Hey whats up everyone?
So I'd like to start the new year off with some news that I'm sure will make a lot of you happy (and hopefully some of you sad. But not the fakers or the posers)
I'm giving up on hellopoetry, in the few years of having an account I have gained nothing from this site but a legion of undead fangirls and lifelong friends who live too far away. I joined this site because I wanted to get honest feedback on my work, and in fact I often ask for feedback, but i never get it. And that upsets me.
No one reads my work anymore anyways (except those friends that i mentioned before, and I can just send them my work in private anyways), so whats the point in posting?
Exactly there isn't a point.
Which is why as I said I'm giving up on this site.
I'll still keep my account, but I will no longer be posting anything.
Feel free to message me whenever, in fact who knows maybe I'll message you. (probably not though)

And with that I say Goodbye

She's the smart, popular type
The one that everyone likes
Sadly that includes me
And I know i never had a chance
Cause when I asked "Do you want to hold hands?"
She just laughed and slapped my hand away
Cause she doesn't take me seriously

I say I want to talk to you about my problems
You say sure lets talk, lets get this over and done with
But when all's said and done
You're the one having fun
I'm the one who's in tears
Cause you don't care about my fears
So I guess you don't take me seriously

I went to a doctor,  she said "You're not sick"
I talked to my friends,  they said "Stop being such a ****"
I spoke to my parents,  they said "You're such an arrogant *****"
I asked all my relatives, they said "Just stay where you belong"
I questioned my teachers, they said "We've never gotten along"
I screamed at the mirror "What did I do that was so wrong"?!
Cause no one takes me seriously

Yes you can say no.

I thought you a star
Now I'm not sure what you are
A satellite looks too  similar
When viewing it from afar

According to Cecil
I'm such a ****
More than slightly psychotic
Borderline *****

Cause I'm such a liar
Turn your back for a second
And I'll burn you like fire

Yeah cause according to Cecil
I'm just so rude
I'll dampen the mood
With my antisocial attitude

Don't touch me, I bite
Always looking for a fight
So don't get caught in my sight

Yeah cause according to Cecil
I ruin the art of writing
My works just not exciting
So terrible, that its frightening

Just so arrogant
Not a true artist, its apparent
Not to mention I've got no talent

Yeah  cause according to Cecil
I'm just not nice
As annoying as head lice
Cold as ice

I've got no friends,  can't you see
Cause there's so much wrong with me

And if you can see it all after only knowing me for an hour
Then it must all be true
More power to you
My 'friend' Cecil Miller.

Hi fans.
I don't know a lot of you (by a lot I mean like 5 or so of you, cause I don't have a lot of fans, which is why I appreciate every one of them), which ***** cause I love my fans.
So if you have the time send me a message, I wanna be friends. I promise I'm not a creep, as far as I know.

Hey I know a lot of you guys won't care but for those of you that do, I have something to say.
I've been thinking about this for a while and now I've made my choice.  I'm taking a break from writing for a while. For no reason other than cause i feel like my heart isn't really in it anymore,  I'm sick of the cheesy tacky poems and songs I've been writing,  so yeah... I really want to make a difference with my writing and that's not gonna happen right now.
I need to take some time to rediscover my inspiration, my passion, and my definition of love. And yes I know I have promised many people I'd write for them, but truth is I just can't handle it all right now.

So go on put your party hats on and start the celebrations, cause for a while you won't see me posting anything ("quit forever" you say, well no, I just need time to think and rediscover all that stuff I mentioned before)
I'll catch you later, message me sometime or whatever, "Call Me Maybe".

