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Poems
Apr 2014
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Emotions are like a vast ocean;
there are small, large currents
You're the largest current,
the largest tidal wave i experience,
in the deep depths of my tummy
Your scent, i can smell it
Those waves knock me over,
leaving me gasping for air
Your bright eyes, they're beautiful
The currents pull me from below,
i can't breathe
Walking past you,
you swept me off my feet
I'm now drowning,
in the large endless sea
"Maybe it wasn't meant to be,"
You walked away from me,
it meant truly nothing to you
The waves engulfed me
I'm sinking,
my limp body within your very currents
They said emotions are like a vast ocean,
you were the whole **** sea.
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