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"overburdening" poems
(seep yourself to leak away) all reveals are feints; I take you right but I am moving left, always left, then left again when I turn the faucet of me on, brown, rusty pipe water comes out, never turning clear, even if the flow went on for a millennium someone traveller passerby reads my excellent explicit illicit words, with kind sweetness observes a valid conclusion: Poems take.a lot out of you correct+wrong not take, give they are the slow seepage of my overburdening which is yes, yes, I know, all relative, but perspective is a sometime summer thing, and all the springtime streets filled with filthy frozen slush having  come from some rusty water leakage, never turning clear no matter how long the street runs away from you so you take yourself to give away, seeping and leaking ah words; so useful and so inadequate crushed petals from the Tree of Life you ask me If I have read my brother, the prophet-poet Jeremiah? *The heart is deceitful above all things and beyond cure. Who can understand it?* *When your words came, I ate them; they were my joy and my heart's delight* *Then the Lord reached out his hand unto my mouth and said, "I have put my words in your mouth."* these are those words
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Apr 6, 2018
Apr 6, 2018 at 3:25 PM UTC
Seepage (seep yourself to leak away)
I just need a closure A real reason why you came and left Did you come to carve me deeper ? Cause all the excavation work has left me hollow With deep scars and traces of overburdening Or did you come to me for your benefit ? Cause now my 'friends' are slowly slithering to you Or maybe... You came just for entertainment And now the movie has ended And you've left without any comments or suggestions
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Jan 8, 2019
Jan 8, 2019 at 11:31 PM UTC
Why
"Lost" , "Direction" - contradicting? Of course yes! Truly depicts her state of mind constantly asking this or that? Not sure if things are wrong or she is deliberately picking up rags The thoughts are overburdening and she is buried under the stack Standing on the edge this time she wants to jump and not step back
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Jun 18, 2015
Jun 18, 2015 at 12:06 AM UTC
The Lost Direction
Your ghost haunts me daily It looms over my head Fills me to my feet Overburdening and overflowing Melancholic love Consuming A smile would give life to an apparition A moment in your eyes One moment before the rest A touch can soothe the burns A moment lost in caress One moment before the rest The spirit fades into memory And you in its place I lay down my arms I prostrate at your feet My fears laid open before you One moment before the rest
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Dec 3, 2015
Dec 3, 2015 at 12:27 AM UTC
You haunt me
Yes you’ve lost your mind trying every possible way and sometimes the impossible. Overburdening me with obstacles in every f* corner but I am indestructible. Unaffected by your vicious plans untouchable leave me be , is that really so horrible. Can’t you see the brightness in my eyes or the music in my heart yes remarkable. And yet you insist to reflect your shallow soul and I will reflect mine unpredictable. Neither you nor I wanted this but you chose to choke on your own blood bubble. Take a fist on your sleepy eyes to wake up and remember I warned you uncountable. Blackness takes control now with open red eyes. Can you see the new me no longer humble. Right and wrong are difficult to know in this word but I will never be inconsolable. Eat now my destruction fury and hate till you suffocate till you endlessly mumble Kiss my indecisive a** crack and in pain tumble. Your heart as mine will crumble. Me is the ultimate solution. Take a closer look to my soul and problems will be simple
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Jun 8, 2025
Jun 8, 2025 at 9:56 AM UTC
You can't break me