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Xico

**Outside the weather is cold

Wind blows like a freezer

Through the walls it enters

It permeates my lonely soul

Devoid of whom I love

**

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Written by
ovc
Mexican
Published
Dec 9, 2017
Lines·Words
6·26
Notes

Another of my 5-5 poems that I call Xicos.

5 words across, 5 lines total. These depict nature, usually in the first 2 sentences, and love, usually the last two sentences.

I don't like that second line, mainly because of the word "freezer".

I guess you could say I'm going through some heartache, the love type. Some things we can't help, can't we?

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#xico#love#lonely#melancholy#wind#soul#romantic#unrequited#nature#cold
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