many times, in dreams (or what seems like dreams, structures of poems in different formats float in my brain. Sometimes I remember them, this is that one that I did remember.
this reflects the obvious, that "man" was the first error, and then that was followed by a "woman" . Or perhaps it was the "snake". Or perhaps this reflects my cynicism of the planet called earth
an early '90s minimal haiku, published in Modern Haiku. The ku clearly reflects the zen mode and illustrates the net effect or results of unjustified anger.
one Sunday I had a call from Robert Spiess (Modern Haiku) who enjoyed this minimal to the point of calling me about it. I never forgot the call or the $1.00 I received for it.
