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Viseract
Poems
Jun 2016
A Pit Called Hell
A boy and a girl
With a story to tell
About love, and lust
And a pit called Hell
He was young
First year in high school
He didn’t talk a lot
But was still told to shut up
He’d wander the yard
Head down and hands too
Sometimes he’d get lucky
And nothing’s what they’d do
But at times it never died
No matter how hard he tried
To fix all these problems
He just couldn’t solve ‘em
His friends never stayed
They’d leave or they’d fade
As time carried on
He couldn’t stay strong
That’s when he saw her
From his hiding corner
He happened to glance
And thought he could take a chance
He said “hey what’s your name?”
The introduction game
A game he’d never played
Yet still he would stay
From then on they talked
They laughed as they walked
Tell stories, and sing
Couldn’t believe this was happening
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He fell for her
As you would expect
Her eyes and her hair
But love isn’t fair
She left him alone,
Cold and full of sorrow
Said he had changed
But he hadn’t one bit
Said she was wrong
To put her trust into him
He started to talk
But couldn’t begin
She turned and she left
Didn’t know what to do next
The one he cared for most
Just gone, just gone…
And so, he fell
From the heavens to hell
The impact broke his heart
And the demons tore him apart
And now she cries
Been a while since he died
He took his own life
Didn’t know what to live for
Anymore
I was just chilling out when I thought of this. started to write and here it is, hope you enjoy
#love
#hell
#girl
#death
#die
#lust
#boy
#demons
#school
#pit
Written by
Viseract
23/Trans Female/Adelaide
(23/Trans Female/Adelaide)
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