...withdrawing criticism... ...that’s all it takes... ...without shame... ...of surrender...
...open the door... ...feel the longing... ...take the brave step...
...with you unafraid... ...all my intricate defences... ...would be taken away...
An experiment: pick a book, open it at a random page, close your eyes and see where your finger lands. Repeat steps two through four until the novelty wears off. Shuffle and compose. Omit the unintelligible. ;)
‘It starts off like climbing a tree or solving a puzzle - poetry, if nothing else, is just fun to write.’ - Criss Jami, Killosophy