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"comos" poems
This isn't your mother's dance. The wooden clave seduces the naive   into suave arms of the night. Quick quick slow exalts wooden caderas and untames silky locks. Wrinkled hands caress the caras of clumsy coquetas. In the name of the dance, vestidos apretados replace pants, which men outgrow, steeling blue eyes in rusty miradas. Mirandla. *Mira la guera, como se toca, como se mueve, comos se salta el vestido suyo.* Mirandlo. *Look at him, how he touches me, how he swings me, how his feet mock me.* Mirandnos Ella me quiere. We are JUST dancing. Ayyy, como me pega. We're close, but Salsa is intimate. Oooh mami... Does he think it's more than a dance? quick quick slow, quick quick slow, quick quick slow, quicK quiCK quICK qUICK  QUICK... ...silence. they shake hands, and thank each other for the dance.
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Jul 27, 2014
Jul 27, 2014 at 3:23 PM UTC
Salsa cynic
When I looketh into Mine reyna's Asiatic telescope marble's I canst seeith, all of God's creation; And all the time I seeith Shooting stars Passeth by As the comos Is full Of life. ©Brandon nagley ©Lonesome poet's poetry. ©Earl Jane dedication
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Aug 9, 2015
Aug 9, 2015 at 5:12 PM UTC
Her asiatic telescope marble's
There he stands. He stands where the crows refuse to land and the tumbleweed tumble around. Where green is a foreign concept to the flora that rises from the ashen ground and the whole field has the atmosphere of a dead place, forgotten by time. He stands like a scarecrow that has outgrown it's post Where most would fall, he stands tall, like a lamp post, that provides no light at all. His expression is aloof, but not in an oblivious way. As if to say that his stoic-ness portrays a tortured wisdom that makes his knowledge look more alike to a ball and chain than a virtue or asset. His composure is limp as if the glue that bands him together is weeping away and the heavens push down upon him with both hands. His palms are loose, his shoulders are sails that he no longer flies. His hair hangs loose and grey, framing dead and bloodshot eyes. His jaw hangs but his lips remain tightly knit, never to part and split their seams lest you learn anything at all from him. He has no jouyous thing to share with you. No pleasant memories that he would care to cast upon the wall like the beam of a film reel. The insights he has to teach the world are ones that would be massly rejected out of repulsion or denial. You gain nothing from letting this man, most vile, teach you about the world or society or anything likewise. You lose something instead. You lose the peace of mind that you take for granted as you go about your daily grind. You lose your ignorance, but only by using it as the altar upon which to sacrifice your bliss. He learned much and he certainly learned this. He eventually started to learn about the things that matter and by consequence he learned that in credence with them, his life was a lie by comparison. He learned that if we are woven by the spinners of the comos than we will al be found threadbare. And so, by lack of care, he pas payed the toll. Filling the spaces of his mind, and emptying the contents of his soul. He is the Hollow Man. He stands far from us in his distant field knowing well that such a mind is a much more dangerous weapon to wield. If you see him whilst on your way, at least trust me when I say, that you do yourself a service by staying far, far away.
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Aug 11, 2014
Aug 11, 2014 at 8:39 PM UTC
The Hollow Man
There he stands. He stands where the crows refuse to land and the tumbleweed tumble around. Where green is a foreign concept to the flora that rises from the ashen ground and the whole field has the atmosphere of a dead place, forgotten by time. He stands like a scarecrow that has outgrown it's post Where most would fall, he stands tall, like a lamp post, that provides no light at all. His expression is aloof, but not in an oblivious way. As if to say that his stoic-ness portrays a tortured wisdom that makes his knowledge look more alike to a ball and chain than a virtue or asset. His composure is limp as if the glue that bands him together is weeping away and the heavens push down upon him with both hands. His palms are loose, his shoulders are sails that he no longer flies. His hair hangs loose and grey, framing dead and bloodshot eyes. His jaw hangs but his lips remain tightly knit, never to part and split their seams lest you learn anything at all from him. He has no jouyous thing to share with you. No pleasant memories that he would care to cast upon the wall like the beam of a film reel. The insights he has to teach the world are ones that would be massly rejected out of repulsion or denial. You gain nothing from letting this man, most vile, teach you about the world or society or anything likewise. You lose something instead. You lose the peace of mind that you take for granted as you go about your daily grind. You lose your ignorance, but only by using it as the altar upon which to sacrifice your bliss. He learned much and he certainly learned this. He eventually started to learn about the things that matter and by consequence he learned that in credence with them, his life was a lie by comparison. He learned that if we are woven by the spinners of the comos than we will al be found threadbare. And so, by lack of care, he pas payed the toll. Filling the spaces of his mind, and emptying the contents of his soul. He is the Hollow Man. He stands far from us in his distant field knowing well that such a mind is a much more dangerous weapon to wield. If you see him whilst on your way, at least trust me when I say, that you do yourself a service by staying far, far away.
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"eres tentaciones en un mundo de limitaciones, has convertido mi calma en mi mas terrible anhelo,   en tan solo pestañear te veo sobre mi cuerpo, al dormir veo comos tu manos acaricia mi cabello y rosan mis senos, sobrellenaste las ansias en mi, y ahora, no sabre como derramarla en ti."
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Jan 9, 2015
Jan 9, 2015 at 3:23 PM UTC
Terrible tentación