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Mahogany Eyes

I will forever remember

Those beautiful deep brown eyes

That you thought were so plain.

But darling, you could not see:

how could you possibly see?

The way they shined in the sun

breathtaking hues of mahogany

Melting into golden rays

Circling an eclipse

your “plain brown eyes”

truly aren’t plain at all

they are a stunning mixture

of every color known to man

The most beautiful sunset on earth.

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Written by
Eve-S
21 / F
Published
Apr 11, 2018
Lines·Words
14·70
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Your eyes are the most vivid memory I have of you, even after all of these months. You always used to call your eyes "boring and plain" and even called them **** brown." But to me, your eyes were the most beautiful color I've ever seen. You know when you mix a bunch of colors together and it all turns brown? Thats how I viewed your eyes... The deep brown was just a mixture of everything you could offer the world.

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#eyes#brown#heartbreak#beauty#love#describing#brokenheart#memory#forever#browneyes
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