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Incorporeal oath, depart

by Niitiuu

Predatory traces remain amongst the spread soot The ashes that bore the incentive of a smile A lonely ribbon flew along the scene - it was caught; Grasped by the canids of a desperate pastime. "Papa, can you hear me?" "I will be holding the candles today" "You have returned at last..." "... but why did you leave again?" Muffled screams, stinging pain, faint echoing of what remains, The vitality that lingered in the sun, Disappeared, in its stern gleam. Trails of anguish resonate through the field, a grand feast Clotted tufts, sent with grief, are held and spread over the field My dearest father, When the light shone down and revealed its deceit, A realm that struck me headfirst, belittling me, As you dance with the wind, I cry for an eternity. The hounds of decay sing a melody, so daunting, intimidating tones In deafening ecstasy, the games the shepherds play, The ceasing of a prosperous juvenescence, killing feisty innocence. In a loud cascade, the scenery deteriorates Lush wisps of fire, dulled petals flourish in the wind Dim embers, odoriferous leaves that dwindle amongst the feet In anger they remained at the efflorescent poppies The putrid grave that yielded The warmth of the snow felt enticing, exciting The numbed senses within the blank slate. "I will be home tonight" "Crying in the darkness" "For my dearest smile..." "... exists no more."
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Written by
Niitiuu
21
Published
Dec 28, 2017
Time
2m
Notes

28/12

This poem is to be read after "Homecoming, incorporeal oath".

https://hellopoetry.com/poem/2277180/homecoming-incorporeal-oath/

anger games loud pain sing vitality eternity smile papa ribbon

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