Jan 2018
Help me now,
In my time of need,
Lagging behind,
I am out of speed.
Don't let me fall,
Into the deep blue,
Catch me, I'm fainting,
Depending on you.
My stomach is turning,
Around and around,
Over and over,
Up and then down.
Make me smile,
I can't on my own,
I need help living,
Can't do this alone.
In my time of need,
Lagging behind,
I am out of speed.
Don't let me fall,
Into the deep blue,
Catch me, I'm fainting,
Depending on you.
My stomach is turning,
Around and around,
Over and over,
Up and then down.
Make me smile,
I can't on my own,
I need help living,
Can't do this alone.
This is a poem I wrote back in middle school that i revised. Even after fixing it still is amateur. Thoughts?
