Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

hierarchy

Where does hierarchy begin?

    Is it where the strong is on top,

and the weak step upon?

 

Where does your dignity be placed?

   Is it where your always be the winner,

no matter what, even it has bitter taste.

 

Is SURVIVAL really that cruel?

That some of us are just a tool,

a fool for the strong to be cool.

 

No, it can't be that bad

yet reality is quite sad.

 

Despite our hard beginnings

Life still is beautiful

that losing isn't everything.

 

*Dignity is placed -

where you respect yourself the most

and Hierarchy isn't important

to where your love is...*

 

© Pax

Request permission to use this poem
Written by
pax
Published
Mar 26, 2017
Lines·Words
19·104
Notes

yeH! a new poem, a longer one and it's been long i haven't rhyme like this. a bit hard when you have limited vocab, my apologies for its simplicity and many thanks for reading.

Tags
#love#life#beautiful#reality#survival#strong#losing#dignity#hierarchy#pax
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell pax how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write