I venture a seemingly lonely path when the cold wind blows, there are no memories easily disposed, from a soul who made me love my own, for whom now may be the subject of my prose. we savored the view of the sunrise, and as the sun sets to dripping polychromatic skies, I realized my soul was tethered with yours, filled with a beautiful, dangerous, and impeccable force, when words so widely known fail to express, music and poetry were our language, philosophizing life, death and even happiness we begin to venture the chaos of our minds like a sage. when the old wounds are pressed down to reopen, and apologies begin to slice like a knife, a sweet misery for an aching soul to resort to a pen, weeping for time to heal what reason cannot. the sunset is over, and as the darkness engulf us I quietly cry and smile, our hands untwining with such understanding that maybe this too, would pass but how do we know when goodbyes become a new beginning? IA
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May 20, 2020
May 20, 2020 at 4:07 AM UTC
untethered soul