From Me, Him and Her.
To my misunderstood fans and my Dark Alliance of Magikarp

I'm not going to waste my life waiting for you to come back
So I'll give you 7 days

7 days is all you'll have left
Til I move on without you

6 days left
And I'm hoping for a sign
A single simple message
Telling me your fine

5 days left
And I want you to know
I be at our meeting place
So I really hope you'll show

4 Days Left
And now I think you really hate me
And guessing that you now regret
The time you said you'd date me

3 days left
And I'm deleting all our photos
They're gone forever, but I don't mind
Down the drain they go

2 days left
And the sadness is all gone
Should've called me back when I gave a ****
But you didn't, so I guess we're done

1 day left
And I'm happy and I'm smiling
You'll be out of my life soon
Cause I'm done caring

I said "Hey
What are you doing today"
She replied "Don't know
Gotta go"
And that's all she said
To me

Cause it just seems like
You don't want to talk to me no more.....
So you just say goodbye

Hey please, just give me the time of day
I don't give a **** what the hell you say
Just talk to me
Ask me how I'm doing
And tell me how your days been
Juet talk to meeeeeee
Just talk to me

I see you walking around
Your hand's in his
But I say I don't mind
Cause I don't want to see this..
****

Cause while you're talkin to him
You could be talking to me
But you don't care...
You're hanging off every word that he says

Hey please, lets just sit and chat
Yeah yeah, lets talk about your cat...
But you say no
I've found someone better to talk to
So lets just leave it at that

You can't tell
But my heart is breakin
Yeah yeah, my hands are shaking
I really wish that I was faking
But I'm not...
Cause you don't wanna talk to me

I want to know what's bad about my writing.
I never get criticism,  and that's boring.
I want to know what people really think.
So let me know.

I flipped a coin
My choice was wrong
I've hurt you now
And that was wrong

Cause I could see
Why you might love me
But I'm not as nice as you think

Cause I excel at hurting feelings
And I know that's not a good thing
But its better than playing with your heart

I flipped a coin
I missed my chance
You're sweet and you should know it
I wish I hadn't rejected your advance

I had your heart
And I tore it apart
I ruined a perfect fantasy
Of you and me

I flipped a coin
I treated you wrong
And nothing will make up for it
...not even this song

I shouldn't have flipped a coin
I should have let my heart make the choice
Cause maybe I could love you

But the truth of it all
Is I'll never deserve you...

When the hell did all my friends get so popular?
And when did I get left behind?

I'm sure that someone else has said this before but whatever I'll say it anyways.

People don't get to choose what they look like (with few exceptions such as plastic surgery, and even then. ..) so what right do we really have to say that a person is hot, beautiful,  pretty,  cute, ugly or average,  based on how we view their ****** appearance.  Fall in love with one's personality and what's hidden beyond their appearance.
Or don't, whichever right, I mean who the hell am I to tell you how to live.

Hey dudes and dudettes. So I haven't been on here in a while so  If you want me to check out anything that you've posted and I've missed, then let me know.

There's nothing wrong with you people
There's nothing wrong with anyone (with few exception like criminal tendencies, sorry I overthink a lot of things.)
Why do you all refuse to see that?

Why is it always the pretty (not the good-looking but the pretty) people that feel they are worthless?

Hey does anyone want me to read anything of their's?

Seems I'm unintentionally hurting everyone today
I'm sorry guys (and girls) it wasn't meant that way
In some cases its cause you pushed me
I'm not that great a guy, now do you see
In some cases I said it not meaning to be rude
But it seems that I had the wrong attitude
In some case it's because I'm afraid to trust you
Even though I have no reason not to
I'd give up my heart just to take it all back
But its impossible, so I'll let my vision fade to black
I'm sad about it now
And I wish I knew how
To tell all of you that...

But what does make a poem 'good'?
I want to know what people's opinions on that question are.

Advertisement
Who the hell cares.
Why is it everywhere.

“Is it really living if someone else is pulling the strings”?
Karl Franssen

"Why would I want to be crazy, you might ask, well its because crazy people get to see a world, a world different than the one we see. You have to really understand that to come to question the world in the way someone that is crazy might."

Karl Franssen

(to the tune of Do You Wanna Build a Snowman)

"Do you wanna build a snowman?

No I can't do it today.

The snows just not good enough

I can't do that

Lets try another day

Cause nows just not a good day

So lets try to build a snowman

some other day.

