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new metaphors, please

by @r-saba

wondering how you win at love do you have to wait until it's over? what's the victory then in losing it? somebody needs to think of some new metaphors, because all these tired old scratched-up symbols lead to dead ends forget about falling, stop calling it an end, stop calling it a means just stop calling it anything but love let it describe itself, let it climb up its own legs, let it be what you will it, what you feel it to be let it be what you feel can't the victory just be the feeling of holding on and staying? losing, falling, calling it anything but plain old groundbreaking love is what it really is
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Written by
r-saba
Canadian
Published
Apr 17, 2014
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2m
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because seriously, enough with the melodrama

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#love#metaphor#words#loss#happiness#falling#feeling#describe#losing#winning#victory#symbol
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