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I am lost in the forest
        Of your hair,
You sleep as the dream awakens,
        Darkness turns to light

The sun dawns over you,
               Over me,
   The day gives birth to us.
Couple of astral doors
Duplicate diamond cores
Lovelore progenitors
Essence of evermore

Smoldering passion wraiths
Burgeoning ashen faith
Conveying eternity's weight
Resounding mystery slate
the only way that he could say bye
buying a red rose and watching it die
dying to find some other way
weighing his options to live another day

he couldn't help but to feel like a heel
healing was hard and the pain was real
reality soaked him like torrential rains
reigning over his will to remain

(I am trying to get back to following the ones who follow me, or take interest in my writing. The best way to "**** out" was to unfollow all, and then look at the list of my followers. I hate to be that way, but i also hate to see the ones who unfollwed me on my "home" page. Please bear with me, because it will only allow me to follow so many people a day apparently.)
Homophone must be used as last word in first line and third line, and their homophones should be used as the first word in the second and fourth lines.
inverted purpose, a hurting version
verses for this urban exertion
first curse, the burdened dispersion
unworthy service of incursion

perverted circus, a working aversion
reversing their verbal coercion
the first thirst is the verse's assertion
immersed in an urgent excursion
I reposted this because i got a message saying that i don't write poetry. They said that poetry is all about metaphors and imagery. Well, for me it is about emotion, rhymes, and wordplay. Also, alliterations have been done over and over, but not inner alliteration. Here, i worked with the "er" sound.
Thoughts erupt in the night
calling me and it's daring
To relive those days when
I miss your smile, I miss your eyes,
And now we're out of time
What would it take for you to look at me like you used to
because you don't anymore

The clock strikes two and I'm longing for you
Where have you gone?
I'm staring at the phone so alone
With my heart beating on its own

I think I'll always love you,
No,
I know I'll always love you

The clock strikes three
It's too late for me
Well, it hurts so bad this time
Staring at the phone all I know
Is that is what I hold

The clock strikes four
I can't take anymore
It feels so real this time
Staring at the phone all it brings
Are tears but then rings

And when we finally say "hello"
It brings me back to all I know
I'm sorry love, I'm coming home

Where I can hear you breathe
Back to what I need
You,
Because your heart is home to me
Lord...
Take me instead!
Spare her,
From grasp of dead...
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