And on that day we'll build a snowman

Someday we'll build a snowman."

I don't want to only see things if they're popular...
So show me something else.

I know you love cheesy love songs
So here’s one for you my dear
You know who you are
So there’s no need to fear
How do you like it so far?

Cause girl you’re the reason that the sun shines
And why the flowers come out in spring
I don’t mind if you’re mine
But you’re the reason that I sing

Cause the first time I saw you
I knew it was love at first sight
Come on I know you feel it too
So move closer I won’t bite

You know you’ll always be my Hallmark Girl
And I’ll write you a proper song someday
I promise…

Say Sorry
*I'm so sorry that I can't help you

Say Sorry
*Sorry I'm so socially awkward

Is there something wrong with me if I DON'T WANT TO READ LOADS OF REPOSTED POETRY?

My poem, my poem it's a poem about my poem.

Life happens
You can’t stop it
From doing what it does
I know you know this
So it’s hopeless
To try to change it up

[Chorus]
Cause when everyday
People die
People cry
People live
And they forgive
Life for what it does

"Why does everything bad
Always have to happen to them"

I wish I could’ve known them
So I could tell them that they’re worth it
But I didn’t know them
I wish I could’ve shown them
That every life is worth living
But I couldn’t show them

[Chorus]

But it’s hard to understand
Them and their emotions
And it’s hard to understand
Why this is happening to them
When will it get better for them
Or will it never
It’s never really made sense to me

Everyday people die
And people cry
So don’t make yourself die
And leave us to cry
Don’t bring your death upon yourself
Just let life bring you to the end

It was a dark stormy night on a rock and I was as cool as a fox in socks on block were there was a wood cutter eating a log in lego land of the box in the loch ness ****.

You want a happy memory
I'll tell you now there's no such thing
Maybe we should all just go...








*die

Another new day
Time to put that mask back on and act like everythings ok.

Life is just full of smiles and hopes and dreams
**Being crushed over and over again

Let's not hide ourselves away anymore
(If only it were that simple)

To write a ten word poem, I don't know how

Reading tales about
Damsels in distress
Oh will I ever find my princess
Or will I just give in and believe
That there’s no happiness for me
In this land, in this world, on this earth
No it can’t be true

[Chorus]
There’s no princesses in the world
They’re all trapped in books
Or inside my head
Oh why wasn’t I told
Now all my fantasies, all my hopes and dreams
Are dead

Let’s all dance around badly
Run around madly
Til we find what we’re hoping to find

But all my fairy tale
Fantasies
Are dead to me
Specifically because

[Chorus]

Don’t know where to go
Cause no one’s here with me at all
But I don’t wanna slip
I don’t wanna slide
I don’t wanna fall
I just want to hide

I don’t wanna slip
I don’t wanna break
I don’t wanna fall in love again
Be-cause

[Chorus]

So stop lying to me
I know what I see
And what I see is this

There’s no princesses in the world
No there’s no princesses
Nor knights or ladies fair
So I don’t care
Because I know that you don’t exist

No there’s no princesses
So don’t try to tell me there is
Cause if I know one thing
It’s this

There’s no hope or dreams
Just sadness it seems
That’s how it looks to be
So please don’t read out my story
Because I know how it ends
And there’s no happy ending for me…

Find Inspiration in unique places

2. Write about what inspires you

3.Judge your work

4.But don't take your work too seriously

5. No matter what, don't ever get rid of your work
and always love what you're doing.

Running into old friends
Whose cheeks are always rosie
Talking about life gets me thinking
So I supposie
That I should write a little about
How special you are

I remember all the times you were there for me
Because you always were
I remember only good times
Because there aren't any bad times
I remember all those laugh we shared
And the tears that showed we cared
I remember how you smiled, all the death glares too
But most of all just always remember
How much we all love you...

Never before have I faced such a formidable foe as Adobe Photoshop
I give in, it has bested me.
Oh **** it, I need to make this rhyme.
Holy komodo dragons, a bee...

You're ransacking my Batman.