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They say Hello Poetry is biased,
Some get lots of reviews,
Some don't although their poetry is as good,
Some poems trend with 6.4k likes and gets a Sun,
Whilst others are overlooked.
I understand you repost a lot of poems and you build a community that gives you many likes and comments,
For me writing poetry is to make me happy or deter from being sad,
Sometimes I write one of the best poems and I get only two likes,
It's okay for me,
NEVER MIND,
The most important thing is writing that poem made me happy,
It satisfied me and made me complete,
Everybody has different style, taste and likes,
But, I try to analyse where I have gone wrong.
11/9/2020
 Sep 2019 Eva Luna
Ken Pepiton
I chewed the brownie slowly,
delicately
scraping every crumb stuck in
sticky-ifity on Carmelly crudesunshine

flowing from the wound in my gut

what
hapt,

in the middle of a how,
so this is now
okeh
this is what remains
after ever starts
every time,

goofiest kind of time you can imagine

and we are here,
today, as long as it is called today;

perfectly empowered once patience has done
her perfect werx, ah, the things concerning you,

as it were, had I ever been you, in a sense,
those were promised perfection,

so, once more, wait and see. Look around
find idle verbs and spark them to life

with your tongue. Sing. Taste the song.

Brownie crumbs. All this is is brownie crumbs
come to mind to make a case

for sugars and spices and other niceties we
may recall at will,

with a wink.
Some days stay good
 Sep 2019 Eva Luna
Maxwell Clouse
Perhaps I am strange.
But
I know life is short,
so
I'll live out my life
like it isn't falling apart.
I'll smile and breathe
until I cannot,
and
I'll say that it's fine,
until my heart stops
 Aug 2019 Eva Luna
The Non-Poet
life is like
when you're
a little kid
and you
discover that
there is more
than twenty-four
crayons in the box
that there is
the possibility
of forty-eight colors
of sixty-four
of one-hundred and twenty
that there are
so many shades
of love and anger and peace and despair
and absolute bliss
and the ability
to express them all
are now
in the palm
of your hand

life is
colorful
beautiful
thought-provoking
lovely
soulful
heartbreak­ing
inspiring
and absolutely wonderful

every day is
a new sunrise
a new chance
to transform into
the butterfly you
want to be

go out there
and change the world, kid
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